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Reviewer: Nick Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2024 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 95. The Pixie

84 years have passed, you finally came back, and the truth is that Michael can do it, they told him that his love is dead, so he will start crying and fuck like a rabbit, it is his way of living and overcoming his problems, what would hurt me would be serious. That this story ends bittersweet, Michael continues his life and Ivan returns and sees him with someone else or living with his children and fairly happy and leaves and ends the love story like that, DON'T YOU DARE give him that ending ;_;

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2023 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 28: Sensitive And Dominant

Honestly I don't blame Michael for being upset. Literally Ivan just wanted a kiss from the bad era like I get it lmao???? but he knew he needed to get back to 92



Author's Response:

Indeed, yet due for his cravings, he couldn't comeback on time to save Michael from being assaulted. Thank you so much for keep reviewing.

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2023 11:12 am Title: Chapter 25: Assaulted

He did all that just to have sex with him? ATP mj needs some karate lessons???? self defense classes or sum lol



Author's Response:

Hahaaa! Indeed :-)

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2023 10:57 am Title: Chapter 23: Back To The Future,1987

Ivan has perfect restraint lol cause there's no way I could give him a steamy kiss then just leave????



Author's Response:

Poor thing, ha?

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2023 10:49 am Title: Chapter 22: Longing To Be Hold

Oooh back to the 80s ! This should be fun lol

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2023 10:11 am Title: Chapter 18: Cheating Time And Its outcomes

Oh no we need the history album???? omg imagine a world without it! However , maybe Michael could've done all the things he planned to do which was a lot if it wasn't for the charges.



Author's Response:

Exactly my friend. Yet other events are going to happen in future chapters. Thank you so much for tevyyhe chapters... love to you.



Author's Response:

Exactly my friend. Yet other events are going to happen in future chapters. Thank you so much for tevyyhe chapters... love to you.

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2023 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 11: Back To 2050

Omg the wat I WISH i coukd turn back time and get rid of the allegations for Michael????????



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, for all those lovely reviews. In chapters ahead you will understand who's truly Ivan. And a lot of changes will happen ahead, some events will be real and some will be just in Ivan's memories.

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2023 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 9: Enchanted Like An Idiot

lol I love that he's in control of his desires like this so much! I love him kinda dominating and toying with Ivan innocently it's so cute!???? 

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2023 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 8: Clashing With Damien

Awww I love kallie

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2023 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 7: A Kiss At The Cafe'

lol Michael likes to tease him I love it!

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2023 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: Colliding With Damien

I love how strong and powerful Michael seems in this story! He was no punk in real life and was physically very strong so I like how you've written him so far in this one vs the others! So good !!

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2023 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 5: Tensions Escalating

lol he could've been more specific with Ivan ! I don't remember him telling him to get rid of him lol

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2023 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Pleading For Damien

Eww Damien I don't like him

Reviewer: Felicia11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2023 05:24 am Title: Chapter 95. The Pixie

Oh creo que Álex tiene un poco de razón al tratar así a Michael solo así aprenderá a valorar a Iván. Excelente capitulo como siempre chica

Reviewer: Strawberry01 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2023 10:44 am Title: Chapter 94 At Gun Point

Please update this story i love ittt

Author's Response:

I will, darling pretty soon.

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