[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2024 07:52 am Title: Chapter One
This book is so good
Date: Oct 06, 2020 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 14- NEW UPDATE Parts 6-10 BONUS! 11 10/2/2020
Love to see you are back writing big sis. Love seeing Mike and his oldest bonding more. I definitely think it's the age more than him not being a mama's boy anymore. I also feel the news he got was just shocking overall. Love the hubby and wife learning to communicate their issues. I definitely think Mike is just all over the place and Cindy is just missing the attention and being spoiled.
Author's Response:
Thank you sis. I'm trying to bring in that family element even more so with the kids getting older. They should've been older yeara ago because months and years always passing in this story. Lol! I wanna have MJ in his 60s w/ swag but with the boys and girl way older. I'm just teyna see how that would work.
Date: Oct 05, 2020 10:36 am Title: Chapter 14- NEW UPDATE Parts 6-10 BONUS! 11 10/2/2020
I sure hope mj takes chealsy's advice. It seems as if mj never has complete harmony at home. I enjoyed this thoroughly and I'm glad ur back!
Author's Response:
Thank You! Glad to still have u as a reader. I hope all is well. I'm working on the next update; it's therapuetic. :-)
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2020 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 14- NEW (Sat) Update: 6/20/2020
Loving Harvard's advancement he really is too much like his father when it comes to his emotions and temper. The growth in the family overall is great to see. Loving the character and story development.
Date: Jun 21, 2020 12:59 am Title: Chapter 14- NEW (Sat) Update: 6/20/2020
I love how the family is just coming together. I wonder if that's all what was bothering Harvard. Mike and Cindy vaping, lolol but he was right about them experiencing the uncomfortable with each other.Great chapter
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2020 12:13 am Title: Chapter 13- End Of Chapter Monday NEW Update 6/1/2020
Harvard is such a thinker. I feel like he has always felt certain things and is just now being able to vocalize it. Loving the family moments. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank U. I'm trying to keep my word and focus on the couple as a unit and dealing w/ issues that society faces domestically.
Date: Jun 01, 2020 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 13- End Of Chapter Monday NEW Update 6/1/2020
I def want to know about cruella. Harvard is just conflicted right now and I think he has a right to be. Love the chapter it was soo cute with mike and the boys.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I sort of love writing daddy and son time.
Date: May 19, 2020 06:54 am Title: Chapter 13- Parts 16-20 (NEW) Monday Night Update: May 18th, 2020
This chapter was so cute, between the boys talking to each other and Mj trying to get back in shape I was cracked up the entire time.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thank You.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 13- Parts 16-20 (NEW) Monday Night Update: May 18th, 2020
LOVE the family vibes. I think it's so funny when the kids shell up when Mike goes not so fun dad on them. Loving the couple's communication and honesty truly a favorite thing about their relationship. Love the writing as always. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank You!
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2020 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 13- Parts 11-15 (NEW) Monday Night Update: May 4th, 2020
Can't believe Harvard and his mouth. Glad Cindy slapped someone respect back into him. I understand a hurt kid when parents go through relationship problems but he has to remain respectful. Mike has every right to be pissed and Cindy included. Love the story development sooo good. Can't wait for more updates!
Author's Response:
Thank You! Yes, Harvard really is quite out there, but we know Daddy J don't play. I'm glad they tagged team on Harvard because he needed a wake up call.
Date: May 04, 2020 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 13- Parts 11-15 (NEW) Monday Night Update: May 4th, 2020
Wow! That just dragged me all the way through the motions. I was nervous that mike seemed like he was gonna hit cindy but whew. I love Princeton btw, he’s the most consistent and sensible character. I’m glad mike manned up, this made me wanna go read the first book all over again. Amazing chapter!
Author's Response:
Whew! I'm tryna keep that outta there. We just gonna try to maintain his temperament. Yes, Princeton seems to be the more laid back and understanding. I think he's really a daddy's boy. He seems to understand his father's ways a little more. I thought Haravard did too, but he's definitely a mama's boy until Cindy had to go old school. Mike will be manning up quit a bit. Thank you so much for your review.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2020 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 13- Parts 6-10 Saturday Night Update: May 2nd, 2020
Lmao it had to Jordan's house. I feel like Mike is starting to feel his age more and he doesn't know how to accept it or talk about it. I feel like these new allegations and a huge work load has hit him out of nowhere I see through reflection he realized he doesn't want these BS situations to keep coming up as he and Cindy grow old together and drain what energy he has left after working. However just like Cindy finds attention elsewhere Mike finds comfort when he knows Cindy is upset at him. He has always been insecure about his age difference to Cindy and now it's kinda like he doesn't want to force her to stay cause he feels his time with her is limited especially when she is unhappy.
Author's Response:
I'm loving the in depth look you got on these two. You definitely got me thinking. The next update may make you wanna yell. As I wrote the newbies, this review had me thinking a whole lot. I hadn't thought about the last part you wrote but you gave me something to work with as well. I appreciate it. Your reviews and others actually help me write.
Date: May 02, 2020 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 13- Parts 6-10 Saturday Night Update: May 2nd, 2020
I hate Beard with a passion but he was talking real stuff. I didn’t know things were this bad between them. I would really like for Mike to grow his balls back and fight for his marriage because it’s obvious that they still love each other. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
You got me lol about Beard. I agree with you. I think those two needs reassurance amongst one another because they definitely love each other like you mentioned. Thank you for loving the update.
Date: May 01, 2020 01:25 pm Title: NEW Chapter 13 (Parts 1-5) Friday Night Update: 4/24/2020
I don’t think they’re losing each other, marriage has its strains sometimes they’ll make it through. I think Harvard is growing into a nice young man. Yes I think Cindy been messing with her trainer, but mike wasn’t handling his business so... sidebar: I’m really glad to see you back and updating!
Author's Response:
Aww... Thank you, I'm glad to be back entertaining you all with different story lines. As I read this comment and wrote in real-time, I was debating if I should let Cindy go that far w/ the trainer. For this evenings update, I kinda threw in a curve ball. This couple is definitely nerve wrecking. I hope you will enjoy tonight's update as well. I look forward to your reviews, thank you so much for all of them. It really helps me with the writing process.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2020 04:19 pm Title: NEW Chapter 13 (Parts 1-5) Friday Night Update: 4/24/2020
I hope Cindy isn't giving up on Mike. I feel like in between Mike trying to do better with his temper and controlling he forgot his wife still needs his attention and affection outside of him being over protective. I love the maturity in Harvard and I can tell he definitely ready to be his own man. As far as the trainer Mike clearly needs to speak to bruh about his frequent calling. Cindy should have already but you know she friendly af and Mike hate that shit. Lmao. I think this communication Harvard suggested is great. From here they should try to establish what's going to make both of them happy and comfortable when concerning spending family time together and Cindy getting her attention as well. She really tends to go find attention if Mike isn't giving it.
Author's Response:
Great observation! Hmmm... I am definitely taking this comment into consideration. Cindette misses her man. I gotta little alternating for the both of them tonight. I'm using all.coemts to hwlp.shape the storylines. Can't wait to see you alls opinions for this evenings update. Thank you so much for always coming through on the reviews.