Date: Mar 14, 2012 04:05 am Title: Chapter 60
I was so scared that Michael would think Ana's just a fan and faked her amnesia, !!!
But fur luck Michael didnt believe Broke :) hahaha and the end was funny ^^
I hope this story will not end soon because I'M IN LOVE <3 As I a^saw on my e-mail account " when memories are gone is updated " i sat there and said YES !! :D
hahahah <3
Author's Response:
He loves her too much now to think this. It's too late for making him believe this kind of things.
I still didn't plan the end of this story...I have a lot more chapters ready and I really don't know when and how it will ends...So don't worry sweety.
L.O.V.E
Date: Mar 07, 2012 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG so embarassing I'm sorry, I know its Ana :D hahahaha sorry <3
Author's Response:
Lol...It's nothing sweety!!
Date: Mar 06, 2012 07:40 am Title: Chapter 58 (Sexual content)
OMMGGG loved this chapter <3 <3 <3 and thats so scary once I had a dream from Michael ( and me of course ;) ) and he looked like in in the closet and we kissed and behind me was a table on which I layed !!! OMG as I read that I was like o.O O.M.G. but in my dream happened unfortunately not more that kisses hahahhah damn :D
LOOOVED this chapter and I'm so excited for the next one :D :D :D I see youre now in the Dangerous era my ABSOLUTE FAV era !!!!! <3 <3
my fav. story is in my fav. era :D yeii cool <3
Author's Response:
Thank you sweety...To be honest, I often dream of this chapter lol...Especially after watching In the closet, just before to go to bed lol.
I'll have to do another story in this era so...Mine is Bad era...I'm so in love with the Bad era...
Date: Mar 06, 2012 07:29 am Title: Chapter 57
L.O.V.E.D. this chapter <3 IN THE CLOSET is my absolute favourite video !!!!
<3 was omg Michael's so sexy in that on :D cool that Susan came on the set, and OF COURSE she was jelous ^^ Naomis such a lucky girl to be in that video :D
Author's Response:
Yeah I really love this video...How the contary could be possible, lol?
I had to do a chapter with it...
But sweety, you did a mistake once again. Susan it's in YOUR story!!! lol.
And yeah Naomi...How much I hate her when I watch this video. lol
Date: Mar 05, 2012 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH.....GOD !
I..I,...
MY GOD !
YOU A.R.E SO A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.L.Y B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T!
HOW
IN THE WORLD
CAN I SAY ,,SORRY" TO YOU SWEETIE for NOT reviewing?
BUUUUT...I have a REASON :
IT was WINTER until now...just a few days ago,we celebrated the SPRING !
As I was saying...it was winter,and our country had a REALLY MESSY winter season...we had traffic problema(MAAAANNNY of them) ...we had INTERNET connection PROBLEMS (which ,of course.....are SO ANNOYING ! ) ...and we had problems with the electricity !
:((
So that's WHY I hadn't been on this site....
I feel SO TERRIBLE !
And i'm talkind DEAD SERIOUS !
Because I've missed Y.O.U!
Really! :XXX
My goodness....you've writen SUCH AMAZING chapters!
No wonder WHY you are such a BLESSED girl!
I LOOOVE YOU!
I AM SO SORRY AGAIN & AGAIN & AGAIN & AGAAAAIIIIIN ....:(
LOVE YA!
MUCH MUCH MUUUUUCH MUUUU........UUUU.....CCCC.......HHHH L-O-V-E!
Author's Response:
First of all, I'm really happy you're back sweety. I missed you!
It's true that I was wondering why I wasn't seeing you around...
And the most important thing, thank you for your so kind review. I'm not brilliant don't exagerate lol...
I hope you planned to update ypur story soon, girl!
Date: Mar 02, 2012 02:23 am Title: Chapter 56
First of all : thank you for the message that you like to read my reviews, I'm so sorry for you that your other readers dont review anymore. I dont know why ?!?! This story is so cute and so beautiful and you are so nice, I'll always review <3
now to the chapter : As I finished the last one I so hoped that Michael and Ana would speak about it and I was scared that Ana would just keep her throughts for herself. Now I am happy that they spoke about that.
It was a very emotional chapter and soo interesting to read, the end was so sad, Michael lives a really hard life and I think Ana sees that now a bit more. I'm so happy that Ana is in his life so he is not THAT lonely anymore.
But I can also understand Ana who wants to go with him in parks, kiss him in public and and and ... really hard for both of them :'( lets see what happens <3
one question : are you a beLIEver ?? I just wonder because some fo my friends are :) And I dont know what to be ^^
Author's Response:
No need to thank me. It was me who had to do this and I still thank you for you'll always review.
Yeah I liked this chapter. I saw an interview where Michael said a thing about being isolated and I thought about this for this chapter. I think that even with his fame, it was very hard for him not to be able to go out and stuff.
No I'm not a believer. Maybe when he died I wanted to be but I'm not. I just didn't want to believe he was dead so I was tempt to believe...But no I'm definitively not.
Date: Feb 27, 2012 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 55
again a chapter full of cute scenes : I LOVED :
- how she woke Michael up in the beginning because it was cute to see how Michael enjoys her again. Afther she was gone he really deserves her again I think
- the scene in the fitting room, thats totally mj-like that he sais " oh no we cant do this " hahaha but then enjoys it of course :D
- the child-discussion, for a moment I was scared that it would happed the same like with Susan and Michael from my story, but it dont seems anymore like that, so I loved that, was very well written <3
- the ending, even if it was sad ... I can totally understand her, how she feels now ... but I'm sure Michael will fix that.
you see there's no other scene in your story and I LOVE every scene and I also said why :) such a sweet story <3
Author's Response:
Wow sweety thank you for taking the time to write such a good review :)
Apparently you really enjoyed this chapter.
Thank you so so much!! You know when I was written the scene in the fitting room, I had a smile on my face because I think Michael could be like this. And how much I wished to be his girl at this moment. lol
I have the impression that you're nearly the only one to review each time so A BIG THANK YOU to you sweety :)
Date: Feb 25, 2012 01:26 am Title: Chapter 54 (sexual content)
*.* adorable chapter, Michaels soooo damn fine <3 <3 <3
I'm so happy for them, now FINALLY they have a happy time again ^^
PLEAS !!! : tell me that this story wont end soon !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah finally. It was hard to wait for Michael but it finally worth the wait I guess.
I have more chapters ready and others ideas planned but I don't know exactly in how many chapters it will end. I don't know myself how it will end yet lol. So we'll see.
Date: Feb 25, 2012 01:12 am Title: Chapter 53
This chapter was one of my favs. Its soooo beautiful <3 <3 I think its better that he wants Ana to be his secret girl ... they should keep everything like it is now, and WOW this story now I can tell it :
my fav story <3
hahahah I think you heard that like a billion times before but I mean it <3
and thanks for the link for the chapter before.. or 2 before... Michaels outfit <3 he looks SOOOOOOOOOO adorable on this pic <3
Author's Response:
Thank you sweety!!!
I know you told me these a billion times but it's always great to hear it lol.
Yeah he was so cute on this pic, but to be honest he is always cute:D
Date: Feb 21, 2012 10:26 am Title: Chapter 51
I cant see Michaels outfit :'( could you send me the link I sooo wanna see it <3
Author's Response:
Oh it's strange because it works with me. Here the link sweety!
http://s1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee398/jacksonfan6/?action=view¤t=1-7.jpg
Date: Feb 21, 2012 10:02 am Title: Chapter 52
Awwwwwww.....ITS PERFECT !!! that Ana wants to move in already !!! ANd her decision about their " first " night, I think its good like this, just snuggle in his arms, i think THATS enough to sleep well ^^ funny scene as Michael sees her bra ^^
wondeful chapter Audrey <3
Author's Response:
Thank you very much sweety!!
yeah I thought it was more romantic than already a big torrid night. Even if it could be hard to resist to Michael after quite a time without him, I thought I would love to do like she did.
Yeah I think that Michael could have this sense of humour lol.
Date: Feb 21, 2012 10:00 am Title: Chapter 51
I'm in holydays girl and its ... quite boring here ... but YOUR story makes all better ^^ so happy that you updated 2 times since I'm in holydays :D :D :D Its a wonderful chapter, I was scared that Ana wasnt happy to meet Michael but everything went good :) So cutehow Michael absolutely wanted to look perfect :D hahahahha and what bill said " she saw you naked, man " made me laugh so hard :D
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 OMG you sent me on my e-mail adress this inquiry and I just saw it now -.- I'm such a DUMB !!! I'd love to make MSN, but I never did that before so lets see if it works ^^
<3
Date: Feb 13, 2012 11:44 am Title: Chapter 50
100th review from me :) so pround ^^
a wonderful chapter :) WONDERFUL !!!! I'm sooo happy for Michael and Ana's mother was so nice too. Karen scared me first a bit but I know that nothing will come between Ana and Michael they just love each other ... <3
I sooooo look forward to the Anas birthday, and I hope that Ana can take Michaelagain in her arms <3 he loves her so much and needs her ....
<3 <3 <3 <3 100 felicitations pour tes 100 commentaires <3 <3 <3 <3
Author's Response:
Yeah!!!!...100 reviews!!!!
Thank you to you sweety and to my readers for that!!!.
You'll see what will happen to Ana's birthday in the next chapter...Stay tuned!!
Girl, your french is great! Congratulations!!
Date: Feb 13, 2012 09:36 am Title: Chapter 50
Wow I thought for a minute they wouldn't believe her but then again I wouldn't lie if I were in love. Great update soon.
Author's Response:
Yeah as she said she recognizes when her daughter is really in love...
Next update on tuesday :-)
Date: Feb 11, 2012 02:11 am Title: Chapter 49
That was such a cute chapter, I'm happy that Michael could go home now ! And I sooo hope that Ana will decide to live with michael !!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter <3
5 stars <3
Author's Response:
The next chapter will be post on monday...And I'm on vacation for a week, so I'll have time to write more chapters :)
And thank you for giving me 5 stars each time, you're really too too nice and a wonderful reviewer!! :-)