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Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 17

Well Jack has accepted Mike as his dad and he is thrilled.  Now he needs to get his Becca!  Maybe a double wedding with Rick would be nice..lol!

 

Great update as always looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2019 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 17

Wonderful chapter! It is great to see how close and comfortable they all are. I don’t think though, that Michael will propose to Becca very soon because his future is still uncertain since he doesn’t make any money anymore. So I guess his male pride will be hindering from doing it until he figured out how to get back on track and how to get his professional life back together. But nonetheless I would love for him to do it the sooner the better. They are a great team.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2019 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 17

Lol Jack isn't stupid he's a smart kid 

 

They don't have a reason to wait any longer to get married and officially be a family 

 

 

I'm sure Michaels grandparents and son will get along, after all they're family and isn't that whats important 

Reviewer: BlackOrchid Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2019 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

This is so tender and sweet. I love the way you write. Thanks so much for creating this great story.

Author's Response:

im glad you are enjoying it.  thanks for reviewing.  keep them coming and I'll do the same

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2019 08:22 am Title: Chapter 16

Well I liked it very much but the minute Tony spoke about protection, it sunk in that Mike and Becca indeed again did not use protection. So chances are high that history repeats and that she is pregnant again. Only this time, Michael can do things right, get married to proclaim their mutual live officially and rightfully and he can be with her all the way through the pregnancy and beyond, forever. But I guess when they find out it will be quite the shock.

Author's Response:

You never know.  time will tell.  Maybe Jack will have a new brother or sister.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2019 04:27 am Title: Chapter 16

Well I liked it very much but the minute Tony spoke about protection, it sunk in that Mike and Becca indeed again did not use protection. So chances are high that history repeats and that she is pregnant again. Only this time, Michael can do things right, get married to proclaim their mutual live officially and rightfully and he can be with her all the way through the pregnancy and beyond, forever. But I guess when they find out it will be quite the shock.

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 16

Well is it safe to say Mike will not be going back to being a priest!   He broke his vows big time!   

 

Im glad that they are both on the same  page to TRY and take things slowly. 

 

They have a lot of years to mKe up for.....Becca  has the guilt of keeping their son away and Mike has to deal with that too!  

Mike has to deal with the fact that he didn’t follow his heart. He alway loved Becca

 

great update



Author's Response:

key word try.  he certainnly has broken many vows and theres no going back.  what will he do with his future though?  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2019 12:14 am Title: Chapter 16

Looks like Jack will have a sibling sooner than they probably thought or even discussed  

 

Tony is right there's plenty of other things Michael can do to help people 



Author's Response:

we shall see.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: ddstephens9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2019 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 16

Mike may work as school guide consculor or charity worker. Maybe they have another child and finally get marry.



Author's Response:

good ideas we shall see what he decides or if another baby is onthe way.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2019 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 15

So glad to see Jack enjoying time with Michael.  He seems to like his company and in need of a father figure in his life.   He sees his mother happier than she has ever been now that Michael is in the picture and  I think he wants him to be part of her life and his.

It is getting harder and harder for Mike to resist Becca!  He has decided to leave the priesthood and try with Becca I am sure they will make a wonderful family.  

Is he dreaming????  I don't know but I can't wait to find out!  Looking forward to reading the next update!



Author's Response:

He wants Michale in his life but right now they are on a friend level.  Hopefully soon he will consider him a dad and not Mike.  Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2019 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 15

Well, what can I say: Llooooooooved the chapter because it is so positive and promising. The way things are going right now is just wonderful. They are making the right decisions. Thank god they decided to be a couple and move backbto the States together. And I believe that Becca is in the shower for real. It ain’t a dream.
Thank you for writing

Author's Response:

thank you for reading...it is very promising what their future can hold.  time is on their side.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2019 06:44 am Title: Chapter 15

Becca And really enters the shower. Finally Michael is no longer a priets so he can love It freely and be a good father forse Jack. 



Author's Response:

you are corret on all matters.  Mike is free to follow his heart and hopefully beome a family.  thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: alexandrita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2019 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 15

I hope it's not a dream haha... 



Author's Response:

you'll see really soon.. thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2019 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 15

I'm glad Michael and Jack are bonding 

 

At this point it could both either be a dream or for real but my guess is she really stepped into the shower 



Author's Response:

yes they are.  with every passing day Mike has become closer and Jack considers him a friend.  Hopefully soon he will consider him dad.  thansk for reviewing and reading

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2019 11:30 am Title: Chapter 14

Jack is a smart boy!  Of course he would figure it out he is not a toddler he is a teenager!

Mike's feelings for Becca run deep.  He is so confused right now, he made a vow to the church but his feelings for Becca came through with that kiss.  

I hope that he will be able to figure out what he wants realize he can still love God and the church without being a priest and be with the woman he loves.

 

Great update!



Author's Response:

as their feelings get stronger his struggle becomes more real.  He just needs to find a way to sort everything out.  thanks for reviewing

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