Date: Oct 30, 2016 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
Girl! I can't...haha she is riding that bull of his only to get caught by her friends lol haha! Their faces must have been priceless lol and Michael was bout to punce on that ass like Simba. Boy! That shit was funny but they were too cute all the way through. But baby, how he gon fall dead sleep right on top of her?! 😂😂😂 damn Mike don't kill her. Loved it!
Date: Oct 29, 2016 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Girl! I am grinning ear to ear on this chapter! Yo, the sexual innuendos were off the chain. That foois feenin for that Chanel cookie lol. Jodeci's "Feenin" is playing in my head right now! Ooh...play a Jodeci song in one of your chapters! That's all I need! Can't wait girl! Onto the next one!
Date: Oct 23, 2016 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Chile...I can't with them at the end. These lovebirds...what are we going to do with them? Great chapter, girl!
Date: Oct 23, 2016 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like this Chanel! She's pretty! 😠and Michael done planted one on her! Baaaaaaby! Do we have baby #2 on the way. Got her all scared like Alessandra in Remember the Time! Michael giving his women heart attacks and what not lol
Date: Oct 20, 2016 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
HaHa Girl once again another great chapter!!! Now I know I kinda went in on Michael in my last review but I have to say,he is officially off my shit list Lol.Well at least for now nah just kiddin he has stepped it up my man came through.That was some major point moves with the all at once group text to his former hoes.Girl I died laughing lol that was a good one right there.But Chanel and Mike finally getting it together and that's alright with me.Lil Mikey can he get any more adorable 'po'baby having mommy withdrawal symptoms, he ain't use to sharing but that lil cock-blocker better get use to it cause Daddy gone want some more of Mommy on the regular lol.Glad they were able to get out for a lil one -on-one time and then back home for a lil sexy time.And the end when she learned they were going on tour with Michael well let's just say now that they are officially a couple she better expect shocks ,turns,and surprises I mean look who's her man.Great chapter Girly glad your back with more!!!
Author's Response:
Lmaooo everybody was iffy about Michael in the last chapter. Lmaooo and when he group messaged him I was dead lmaoooo all those hoes got the message. And Mikey is such a spoiled baby and Michael wasn't having that, that night. And we'll see how this couple is :) thanks again girl
Date: Oct 18, 2016 11:10 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm surprised no one else read and left a reply yet. Anyway I'm mad that Michael really had a harem of ho's and actually dismissed them in a group text. Don't tell me the whole time he had them grouped together like that and just sent random texts asking for free ass and wo ever responed back first got to fuck first lol. I'm happy Micahel ia qoeking with Chanel on Mikey's attachment issues. No one has time to be holding a baby all day. I like how Chanel tries to go get Mickey when they finally have sex smh. Glad Michael convinced her otherwise. Shit let Michael tell me daddy needs you a little more right now my black ass would not be going anywhere lol. I'm surprised they weren't more nastier than what they were right now. I'm waiting for that in the next chapter lol. Oh and Michael could've warned Chanel about his tour coming up. Well it should be interested hearing about the time they will spend with each other on it.
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo Michael had all those hoes in a group message like PEACE! Yes! Michael is helping Chanel with their fussy spoiled baby. Mikey is so attached to his mommy. Hopefully he will get better! And lmaooo you are so funny! Michael was like that baby is gunna go right back to sleep. I got you! And Chanel still tried to get up. Baby Mikey will be fine! Michael was so last minute with telling her about the tour. Hopefully things will go well. And lmaooo and about it getting nastier...we will have to see about that ;) thanks again
Date: Oct 16, 2016 10:08 pm Title: CHERing Feelings
I was taking a gander at new stories and stumbled upon yours and I instantly clicked on this chapter because of the name lol I love Cher and loved that incorporated her into in this chapter. Great writing as well! 😊
Author's Response:
Well I'm glad you liked the story! Thank you :)
Date: Sep 08, 2016 01:41 am Title: Chapter 7
lma popeyes will always be better than KFC point blank perioud sorry Mike! And I love how she basically rode him but still claimed that they don't like each other!
Date: Sep 08, 2016 01:38 am Title: Intro
This is so good! I loved the beginning lol I would do the same thing probably
Date: Sep 08, 2016 01:37 am Title: The Date
I really love this story! I just read all of the chapters lol
Please update soon!
Date: Sep 07, 2016 08:06 pm Title: Intro
Omg excuse my typos on my last post. I forgot to fix them. I meant to say sex can't block out love.
Date: Sep 07, 2016 08:04 pm Title: The Date
I'm mad that Michael is stuffing panties in his pocket dang. I think I'd be embarrassed too if someone found my sex toy. I don't have one anymore but that's besides the point. I knew a date was gonna happen with Davon. Qasnt expecfing Michael to be such an ass and tell all those fibs to Davon. Shame on Michael for talking out the side of his neck. I'm glad he told Chanel he has feelings cor hee but why he had to be such a damn ho though. Dang he could have fucked like 3 or 5 less girls atleast. You can block out love with sex. I really hope Michael doesn't lead Chanel on though. Chanel to me gave into him too quickly. Someone needa to speak since into her on how to guard her heart and what to do with Michael. It should be interesting when she hangs with her friends again.
Date: Sep 07, 2016 05:25 am Title: The Date
O.K. First let me just say CamilleianPYT review killed me dead Lol so flippin funny,and so agree with him getting tested for STD's.And now all of a sudden he in love with that CoCo or should I say like cause he can't even say I love You.But girl you had me rollin this was hilarious Michael setting up Davon he know he wrong lol and Davon fallin for that shit like a damn simpleton.Mike riffling threw her underwear draw lord-have-mercy he is a mess.But what was soo extremely sweet was when lil Mikey said Da-Da for the first time although he still a lil cock- blocker bless his heart.The jury still out for me though yes they're together but my spidey senses just feel somethings off but will see if they can make it work though.Excellent writing as usual can't wait to see whats next for these two child they a mess Lol.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 07:42 pm Title: The Date
I really love this story!!!
Date: Sep 06, 2016 07:35 pm Title: The Date
Awww, they're together :) Michael, was so jealous of Davon 😂