Date: Mar 14, 2023 11:40 am Title: Chapter 28: "The Girl Is Mine"
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[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2023 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 27: "Nocturne"
Lovely update. Can't wait to read more.
I actually think I remember reading this story many years ago on one of the MJ notice boards.
Author's Response: Thank you! And it's possible...I had an iteration of this story up on both KOPD (finished) and MJEOL.
Date: Feb 25, 2023 09:49 am Title: Chapter 7: "Someday My Prince Will Come"
That was such a beautiful ending ????
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2023 02:58 am Title: Chapter 24: "Lovely One"
Great chapter. Loving this story more and more.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2023 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 21: "Close To You"
Love this story so much.
Date: Feb 16, 2023 01:34 am Title: Chapter 26: "I Can't Help It"
Awesome chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2023 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 26: "I Can't Help It"
Haha I wasn't expecting this song but it ties in perfectly....what a s*xy beautifully perfect chapter, had me swooning and blushing
Loved it
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it! I’ve been sitting on that particular scene for a couple of months LOL, so I’m happy I was finally able to craft a chapter around it.
Date: Feb 04, 2023 10:45 am Title: Chapter 6: Caprice No. 24
I'm not liking Regina at all ????
She's just so enfuriating
Author's Response: LOL! She is, isn’t she?
Date: Jan 27, 2023 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1: L'Autunno
I'm really liking this one, let's see what comes next ????
Author's Response: New reader! Thank you! I hope you enjoy what comes next!
Date: Jan 21, 2023 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 25: I. Moderato
Beautifully written
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2023 10:17 am Title: Chapter 25: I. Moderato
Happy 2023!
Sorry but in my personal opinion I think your story is spot on as to how far things went in real life, at least once or twice and never again...pair were so handsy in the 70s, I recall reading somewhere about her outburst that made Gene Simmons not a fan of Michael.
Anyway whatever did or didn't happen, their affection for each other over the years was so beautiful. She and Lisa were so lucky to be on the receiving end of his affection!
Lisa Marie's passing came as such a shock.... I hated her when I was younger for obvious reasons but in later years she has my utmost respect. So sad she is gone so soon and so suddenly
Thoughts are never far from her family x
Author's Response: I could see it happening no doubt, I just don’t want to confuse folks, LOL. I think in their paths will diverge a bit here, but that’s the beauty of fiction! As far as Lisa Marie, I was pretty young when they got married, so I didn’t know what to think of them…but now that I’m a lot older I think a lot more positively about their relationship, whatever she said afterwards notwithstanding, and she was still so supportive of other family members, too. I feel for her kids.
Date: Dec 21, 2022 10:22 am Title: Chapter 24: "Lovely One"
Lovely update! You're an amazing writer, loved the chapter!
Date: Dec 20, 2022 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1: L'Autunno
This chapter is soo nice!I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue reading. :)
Date: Dec 04, 2022 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 23: III. Allegro Vivacissimo
Love this story! I can't wait until "later" :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Stay tuned for what’s coming up. :)
Date: Dec 01, 2022 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 22: "Push Me Away"
Aww this chapter was heart tugging, loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)