Date: Nov 18, 2022 09:01 am Title: Chapter 6: Another Man's Broken Heart
Ewww why would she call Michael a sissy that's so rude. I wonder if the master will fall for Michael?
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2022 08:53 am Title: Chapter 5: Overwhelming Rules
Omg I'm scared of this guy FOR Michael. There are entirely to many rules ! Also I wonder what punishment is like.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2022 08:44 am Title: Chapter 4: Sexual Tension
Oh gosh I'm scared for michael I hope he never abuses him????
Date: Nov 18, 2022 08:05 am Title: Chapter 3: Say Yes
Super interested to see where this is going! Can't wait till Michael breaks out of his shell.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2022 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1:Money Problems
I love the story line however your narration needs work. Instead of saying he you should say I. Let Michael be the narrator for himself. Otherwise GOOD WORK!
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2022 02:00 am Title: Chapter 33 Meeting The Family
Poor Michael, hope he will be ok
Author's Response:
Marry Christmast and happy new year, my darling!! And thank you for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2022 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 33 Meeting The Family
Oh wow you’re back! I am so beyond glad!You made my day!
I love this book but I don’t know where is their relationship going to..Gabriel was dead ??’?I perceive Michael wouldn’t accept a murder …Can’t wait for the next chapter!welcome back darling!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, my friend.
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2022 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 33 Meeting The Family
Primero que nada me alegra de que hayas regresado y espero que todo mejore en tu vida ya verás que sí y en cuento al capítulo estuvo excelente gracias por tomarte el tiempo de actualizar tus historias son excelentes cuídate
Author's Response:
Gracias chica!
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2022 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 18: Moans And Groans Through The Night
Good Lord! I would not want that type of life and/or job seriously? Getting scolded just by being nice? Oh come on Enzo! Don't be that way! ????
Author's Response:
Oh, he will learn his lesson though. ;-)
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2022 02:22 am Title: Chapter 17: In The Hot Tub
Sizzlin' ??”???”???”?
Author's Response:
And hot ;-)
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2022 02:00 am Title: Chapter 16: Sex Lessons With Allan
Allen, true friend to the end! ??????‘?
Author's Response:
OH, yes, he's a true friend. ;-) thank you darling.
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2022 05:15 am Title: Chapter 32 THE VILLA OF TEARS
I love the new name for the story and the villa of tears sounds like a scary place
Somehow I have feeling either Philippo or someone else of the family will tell Michael what happened to Gabriel
Can't wait to read what you have in mind
Author's Response:
It is, hopefully Michael never gets to see that place... eventually, Michael will have to find out... and poor thing when he does. Oh, yes. Thank you so much, my dear.
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2022 04:55 am Title: Chapter 32 THE VILLA OF TEARS
Estoy segura de que la historia tendrá un giro aún mejor en cuanto al capítulo algo me dice que el padre de Enzo no se la va a poner fácil a Michael. Gracias por actualizar querida
Author's Response:
Ah, ya veras, si Michael se las vera negras... haha, poor baby. Gracias como siempre, carino.
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2022 02:49 am Title: Chapter 32 THE VILLA OF TEARS
The titile sounds great and the plot was really crazy until now. I can’t see the possibility for Enzo to have Michael’s heart .For true love doesn’t mix with fears.And poor Michael!Every thing went wrong behind his back but he thought the opposite way. I just can’t wait darling!
Author's Response:
Thank you for suporting this story my dear... I will update this story in a slower pace. Lost of drama will unfold in future chapters, you will see.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2022 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 31 Caught On A Dirty Game
Gabriel knows his days numbered now
Aw I love the sweet side of Enzo when he's so sweet to Michael
Oh I can't wait to to see how Michael's planning a date for Marcello, he seems like a nice guy too
Author's Response:
Oh, yes, he's going to play cupid, you will see. Thank you, darling.