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Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 6

Very cute Tink!  I busted a gut laughing at the thought of Valentino being set up with a guy!

 

Poor  Lindsey falling for the  gigilo!  Will she save enough money to get her dream date? 

Will ill she be able to keep her sanity, waiting to talk to him again? Will another interview take place!

 

looking forward to finding out breath update Tink.

 

 

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 6

So beautiful well-written. Story us developing really really good. Keep updating. Thanks!!

Reviewer: MJSexyAsHell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 04:19 am Title: Chapter 6

omg it pisses me off that she doesnt press him about that little girl and womann (who is obviously a nanny)

and her self esteem IS so low lol. 

and why doesnt she just ask him for a date and tell him shes gonna use it to describe how it goes in the article? dude let me be lindsey...PLZZ GOD.😭😣

I love this story

 

 

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 02:18 am Title: Chapter 6

I had a really good laugh when I read the part Shelia was a man :)). Poor Valentino! How terrified must he was:)). But he did a great job to get back Steele anyway.

I don't know how really Lindsey looks like. But no woman should have that low esteem to herself. I believe confidence can make you more beautiful. And I hope someday Lindsey can have more belief in herself.

Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 02:05 am Title: Chapter 6

Lmao looks like Valentino and Steele love to prank each other lol 

 

Hmmm why do I have a feeling Valentino is not married?  Maybe it's shared custody with the mother of the child?  Or maybe just maybe she's a friend and he babysits the child a lot?  Like a father figure?   So many possibilities 

Cause which married man cleans, cooks and bakes for himself?  But I could be wrong here 

 

The mystery is so good lol 

 

 

Still have the feeling the real Valentino aka Michael is interested in Lindsey,  he obviously cares about her,  that's not an act that's real (I think lol) 

 

 

 

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 01:27 am Title: Chapter 6

I love this story! Steeles prank was so funny. I also love how Valentino caught Lindsey checking him out hehe and hope she gets to see him again soon :)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2016 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 6

Awwww! And that story of Valentino and the man! Lmaoo I kind of guessed that his date was a man but the description had me rolling! Him and his friends do some serious planking. And poor Lindsey...that girl is faaaaaaalling and she's hornyyyyy. Something is going to happen soon. I just know it! Great chapter as always

Reviewer: irishchickformichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2016 12:18 am Title: Chapter 5

I loved when Lindsey got drunk and said all those funny things to Valentino! But yes I would of been mortified myself....and I can't help but relate and understand how Lindsey feels and would also believe that Valentino don't like me that way either.  And things seem to be heating up.....can't wait for more!  :) I always get excited when I see a new chapter for this one. 

Reviewer: MJSexyAsHell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Lol i love this story, sorry about that last comment.i was like drunk aha. I looked back on it and felt soo embarrassed for no reason. but update soon!!! This story is really good!!😊😊



Author's Response:

What comment?  It's all in good fun.  

Reviewer: Fifegrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2016 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

You know I could actually picture Michael chuckling on the phone like that. He did have a good sense of humour.

Poor Lindsay indeed, but the necklace I thought was a nice touch.



Author's Response:

Though he's n to famous I try to put in his qualities and details.  Glad you think I got it right.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2016 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Just read what you've posted thusfar - very unique storyline! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I try to think outside the box.  thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2016 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

What a great chapter. Poor Lindsey!!! I would definitely be mortified for sure. But I love the fact that they now have a secret that nobody else knows but them! Cool writing once again



Author's Response:

I know ..if I were in her shoes I would be mortified too.  thankfully Valentino has a very good sense of humor

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2016 05:41 am Title: Chapter 5

Awwwww! Valentino is sooooo sweet and cute! I think the gift was very cute too. "Bluebird" will be okay. She just needs to relax sometimes and then she'll ease up to him. Great chapter



Author's Response:

thanks.  He is a gem isnt he?  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2016 02:33 am Title: Chapter 5

Lol the drunk call 

Mr 69 lol to funny 

Hmm why do I get a feeling Valentino is getting feelings for Lindsey? Could be just his way of treating clients but I don't think he'd buy something for all his dates 



Author's Response:

she did get a little carried away but sometimes the truth comes out with alcohol.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Every time I see a new chapter, I am so excited. Thank you for having updated :D.

I even feel embarrassed for Lyndsey. If I were in her place, I would also run away or I would die from embarrassiment :)). Luckily, Valentino has great sense of humour and I think what he did was really cute. Their secret little joke :)).

I think you've done a great job because we - readers can always find a little of ourselves in Lindsey from the way she thinks or acts.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

she is lucky he took it well or I dont know how she would ever face him.  thanks for the compliment.  I'm glad you like it so much.  I admit i'm having fun writing this one.  thanks for the review

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