Date: Nov 20, 2022 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 33 Meeting The Family
Good chapter! I can't wait for the next upload!! Hopefully I'll get notified when you do I know your super busy but keep it up great job!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, my darling. Hopefully i will get a chance to udate. Marry Christmas and happy new year!!
Date: Nov 20, 2022 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 32 THE VILLA OF TEARS
Like this story so much! I'm so excited for the twist!
Date: Nov 19, 2022 11:48 am Title: Chapter 29 A Heart Torn Apart
Michael will come back lol. But I'm so surprised the father didn't have his guards beat him.
Date: Nov 19, 2022 10:56 am Title: Chapter 25 The Truth About Enzo
Gabriel is so fake lol I feel like he's going to do something to sabatage the relationship between Michael and Enzo. I do however think that Michael overreacted completely over the hand kiss lol.
Date: Nov 19, 2022 01:05 am Title: Chapter 21: What Gabriel Feels
Damn michaels beauty is testing friendships lol
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for those wonderful reviews. I would surly consider your advice, nonetheless, I don't have much time to dedicate myself to my writing anymore. I will do my best to update, yet it will be slow updates due to my busy schedule. I'm so sorry, my dear.
Date: Nov 19, 2022 12:40 am Title: Chapter 19: Scorned By His Master
???? oh no lol good chapter! Really enjoy this story
Date: Nov 18, 2022 11:59 am Title: Chapter 18: Moans And Groans Through The Night
Wow Enzo is a piec of work and I honestly need Michael to stand up to him. Like I get he says he's in love but he's only in love with the good parts but what about the "owning your life" and threatening to kill him. How can you fall in love with someone who controls you and owns you. I don't get it.
Date: Nov 18, 2022 10:48 am Title: Chapter 16: Sex Lessons With Allan
Love Allen !
Date: Nov 18, 2022 10:17 am Title: Chapter 13: Going To Block My Heart
Aww I love Allen so much! He's such an essential part of the story and Michael would be a mess without him. Good chapter
Date: Nov 18, 2022 10:06 am Title: Chapter 12: Animal Instinct
Imma need Michael to man up lol I know this is fiction it's just hard to imagine him so from weak and afraid. I mean Michael to me is a BOSS and the epitome of strength. Hopefully his character will develop in that way
Date: Nov 18, 2022 09:55 am Title: Chapter 11: In The Dressing Room
I don't know I hope that if hits Michael I just want Michael to fight back. Ya know? I just hope to see progression in michaels character where he does become more confident, and show more of his strength as a man
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2022 09:43 am Title: Chapter 10: Getting To Know My Master
I'm just shocked Michael had fallen in love this quickly like come on lol. You don't even know this man???? idk I just wish that Michael wasn't such a simp in this.
Date: Nov 18, 2022 09:33 am Title: Chapter 9: Lust
I'm just confused as to why Michael wants so badly for him to fall in love with him. It would be better if it just came as a surprise
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2022 09:26 am Title: Chapter 8: A Short Interview
Lol why did he think that Michael was Latin????? He looks hella black even in his bad era lol just a lighter skinned black person. He doesn't give Puerto Rican vibes till his dangerous era to me.
Date: Nov 18, 2022 09:10 am Title: Chapter 7: Under His Spell
I highly despise Enzo