[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2011 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1- The introduction
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Date: Oct 09, 2011 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 7- Too Far In
why oh why just when i was gettin into it im sure her sister and dad knows whts up they gone for the longest
Date: Oct 09, 2011 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 7- Too Far In
okay ... I know it's wrong ... they are doing all this in the back of her sister but ...DAMN! I need to see these two on fire!PLEASEEE! I'm sorry my lord, but they cannot stop there! They're already in the car and a few minutes have passed ...
They love each other.FACT! I would feel worse knowing that my sister's boyfriend is not in love with her but ME!
If she really loves her sister she will tell the truth. Whether she will stay with MJ after that or not but she has to know the truth.
Next chapter: let them get o FIRE!!!!|o|
I'll be waiting...I need to wake up early tomorrow to go to work but...ohhhhh I'll wait for sure!THANKS!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 6- Against The Wall
Wow that was a lot of drama! If that ever happen in real life could you imagine how awkward that would be?! Omg it would be unbarable. I cnt believe how quickly she fell back into his arms, all bad :( come on girl be strong and let him go! Omg i think he stopped because her sister caught them, i hope not cnt wait for more
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 5- Shit.
Omg! I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! Theres was wayyyy to many hints for it not to be michael. Omg i wonder whats going to happen great job cnt wait for more
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4- Burning Tears
Im really diggin this, happy i cam across this story
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 3- My Turn To Slam The Door
Aww, i love your writting style. You are terribly talented. Lovly job
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 2- The Silent Treatment
Hah wow michael is a douche xD omg i love it!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1- The introduction
Damn jerk alert, cnt wait to read more
Date: Sep 25, 2011 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 6- Against The Wall
great story mikey is something else cnt wait for more he kno he loves mills
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 6- Against The Wall
omg I bet the sister saw them!! continue! <3 L.O.V.E
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2011 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6- Against The Wall
DANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING!!!
Date: Sep 25, 2011 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 6- Against The Wall
OMFG!!!!I cant believe it!This chapter was very intense!Just...WOW!
I cant imagine all pain and hurt she felt...DAMN!I was reading and...girl...I couldnt breathe!You're PERFECT!Amazing writer!
"Then out of nowhere he stopped."
Well...I think he will say "I told you.I'm changed." *________* DEAD!
I cant wait til next chapter!
THANK YOU for this vey well written story!Love it! *hugs*
Date: Sep 18, 2011 01:10 am Title: Chapter 5- Shit.
I was 100% SURE that it was HIM!!!!! YEP,IT'S HIM!.........I can't wait to see Michael's reaction..........it will be funny !!! love it,you're great!
Author's Response:
Awww thanks xx Glad your enjoying the story xxx
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2011 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 5- Shit.
AAAHHHHHH!!!! WHY! I knew it I knew it I Knew it!!! LOL I'm so excited excuse me please
Author's Response:
Lol x Glad to see your enjoying the story <3