Date: Dec 01, 2016 05:09 am Title: Chapter 14
Your story is very nice and i will be very sad if you do not update.
Please continue : )
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your response :)
Date: Dec 01, 2016 12:04 am Title: Chapter 14
I absolutely detaste the fact that you are making Michael look weak. Richie is a devilish ass and Michael is too nice and sweet for his own good. It is absolutely no pleasure to read about Brooke being a bitch and letting her name be connected with some filthy ass like R, while denying M? I mean come one this is pathetic. I mean what woman with a right mind would do that? Nah, your story. is nothing but annoying and negative, so I will stop reading it. Truely, you can't be a fan of M. I mean your story is well written in the sense that it is proper English and elaborate and you obviously know your characters, but please, that's about it. It is a waste if time to read it.
Author's Response:
Lol okay. First of all I want to start by saying that I appretiate your honest opinion even though I don't agree with you. Second, I am not in the business of writing happy go lucky stories in which Michael is wrapped in bubble wrap and never experiences hurt ever because that is just completely unrealistic in my opinion, I prefer to write stories that are more to do with psychology and are backed by research because those are the types of stories I find interesting and like to read and write. You labelling this story as annoying, pathetic and negative just because the story line wasn't what you thought is unfortunate and frankly it's disrespectful but I did put a disclaimer on this story and I would suggest that you don't read another word of it if this sort of story offends you because if you don't like it now, you really won't like it later on.
Also "Brooke being a bitch and denying M when R is and ass who would do that?" I don't think you live on planet earth, no offense.
That being said thank you for the feedback and I don't feel bad taking this story off this site if others feel the way you do but I won't apologize about writing a fictional story that involves conflict. I am however sorry that you took this story so personally, at the end of the day it's just fiction even if I like for it to be as real as possible.
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2016 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
ahh!! i love this story, so different. Richie is one collld dude man 😂. And the way he got into Brooke's head is sad and now Mike throwing back pills lord ANDDD Toya over here doing all types of dirtiness. don't stop this story, I can genuinely say that I really enjoy and love this story. It's different and intriguing. I get super excited when I see when you posted a new chapter. I'm normally a silent reader, but i'll break that habit just for you! â¤ï¸ love love love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, its really reviews like yours that inspire me to keep writing. Thank you for breaking your silence for this story 😄
Date: Nov 14, 2016 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
Brooke is a stupid cow
Author's Response:
Lol!
Date: Nov 09, 2016 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Michael. This is so cold hearted
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
Why on earth is she so uptight and crying? Poor Michael. This is cruel! Please clearify and make Michael happy again.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
This Richie is so unlikable! I wonder what history those two had back then?
I hope Michael releases Thriller and blows Richie's song out of the water.
Author's Response:
Lol! More soon, thank you for commenting x
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2016 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so cute! Please update fast, you finished the story , so please give us more. But what about that dirty Richie guy?
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for being the first reviewer! The second chapter is up, i'm going to try and update this story daily if i can. Thanks for reading :)