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Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2020 08:32 am Title: Chapter 41: The Collaboration With Slash

Mike 🤦‍♀️ I don’t have faith in you actually

Author's Response:

Ah, all musician are bound to be unfaithful, there's a lot of temptetion on life on the road and there's a thin life between love and hate. Let's see what would happen in future chapters, though, Michael truly loves Ivan, don't lose faith... haha! anyhow my darling, thank you so much and stay safe.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2020 04:56 am Title: Chapter 41: The Collaboration With Slash

They're like a old married couple and they both need to control their jealousy or things will go ugly fast and everyone will be in danger when they're fighting 

 

Oh Michael of only you'd know Ivan is Jason you'd no longer need other people to be instresed in, what happened to learning from past mistakes? You already lost him once don't loose the love of your life again and for good this time 



Author's Response:

Haha! yes it's true, the old married couple thing... yes indeed. Michael is just feed up by being controled Damien has left a deep mark on him though and he can't help being flirty. He believes he has Ivan unther his thumb and he might learn a lesson as well... haha! my darling, thank you and stay safe.

Reviewer: sunkid36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2020 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 41: The Collaboration With Slash

wow Michael is so mean. why can't he just be with Ivan only and be happy? I really hope he won't do anything stupid with Slash

Author's Response:

Oh, yes, Michael could be very mean... you will see what's going to happen on the next chapter my dear... and I went back to correct some small errors darling, check it out once again and sorry for the grammar errors. I do check my errors but when I go back again there are some that I just don't see... haha! Thank you so much anyway my dear.

Reviewer: eVa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 06:27 am Title: Chapter 40: Jason’s Heartbreaking Story

I wonder who murdered Jason and for what reasons...

Oh gosh, and will something happen at the show?? 



Author's Response:

You will see, darling... you will see, thank you so much.

Reviewer: sunkid36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 10:29 am Title: Chapter 40: Jason’s Heartbreaking Story

wow you just really write the best stories! And I just saw that you started another one! I am so excited an I can't wait to read it :)

Author's Response:

Yes, I hope you find the story likable and let me know... thank you darling.

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 01:28 am Title: Chapter 40: Jason’s Heartbreaking Story

Oh Michael did hurt Jason so much! I hope he will not treat him like that anymore....but who knows

Author's Response:

Yes, he hurt Jason in the past and he does not want to make the same mistakes he did in the past, though temptation is tough and we will see if he's able to keep his word... as always myd darling, thank you so much for your lovely review.

Reviewer: fernando Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 40: Jason’s Heartbreaking Story

damn, they have sex 24/7 how can Mike walk??I would like to know if Mike would ever meet ivan's family.GREAT STORY

Author's Response:

Haha!... love is love, and yes darling, Michael will meet Ivan's family in future chapters... you will see how this will happen. Thank you for coming back to review my story. 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2020 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 40: Jason’s Heartbreaking Story

Knowing Ivan he'll kill off the entire maffia and their heirs to protect Michael

 

Poor Jason, but I'm still not convinced it was really suicide I mean if Jason is Ivan he would've fought to be with his love instead of ending his life, I think Damien or his family is behind Jason's death 



Author's Response:

Yes, Ivan will face the entire mafia if is necessary and yes Jason did not killed himself... you will see he will remember what really happened to him. Thank you so much, darling.

Reviewer: eVa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 06:58 am Title: Chapter 39: While In Germany

Interested to hear about Jason's (aka Ivan's) story!  And about the Mpreg thing, either way you'll have a reader in me whatever you decide. 

Great job on the chapter as always!



Author's Response:

Oh, yes and there's more to come, and thank you, baby, for your support. I don't know about the Mpreg yet, I might... who knows. I hope you are doing fine in this quarantine, darling.  

Reviewer: Nick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 39: While In Germany

I want to see how this goes

Author's Response:

Hey, you will soon find out... be safe darling.

Reviewer: sunkid36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 10:52 am Title: Chapter 39: While In Germany

oh yeeyy a new chapter! I am excited about the moment when Ivan will remember that he was Jason. I am already really looking forward to the next chapter (as always) :)

Author's Response:

Oh, yes, he will remember pretty soon you will see, thank you so much, darling!  :-)

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2020 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 38 The Memory Of Jason

Oh Lord...Ivan, if only you knew...



Author's Response:

Yes indeed, he will soon know. How are you darling my darling?

Reviewer: wings919 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2020 07:42 am Title: Chapter 39: While In Germany

Jason was killed but survived for some reason and lost his memory. I don’t think Damien want Michael to die maybe he would protect him just wait and see.The emotions are so real there and I always love your story.

Author's Response:

Jason died in 1980, someone killed him and made Michael believe he took his own life. Ivan will remember everything and he will know who killed him, you shall see and yes Damien does not want to kill Michael despite of all he has done, he does love him, it's a strange way to love but he does truly loves him. Thank you so much my darling and stay safe.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2020 01:10 am Title: Chapter 39: While In Germany

 

Well since Ivan is from the future could the pregnant thing actually be a thing instead of a joke? That would be a shocker for all of them 

 

Not much longer now and Ivan will understand he is Jason 

 

Hmm was it suicide tho? Can't it be some person like Damien from the future that killed Jason and made it look like suicide to make sure Michael was a free man when they met?

 

 

Hope the target thats killed was Damien 



Author's Response:

The pregnancy thing could happen, perhaps in future chapters, I'm not really sure if I should write about male pregnancy, I afraid to ruin the story. Maybe I should ask my reviews your thoughts about male preg. About Ivan, no it wasn't a suicide, you wii see what really happened in future chapters and Damien is not a time traveler he is a man with power and soon we will hear from him. Thank you so much, darling, please be safe.

Reviewer: sunkid36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2020 01:29 am Title: Chapter 38 The Memory Of Jason

I just wanted to say thank you for your long answer, now everything makes a lot more sense :)

Author's Response:

You're welcome, baby. 

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