[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my God, I LOVE Lindsey's inner monologues about Valentino! They are hysterical! It's cute how she gets all flustered even when he talks to her over the phone. I can't wait to see what develops between these two. I'm still dying to know who the woman and the little girl are.
Author's Response:
irl, it's only 2 chapters in. I cant reveal all my cards so soon..lol thanks for reading!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 02:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Can't blame her, hope he accepts another interview, just like her im curious to find out who the mystery woman is
Author's Response:
It will be quite awhile until the truth is revealed so you will have to be very patient. lol thanks for reading
Date: Jul 26, 2016 02:12 am Title: Chapter 2
You don't know how happy I was when I saw a new chapter :)) so thank you for having updated :D.
Who can blame Lindsey? If I had chance to meet a man like Valentino, I would dream of him when I asleep :)). That man is just so...irresistible!
I am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
I know right? We all would be saving our pennies if he was real. thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love it! I like that Valentino keeps calling her!
So the article was a success...will he or won't he grant her another interview? That's the million dollar question! Looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response:
whats the million dollar answer? lol glad you like it..thanks for helping me on it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so happy happy you decided to continue with this one. I soooo love it.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. i wasnt sure how people would take to the story. hopefully people will review if they like it because that's what keeps it going. thanks again
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definately continue. Your story is very well written and Valentino is captivating..to say the least.
Author's Response:
thank you for your kind words. make sure you review when reading so i know if its worth continuing.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
You could separate it into 2 chapters, so that the first chapter could be approx 3000 words (we give a little upwards leeway), if you still wanted it to count in the challenge.
Author's Response:
Not really it takes away from the richness, depth and details of painting the picture. 3000 words is very short for anyone who really is detailed IMO. My normal chapters are 12-15K. I thought I could do it but cant. Its not my style to rush a story. C'est la vie
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Miss this is just great!, for sure it will become a long-story, mistery genre is catchy, u know? :) I have a question, the picture in the story is Michael when he actually did start to make part of the agency?, taking into account that, is Michael in his late 30's or at the beginning of 40's? Keep on!, good job.
Author's Response:
He is actually 41. the photo is when he was younger. I was originally going to make the cover be his profile with different shots of him dressed up but you know how the rules are on the site you cant take up too much space so I just went with a phot that was very dressy but no sunglasses, hats etc...more of a natural shot. Plus the picture was very clear and the older one I was going to use wasnt as clear.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story and the way you write.Nice job.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. keep an eye out for updates.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far. I was wondering who the woman and child were, too. Please, continue!
Author's Response:
I guess you'll just have to wait and find out. thanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Yaaaasss!!! This story is DEFINITELY WORTH continuing. I can't wait for the next update😀 I wish I could rate this a 20! Lol
Date: Jul 17, 2016 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh. This is so worth continuing! There is so many places you could go with it!
Pis this woman really his wife? Is the child his? Or is he helping out someone?
Will Lindsey get another interview? Will she hire an escort! The possibilities are endless
Bravo my friend!
Let me scrape up some money! I think I want to hire Valentino! Lol
Author's Response:
That was the response I wanted. that everyone wished they could have enough money to hire Valentino. I tried hard to make him desireable, confident and sexy not cocky. I guess I suceeded. thanks so much for reading and the support. This will definately be a story. I've already got the majority of the plot outlined.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 07:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my Mike!!! This story is so interesting and has unique idea. Valentino character is very attractive, mysterious and charming. He is like a book that I've like very much to read. You've done a great job in creating your main character!
Besides that, this story is also very well written. I love the way you use words by how you let Valentino talk, very beautiful and profound.
In short, you've done an amazing job!
I would love to see this one shot continue because it will be such a waste to stop it right now. Please consider to write more.
I think you're a really great writer. I could not take my eyes away while I was reading this story. And I've just realized you are 'I'm Only Human' writer. Then, you're truly my favorite author. Have I said you're amazing? Well, I believe I have, many times :)). Please keep in mind that :).
Thank you very much. I LOVE this story a lot. I am looking forward to reading more.
P/S: I would also love to pay Valentino to be my date ;). He is so alluring!
Author's Response:
Thak you. what's great is that you didnt even realize that I wrote it until the end. that means alot more to me. I wanted to make Valentino sexy, attractive and mysterious. I think your work alluring is perfect because that was what I was going for. I didnt want him be a creepy arrogant pig but someone you would want to be with and I think I succeeded. I will definately be continuing but will have to juggle tow stories now. more to come for sure. thanks for your support!
Date: Jul 17, 2016 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this!!! Please continue! Very refreshing and full of what women are too scared of trying to find out!! Excellent read once again. Glad it is not a one chapter deal! Job well done. Wonder what the situation is with Lizzy. Is she a client from the past? Looking forward to next read
Author's Response:
I'm glad you loved it. it came to gether rather suddenly and I'm quite proud of the outcome. I hope I made Valentino appealing as I took a different route for me with this one. I've never written a non famous Michael. thanks for the support
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 03:45 am Title: Chapter 1
That ending with his daughter got me! Please continue
Author's Response:
I just re tweaked that since you read so check out the ending and you mike even like more. Thank you for reading this and I hope to give you more. thanks for reviewing