[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2010 12:03 am Title: Chapter 32 to heaven and back
WOAH this chapters are pure hotness. Gotta get a COLD drink and a SHOWER after these chapters... amazing job with the writing of these few chapters.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2010 01:10 am Title: Chapter 24 its time
Aww he really. Misses her.. woah der nice fantacy Michael.. heyyy lol damn he missed her that much.. nice lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2010 01:00 am Title: Chapter 23 getting ready for a special guest
Lol Michael. Was so cute with the clothes insident.. the Sally part in the beginning. Made me sad... what they aren't going to see each other after. The work with Sally is done :(
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2010 12:52 am Title: Chapter 22 reality set"s in
Aww that was a nice thought of her..Im happy they are letting here be part of the groups
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2010 01:08 am Title: Chapter 21 Ecstasy
Woah this one was hotter thank the last one, nice =)
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2010 02:50 am Title: Chapter 20 the passion continues
Wow this chapter is really hot, woah nice I love the whole candel light, shower thing.. Nice.. Wating for the next ones.. Good job.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2010 02:35 am Title: Chapter 19 when love becomes one
I really got lost in the begining.. Wat was the transition from last chapter to this one??
But this chapter is really good things are getting hot..
Author's Response:
thank you for letting me know i guess in my hast to cut and paste i lost the transitining part but if you want i have added it to this chapter its not the original beacuse somehow i cant find it but i made it close to the lost one,now the next chapter i'm working on is going to get a little bit hotter then chapter 20,hope you will enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2010 02:18 am Title: Chapter 18 playing a game
Awww omg thats sooo cute...
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2010 02:06 am Title: Chapter 17 plane ride to california
Nices cute she got that lil surprice
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2010 01:14 am Title: Chapter 15 what should i do
Cute talk
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2010 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 13 disguise
Ahh awesome, ok I got my drink and ready to read.. Ill give you reviews to let you know :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2010 03:12 am Title: Chapter 12 back to reality
Awww
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2010 03:10 am Title: Chapter 13 disguise
Omg this is the best chapter ever, I love it AMAZING, pliz keep writing. Love it!!!
Author's Response:
well i added soem more shapters but be warned it getting hot and heavy so grab something to drink and relax i hope its not to heavy.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2010 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 9 reality check
oh you have to write more that was awesome I loved it :)
Author's Response:
thank oyu its actually my first time and would like it if you can tell me what you liked and maybe what you think i should head next rememebr its about Sally and that special reunion but also i can tell you that pain and suffering will be part of that adventure,so thank's again,i will write more as soon as i can.