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Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 04:21 am Title: Chapter 4

You've touched lots of topics maybe we didn't count on. I really like the way it has been written. Hope to know what's going on next because I have no idea. Sensitive and gentleman? In that role just fits Michael  and you've made a really good job and now we have this lady eager to know everything related to him.



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Gotta keep you guessing so you will want to come back for more 😀

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 02:00 am Title: Chapter 4

Betty's story is a beautiful story sad but beautiful 

Lol at him flirting with Lindsay 

By the he talks about he doesn't like cheating people but him teasing her while in a relationship with the the mother of his child (the mystery woman and the little girl) that's not considered cheating? Lol 

By the way he said he never told anyone that story about his family,  so not even the mystery woman?  Hm so there's something about Lindsay then?  Hm makes me wonder if they ever have a date with everything including the love making 



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But is he in a relationship. That is the real question. Lol

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 12:13 am Title: Chapter 4

OH MY MIKE!!!

OH MY MIKE!!!

OH MY MIKE!!!

I LOVE this chapter!!!

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OK, I'm calmed down now :)) *wipe off my sweat* :)).

Valentino is so hot!!!

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OK, maybe I am not really calmed down :)).

I was so emotional when Valentino revealed his painful past to Lindsey, and just then 'I was torn between wanting to hug him and wanting to rip my clothes off and offer myself to him right there on the couch' made me burst out laughing :)). I don't know why, but that thought from Lindsey was so hilarious to me. Maybe because of its reality and honesty? But yeah, I was torn liked her too :)).

I must say that I was very surprised when he said a 75 years old lady was his 'first' with client. I know Michael likes older women (well, at least when he was young) but that age gap is a little too much to me :)). But what he felt and said about Betty was very beautiful and touching!

Thank you for having updated. I am always very happy to see a new chapter and looking forward to reading more.

P/S: I would jump on Valentino's bones if he kissed me liked that :)). I wouldn't be able to control myself liked Lindsey :))

Author's Response:

You've got to remember the 75 year old woman wasn't about what Michael likes it was about giving a client what they need and want.  She taught him many things about compassion, how to treat women etc.  it wasn't like him being attracted to her and being in a relationship of sorts.   In his field he will have clients of all ages sizes etc.  I chose the much older woman because I wanted to try and show how memorable it was and how it formed him in a way.  He wouldn't get that if it was just anyone,   And hey old ladies need some good loving too.lol. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: irishchickformichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2016 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG! I am so happy you updated! I am really enjoying this story, as I am loving Lindsey, she reminds me of myself in some ways so its easy to place myself in her shoes so to speak, and Michael is so yummy. ...*Fans self* I felt bad for him when he revealed his past and how he was made more sense and I do wonder if he is starting to like Lindsey or would he behave this way around any woman? I understand Lindseys reluctance to believe him, as she sees him as so attractive and she sees herself as plain. But I guess time will tell....but I did wanna pull Michael into a warm hug, he seems to need it. Great new chapter btw! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks..I tried to paint lindsey as anyone of us so that we could easily walk in her shoes.  I guess I was successful :). Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2016 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

Patience isn't my strongest trait either when waiting for more of this amazing story xD

A lot of good stories in this chapter about his past and first escort. Still lots of questions about the lady and child tho, maybe it's just his sister and niece? I died when he revealed he slept with Betty LOL that lucky old bird. Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response:

Hey now..even old ladies need some good lovin...lol

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2016 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

Whew. Valentino could take advantage of me anyday. I love how he can make her react to the simplest touch. I can't wait for the next chapter!



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I know seriously right?  He can teach me all about kissing anytime.  And I'll even do my homework.   Lol

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2016 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

So glad Valentino decided to give Lindsey a second interview!

Her boss is a complete ASS!  How dare he put her job on the line! I mean she's the one who got the last edition sold out! what nerve!

Can't wait to find out her next batch of questions for Valentino!  Hmmm why does Valentino seem to care so much?

 

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:13 am Title: Chapter 3

Valentino is such a mistery!!!! Haha I was thinking, if the journal is asking her for a story, why no put hers? And take Valentino as her date? Well, not right now but later! How old is she?  Thanks, I really like your work



Author's Response:

now thats an interesting concept...a story about her date...she is 29 almost  30

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2016 01:04 am Title: Chapter 3

Her boss smh what a asshole 

Valentino is really sweet with cheering her up 

Hmm she could ask if he ever gets tired of being on those dates all the time and if he'd ever fallen in love with a client?  

 

Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Brian certaily is a prick.  good questions.  you never know if they will show up :)

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2016 01:00 am Title: Chapter 3

OH MY MIKE!!! I'm so excited!

Thank you for having updated. I was very happy to see a new chapter.

There are so many questions I want to ask Valentine. Of course, the most important question is who is the woman the seems like the mother of his child? (I am pretty sure the little girl is his biological daughter). And what does he like in a woman? Which part of a woman that attracts him? Which 'experience' with his clients that are so unforgettable to him?
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OK, those questions seem so be from a pervert more than from an interviewer :)). But what can I say? Valentino is so fascinating that I wouldn't be able to keep my head straight if I had the chance to meet him :)).

Anyway, I am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

yea he might not appreciate her asking about the woman and child but who knows Lindsey is persistant.  Good other questions tho.  you never know if she may ask them.

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh dear God....how could you leave a chapter hanging like that?? lmaoooo this is going to get SO sexy!



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sorry...:)

Reviewer: irishchickformichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loving your new story!  And your main woman is very likable,  I can relate to her alot. Her boss though needs a good smack to the forehead for how he is treating her, curious if he's always been this way to her, or its just his desire for more interviews? I love how sweet Valentino is, though if I was her, I would be careful as most of how he treats her is probably not real and fake on his part or at least that's what would go through my mind? He does get paid for this after all and him treating women great is important.  But I still can't blame her either. ...lol. My problem is I could easily fall for him and thats a big no no. Or should be.....but this is thankfully fanfic lol. 



Author's Response:

so true.  she has her doubts because she is very insecure in the first place but time will tell. 

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'd want to ask about the woman and child the most, but probably wouldn't in fear of scaring him away again. Maybe ask if his family knows what he does, and how he handles being in relationships.

That was nice that Valentino surprised her at work. Her inner monologue cracks me up.

Author's Response:

good questions.  now lets see if she asks them.  glad you like the way I write her inner monologue.  it's new to me

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

Man, her boss really is an asshole! When he grabbed her wrist I was saying to myself "Oh hell no! Don't put your hands on her!" lol! I sometimes get really into stories. I'm dying to see what the second interview is going to be like!



Author's Response:

I guess that means I did something right if you get into it right?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

This story is very well written! cant wait for next update and how the interview turns out! 



Author's Response:

thank you for the compliment.  I'm glad you like it.  check out my other stories.

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