Date: Oct 16, 2011 04:46 am Title: YES or NO ???
Not me lol...I'm not against them at all lol...
I was quite afraid when I read that Franck was aware of everything but I'm happy he lets Michael lives his story...
But I have the impression that it begins to be too difficult for Michael to keep it secret...He wants her more and more and I think it will end to be really physical soon...if you see what I mean lol..And he will want to live his story more publicly I guess...
Good chapter as always!!
Author's Response:
OH...THANK YOU SO MUCH!
yEP...i LIKE TO CREATE SUSPENCE
Hmmmm....well...how should I begin?....um.....it's a little bit difficult to keep a secret when you're famous,right? because the media has an eye (or more :)) ) on you EVERYTIME! <- AND IT'S annoying !!! EVEN FOR ME!
ummm....uh....I'm quite frustrated to tell you now....
um....ok...straight to the point:
NO...sorry to dissapoint you and the others but...there WON'T be any phisical contact SOON...no...not now.....LATER ( If you know what I mean :)) )
AAAAAND.....UM....GOD...THIS IS ABSOLUTELY EMBARASSING BUT...
I'm TOO SHY to write such scenes! REALLY!
THANK YOU AGAIN FOR CONSTANTLY (AND MORE THAN THAT) REVIEWING SWEETIE!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 15, 2011 12:12 pm Title: Hmmmmmmm.........
No problem :*. Why would you upset me?/:)
Author's Response:
:)) :D
I don't know...what I wanted to say is that I don't want to intrude you...
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 15, 2011 10:36 am Title: I hope you all will enjoy it!
I send you the invitation again :D. I hope you received it :*.
Author's Response:
UMMMM... no...I didn't received it...I think it would be better if you tell me your full name and I'll try too ,ok?
MUCH L-O-O-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 15, 2011 09:53 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........
Yeah, it was me on facebook :)). There were many Alina Tudor, but only one with Michael as a profile photo, so I figured out it was you :). Then I saw that the profile was private. No problem that you declined, beacause I do that alot. I kinda' only have friends on facebook that I know :).
I don't mind you asking; yeah, I'm in highschool, and I'm 16.
I can't wait for the update :X:X:X
All the LOVE! :X:X
Author's Response:
SWEETIE...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR RESPONDING AND YOU'RE RIGHT WITH my name....I'm the one with Michael's profile photo...I don't like to post pictures with me :)) ....can you give me the invitation because I can't find you :))
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 15, 2011 09:31 am Title: I hope you all will enjoy it!
um...Teodora...sweetie.....um....Thisis embarrassing....um ...I can't find you......can you please tell me your full name? MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 15, 2011 07:36 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........
When I was younger, I wanted a house on beach too, but I really have a pale skin and I get burned by the sun very easly so now it's not quite a good idea; I'm Pisces, so I ADORE water and I want to make a pool at my house. :X:X
The inspection went good, that's what my teacher said, I felt like a feather when it was all over. My face was as red as a tomato beacause I had to speak in front of many people and I hate that....
I really wanna see your drawings, I bet you are amazing! :*:*
Thank you for all, you're too kind! and when will you update?:D 'cause I can't wait!!!
All the LOVE in the world!:*:X>:D<
Author's Response:
Awwww......my darling.....I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOVE YOU!
When it comes to tanning....I AM the LAST person on earth who gets tanned...really :)) ....my skin gets very VERY hard tanned by the sun...
You so sweet... I'm glad that the inspection went GREAT...don't worry...we'RE ALL HUMANS! It ,,Human Nature" ! :))
I don't LIKE too to speak in front of people...
Well as I said,you can enter on the Facebook and find me...oh God!
I REMEMBERED!
Today I've saw THAT A PERSON wanted my friendship!
It was you????????
Oh...I'M SO SORRY THAT i'VE DECLINED!
SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOOOOOORRRRRYYYY SWEETIE!
YOU KNOW WHAT?
I'll go right now and make you my friend!
and to answer your question : I think I'll update on this evening...right now I'm drawing my highscool because my music teacher asked me too :))
Can I sak you something....IF you don't MIND....:
you are in highschool?
how old are you?
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2011 12:21 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........
That was breathtaking... This is a magical and spantangeous chapter. Your a talented writer. Im not saying it cos a nice person. I know in my heart its true. Love you M.u.c.h l.o.v.e
Author's Response:
ok....this is.....um.....I have NO words...really.....
I AM SO GLAD that you liked it.....AMAZED by your comment...
I am a ,,talented writer" ?.....oh.....I don't know what to say to this...NOBODY had ever said such BEAUTIFUL thing to me before....but talented? I don't know....I just discovered that I absolutely LOVE to write!
And I believe you!
A BILLION THANK YOU!
MUCH MUCH MUCH MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCHHHHHHHHHH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-....-O-O-O-O-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 14, 2011 09:35 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........
I love the new update! You're doing an amazing job and I love how you're portraying Michael and Ariel's relationship :X. It's so funny with the ,,word's contest" :)). I also forgot to tell in the last review that I LOVE the pictures that you put on each chapter. The city at night and the beaches are speechless.
No problem about puting the chapter late; I had a hectic week at school too, and I had an inspection at roumanian yesterday where I had to present a project and yeah...I'm so shy in public too...I was so embarassed..
I also love drawing sooo much, and I was wondering if you did a portrait of Michael. I begun to do some studies of him. I also intend on doing a fanfiction with MJ myself, I have to see how it will be going.
Sooo, great chapter again !:X
Kisses and muuuch love!:*
Author's Response:
HI! :)) :-*
A BILLION THANK YOU!
Awww......I'm doing an amazing job? WOW......yeah...about the word contest....it just came into my mind....I don't know from where but it just CAME....
You LOVE the pictures?
Oh yeahhhhhh! I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOVE THE BEACH! I WANT A HOUSE THEREEEEEEEEEEEEE!
What can I say? I try to give my best and to make people HAPPY!
OH...MAN.....YOU had an inspection? well...how did it work?...I'm GLAD that you understand me so well....
HEY!...you love to draw too? GREAT! AND YES...I did a portrait of Michael too......and many others drawings....um...here's something : if you want to see them ,you can find me on ,,Facebook" with the name ,,Alina Tudor" and at ,,pictures " you will find the section named ,,my drwaings" (you know the translation in Romanian)
If you intend on doing an Mj fic too then....I'LL BE REALLY HAPPY! YOU'LL HAVE MY SUPPORT!
tHANK YOU AGAIN AND
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 14, 2011 08:13 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........
It was a cute chapter...Michael is so in love with her...Always saying or mouthering "I love you" to her...He's so cute.
I thought that something was about to happen in this hotel room but no lol...Can we expect something soon? lol
I think that Franck probably catched something we'll see...
You know about reviewing, I don't ask people to review just for having a lot of reviews...It's just I think it's important for a writer to know what people think about your story...
We put a lot of time and of us into our stories and to not have feedbacks can be demotivating, even if writing is a passion for me now.
Author's Response:
Awwww....A BILLION THANK YOU!
YEP....Michael's so IN LOVE WITH HER....,,I LOVE YOU" OVER AND OVER AGAIN AND AGAIN! :))
(sighing) YES.....Frank knows ,,something"-but not precisely....just suspects...
I totally understand you...I feel the SAME!
I'm on your part sweetheart!
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-V-E!
AGAIN : THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU :-*
Date: Oct 13, 2011 06:10 am Title: The professional way....
Your story is wonderful! I read every chapter and I like your writing stile very much! Keep going with the good work and pleeeease update soon!!! I can't wait to see what's happening next!!:x
P.S.: Dupa ce am vazut numele tau am stiut ca esti din Romania! Si eu sunt romanca, locuiesc in Botosani si il ador pe Michael. Si in cazul meu, multi nu pot sa inteleaga de ce imi place atat de mult, dar e problema lor!
All the LOVE!!:x:x
Author's Response:
Firstly....
Let's talk a little bit in English:))
ONE WORD: W.O.W !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU don't know....you really DON'T know....how HAPPY....no.....MUCH,SO MUCH MORE than HAPPY you've MADE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU'VE MADE MY WHOLE DAY!
You've enjoyed it?????????????
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Secondly......I don't want to ofFend anyone...but I want also to respond to you,like you did...in ROMANIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nu am cuvinte..........m-ai facut sa zambesc asa de MULT ,incat saream pe scaun de fericire :))....vorbesc cat se poate se serios.....
Este foarte,foarte frumos in Botosani...mi-ar placea ENORM sa fac o vizita pe acolo........ma BUCUR asa de MULT ca ma INTELEGI.....!!!!!!!!!!!
OH....Nu-mi vine sa cred nici acum aceasta intamplare........Doamne.....WOW.....
MULTUMESC ENOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORM!
TE IUBESC MULT DE TOOOOOOOOT!
Ma incanta faptul ca iti place stilul meu de scris.....atunci cand ma apuc sa scriu....nu imi fac un plan de idei...serios...pur si simplu incep cu o propozitie iar de acolo continua ,,MAGIA"....
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-....-O-O-O-O-O-O-V-E!
Bless YOU AND ALL MJ FAMILY AND FANS!
P.S : I don't mind if someone will ask me about what I've written for this LOVELY review....I'll translate if someone asks....Absolutely NO PROBLEM.....feel free to ask.....I'll give you my word that I WON'T get upset....
LOVE YOU ALLLL!
Date: Oct 12, 2011 08:10 am Title: The professional way....
No I really don't think it's going too fast...
Michael was attracted by her since he put his eyes on her...And it didn't take long for her to feel attracted by him too...
If you had read my story "Summer Love", Leanne and Michael fell crazy in love very fastly too lol...But why do they have to wait if they love each other?
Author's Response:
Firstly...I would like to THANK YOU for CONSTANTLY REVIEWING....IT means A LOT to me....I mean...I'm not asking for reviews over reviews...no,not at all....I hope you understand what I feel....
And thank you once again for responding to my question....
Secondly....OF COURSE I HAVE READ YOUR OTHER STORY :)) I'M ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH BOTH OF THEM!
MUCH L-O-V-E,SWEETIE...
TAKE CARE!
Date: Oct 10, 2011 07:29 am Title: The professional way....
Oooh it was a so cute chapter!! I love them together!!
And I love this story more and more, really...
I'm really wondering how long they will keep it secret?
Author's Response:
Thank you SO MUCH!
You do?
WOW...I....I....I feel HONOURED....really....
Well....we'll see how long....
But can I ask you something?.......
D...D...Do you think I went with their relationship too fast?
please,answer TRULY!
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-.....-O-O-O-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2011 10:45 pm Title: ,,Come together"
Omg that was ........ Beautiful. I love the pictures of the city. And the terrace. Its so beautiful that im speechless. Continue m.u.ch l.o.v.e
Author's Response:
Yes...I LOVE the pictures too....
It's peaceful there....
You're speechless?
I didn't expected at such comment.
What can I say?
MUCH L-O-V-E!
P.S. :Of course I will continue!
:))
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2011 10:30 pm Title: Come closer...closer...closerrrrr......
I love the picture of the beach its breathtaking beautiful. I been at the beach once or twice. I was younger then. I wana go back sometime tho. This is a Beautiful chapter.
Author's Response:
You do?
Oh.....I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THE BEACH!
I wish that I could buy a house there.......
In Hawaii...or Jamaica....or Caribbean.....
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
LOVE YOU!
Date: Oct 08, 2011 09:30 pm Title: ,,Come together"
Yes, they finally kissed. I thought they were going to get interrupted again.
Oh, maybe the kiss is going to lead to something else
Author's Response:
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
SO MUCHHHHH!
Yes...THEY KISSED!
I was thinking on that chapter on whether I should or not to happen...
And I didn't want to dissapoint you....
What do you mean : ,,maybe the kiss is going to lead to something else" ?
:))
I provoke you to EXEMPLIFY!
MUCH L-O-V-E!