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Reviewer: soldieroflovenina Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2024 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto

Great story. I really like that Kim had a her own thing going on and wasn’t just Michael’s love intrese

Reviewer: soldieroflovenina Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2024 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto

Great story. I really like that Kim had her own thing going on and wasn’t just Michael’s love interest. A lot of stories lack this kind of dimension. I’ve read the whole story in 2 days. Hope that I can find some more work of yours.

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2023 06:14 am Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto

Perfecto, wish there was an epilogue for wedding day and children
Captivating story from beginning to end
Gifted writer x

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2023 06:14 am Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto

Perfecto, wish there was an epilogue for wedding day and children
Captivating story from beginning to end
Gifted writer x

Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2023 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto

I'm so happy I discovered this story.. If I didn't have work and other obligations I probably would've lost some (more) sleep trying to finish this.. Your writing style is beautiful and you captured the essences of the characters so well.. I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you so much!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2023 10:53 am Title: Chapter 7: "Someday My Prince Will Come"

This chapter was amazing.. So glad that Kimberly stood up to Regina, never liked her from the start, I had a feeling she was up to no good! Hopefully Michael and Kimberly's friendship (and more) will continue to bloom

Reviewer: Jdream Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2023 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto

Thank you so much for this beautiful Story! Really love your way of building their realationship. Can't wait for other stories of you, please continue writing!

Reviewer: Aboyd92 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2023 12:53 am Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto

Yessss, I’ve been waiting on someone to write about the infamous night Michael quit the group and you wrote it perfectly. I love this entire story!

Author's Response: I'm so happy for that. Thank you!

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2023 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 30: "The Lady In My Life"

***I'm melting..like hot candle wax***
This chapter has me in a puddle of goo...the perfect amount od steamy, sexy and sweet. I love their love *swoon*

Reviewer: Jdream Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2023 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 30: "The Lady In My Life"

Love it! Thank you for your Update! Can't wait to read how the Story will continue...

Reviewer: Jdream Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2023 11:18 am Title: Chapter 29: "Légende"

Love your writing, beautiful storyline. Can't wait for the next chapter - Please Update soon...

Reviewer: chloecass Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2023 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 29: "Légende"

Wow this chapter was perfect. Can’t wait for the next one.

Reviewer: THenry2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2023 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: L'Autunno

Absolutely positively one of the best stories I have read and experienced so far!! Not only is this capturing the journey and progression of two musically gifted people, but as well as connecting that element to the journey and progression of two youthful souls who’s experiences, feelings, thoughts, and dreams not only make them joined at the hip, but attached by the heart. I’ve read a lot of MJ fan-fiction stories, but your story captures Michael in a whole different lighting. It’s allowing me as a reader to relate to him on a more personal and familiar level. A lot of us think of him as a megastar ( which hands down he is), but at the root of it.. He’s just another young man trying to navigate the parts of his life the best of ways he can. Simply wants to be and is Michael Jackson ( without the whistles and bells attached). Cannot wait for another chapter!! Keep doing your thing!

Author's Response: Oh, wow. Thank you so much for this review...I'm really honored!

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2023 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 29: "Légende"

Well worth the wait =) so glad it wasn't tacky or graphic and you focused on the emotional and not the deed
This was perfect, hope things work out for them gping forward

I am 35 today 31/03/2023 do me a solid and post a chapter asap'r than asap hehehe! Love this story line x

Author's Response: I know I'm super late, but happy belated birthday! It's been...quite a month for me, but I'm hoping to be finished with the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2023 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 28: "The Girl Is Mine"

Guuuuurrrrrl hold up....how did we gp from staring into each others eyes to him getting back into the car in the next chapter???
That being said I loved everything about this chapter, has to be one of my favourite this far. Brilliantly written, can't wait for the next update, don't be gone too long x

Author's Response: He gave himself twenty minutes…LMAO! And thank you! I’m glad you like it. I’m working on the next chapter as we speak!

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