Date: Oct 25, 2018 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1
New here. Inlove the first chapter so far :) the setting and circumstances are different than the usual. I like that MJ is married with marital problems. This has kept me interested and wanting more. :)
Date: Oct 23, 2018 11:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow it was so touching and sad... you are definitely a very talented author
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it. your comments motivate me.
Date: Oct 20, 2018 10:01 am Title: Chapter 16
Haha! “this uncircumcised dick belongs to her.â€
I think Sofia will be back. She wants the force.
Author's Response:
It's got a lotta power..to make you feel like..to make you feel like....
Date: Oct 20, 2018 07:17 am Title: Chapter 15
Great update. They some freaks!
Date: Oct 20, 2018 01:22 am Title: Chapter 16
I dont think it's the and of Sofia specially now with her newly learned information and with Izzy slapping her (that you can't blame her for anyone in Izzy's situation would do that)
Author's Response:
We shall see. She's been had so not much more she can do...hopefully
Date: Oct 20, 2018 12:32 am Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for this new update I was waiting for!
Can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
Thanks for stopping in.
Date: Oct 19, 2018 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
WOW !! This chapter was intense! Sofia lied absurdly, but I have my doubts ... Sofia is cunning and cruel. She wouldnt falsely accuse Michael without being sure she could harm him in some way. She's crazy and can do anything to have Michael. I'm afraid she's up to something.
I'm not going to lie ... I loved the scene where Izzy slapped Sofia! I would do the same! Great chapter! Thank you for continuing this story! I love it! :)
Author's Response:
She's desperate because she's madly in love and in her convoluted brain thinks that she should be with him. Who knows what else she might do but mike told Robert to slap her with a countersuit so who knows
Date: Oct 17, 2018 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Will you update?
Author's Response:
Eventually. Working on something else
Date: Oct 14, 2018 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
loving Michael and Izzy's relationship :)
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: Oct 11, 2018 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was an interesting proposal to say the least... Lol. I can't imagine how Mike feels. Seeing that you did something, but not remembering it and having to feel embarrassed about it... Hopefully, he continues to gain his memory and learn how to be a better father and husband as he goes along. And I'm not ready for this whole Sophia shenanigans just yet... 🙄 Haven't even properly met her, but I know I don't like her. Lol
Author's Response:
Well the shite is about to hit the fan.
Date: Oct 11, 2018 05:54 am Title: Chapter 15
As kinky as this was, the proposal was touching. And I laughed aloud at the dog conundrum. His enthusiasm to make the kids happy got the best of him. Overall, this was an excellent transition chapter!
Author's Response:
He’s trying because he wants to make everything right
Date: Oct 09, 2018 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 15
Please, don't stop writing! Continue this story! I like it so much!
Author's Response:
I will but I’m not going to kill myself trying to update weekly because people can’t be bothered to review
Date: Oct 08, 2018 08:41 am Title: Chapter 15
What a sexy wedding proposal! I was thinking and ooooh gosh! I loved it!
Michael seems to have two personalities. One before and another after the accident. He was embarrassed as he proposed to Izzy.
When I saw Michael promising to his daughter that he wouldnt leave her ... I felt a tightness in my heart. I think the old Michael is coming back and the promise is going to be broken ... :(
Author's Response:
So true there are two michaels. Before and after. Which one will remain?
Date: Oct 08, 2018 12:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Love how each child has their own personality
Those puppies are too cute
That's deffently not an everyday proposal
Hopefully he'll get more of his memories back with watching the family videos
I hear u on the reviews
Author's Response:
It is frustrating to work so hard and ppl can’t be bothered I appreciate my loyal.
Date: Oct 07, 2018 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 15
Before leaving my review I would like to say that I love your story! I read MJ fanfictions for many years and I am very selective. For me to write here that your story is good is because it is really good! I can tell you if it is a good story or not. Yours is great!
Dont give up! You should write because you like it and not to have many reviews. If you stop writing this story I would understand it as a lack of respect with your faithful readers who always leave a review.
Unfortunately, most readers want to read stories with lots of sex scenes. They dont give a damn if it's well written. They want sex in each paragraph and in each chapter.
You write wonderfully well! Continue this story for you, for Michael and for few but faithful readers.
Dont give up! Please! Thank you!
Author's Response:
I’m not giving up. It’s just frustrating to invest so much time and get over 100 reads but ppl can’t bother to take 1 minute to review. I spend easily 15 hrs a week writing a chapter. I fully appreciate those of you that take the time faithfully to review it means the world to me.