Date: Aug 15, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 5: This Wasn't How I Pictured Today Pt.1
Oh my God...he is crazy....and I love it lol!! Can't wait to read more
Date: Dec 27, 2016 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5: This Wasn't How I Pictured Today Pt.1
Really interesting, is not the typical boring story
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2016 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: This Wasn't How I Pictured Today Pt.1
Oh wow. Michael is a crazy lune lune who comes off as a charming sweet man wearing an oversized black hoodie who searches for his next female victim to wine and dine and do crazy things too. I swear this reminds me of the movie The Perfect Guy. But overall this story is great. Can't wait for you to up date more chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! And that's crazy cause I never saw that movie before, but I'm glad you like it and there will definitely be more chapters coming! ~Jaylah J.
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2016 03:51 am Title: Chapter 4: No Disrespect Allowed
They said to THEMSELVES??? THIS NIGGA CRAZY!!! Oh my gosh i love this!! This is crazy!!
Date: Aug 19, 2016 03:40 am Title: Chapter 3: Surprise!
Omg whaf did rebbie mean?? abd her sister is soo crazy lol and um i meant like be more descriptive and not scriptic..ahaha if thats a word ðŸ˜“ðŸ˜“ðŸ˜“í ½
omg please update soon!!! 😠this is going to be soo good
Date: Aug 17, 2016 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2: Sister Bonding Time
ok so i think that i'm in love this story i feel like it's going to be really great. Please don't hate me for telling you this but, I LOVE this story and it would be an even better story if there was more detail in it. Thank you for your creatiivity! This is going to be awesome!!â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤
Author's Response:
It's no problem, I appreciate the constructive criticism, and feedback 😆 and what do you mean by more detail? 🤔
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
I like this a lot continue very soon! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! And I will 😄
Date: Aug 15, 2016 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Interesting! Your mysterious summary makes me so curious. I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
Author's Response:
No, thank you for reading and reviewing, and hopefully you'll like what I have in store for this story! 😊
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
This was an interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, hopefully you'll like where this story is going. 😄