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Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Omg l would love to hear Valentino p.o.v  this chapter was so funny love it



Author's Response:

i considered it but didnt want to lose the vibe i have going.  thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm glade you like it

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh my what a drunken confession Lindsey made!  Valentino that sly devil, giving her the necklace to remember!  

Yes, I would be mortified! 

This update had me giggling at some point!  But I see that Valentino, is helping Lindsey and actually trusts her!

I am truly enjoying this story!



Author's Response:

he certainly is a sly devil.  I dont know how she would have been able to face him.  glad I could make you laugh..thanks for reading and loving it :)

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

I think after the initial embarrassment, Lindsey is feeling a little more comfortable around him? Well we shall see. Looking forward to this interview for sure.

The change was .69 teehee

Author's Response:

she is getting more comfortable with him and herself too.  he is good for her in many ways.  thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

Gosh!!! Love little secrets between them. Both are the pieces which filled the puzzle. They're so sweet, so human!!!



Author's Response:

they are developing a nice little friendship between them.  thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: fletcher Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 5

Very good story



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lindsey is hysterical! The 69 joke had me cracking up. I'm also glad Valentino has a great sense of humor. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

she does have a sense of humor and thankfully so does he or she would certainly have to bury her head in the sand with embarassment.  thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Imogenmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow....You've got me going over previous chapters so that  I can somehow try to "figure" who the mysterious lady is lol. And because the story is really good😭 Excited for the next chapter...



Author's Response:

you wont find the answer...lol

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2016 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awww bluebird! And damn him! Damn him, for teasing that girl like that! But wow! He really opened up his past to her. I'm not surprised he was raised around women since he has such a high respect for them. His father was a bastard. Poor Michael had to live with all that on his shoulders. Hopefully his 'daughter' brought him happiness lol. And great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  You like bluebird?  I thought it was a cute nickname lol

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2016 11:53 am Title: Chapter 3

Her boss is a ass and that was awfully nice for Valentino to do another interview <333 and he's sending a limo?! She's so lucky already 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2016 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

To be honest this story is so great for the challenge. With mysterious sexy 'Valentino' and wow! He has a daughter and maybe a wife too? Damn she accepts him going on dates with women..let alone sleeps with them?! Hopefully that wasn't his wife. Lindsey was feeling him but who wouldn't? 



Author's Response:

thanks..i would agree but the challenges rules were what they were.  there was no way I could split it up for the sake of a contest so I just removed it from the challenge.  I'm happy tho with the outcome regardless.  no harm tho.  as much as a mystery Valentino is, the people around him are just as intriguing.  thanks for reviewing and reading

Reviewer: Fifegrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Lindsay..Must have been one long drink of water she took. I really enjoy the humour with her although I don't know how she's going to make it through these interviews.

Valentino is getting more captivating as this goes on, but I don't think he's in a relationship. Just my impression.



Author's Response:

She will probably need a cold shower when she gets home.  lol  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Lindsey better watch out or she may just fall in love with this man before she is ever kissed!!!  I hooe he isnt married to that lady...that would be a shame.  She definitely has her homework and hopefully she will have enough to write a story and get another interview soon. Great story



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm so happy you like it and got caught up 

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

Watch out Lindsay.....he is a lion on the prowl snd you are ready to be eaten!!! Playing with fire

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 2

Lindsey will definitely get another interview.   He has been calling her so mayybe he is interested??? Great story. DDefinitely ready to read more

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Lovely!  Lindsey is falling!  Valentino is quite suave!  I see he really trusts her to tell her about his past.  So many secrets will Lindsey be the one to make him tell her all?  

 

Another wonderful update!



Author's Response:

Her certainly is or at least thats what I was going for.   thanks for the compliment.  It means alot.

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