Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
I don't think Valentino has a romantic relationship with that Lizzy woman. And I believe that he is truly attracted to Lindsey. But of course, there are still many unanswered questions so I can understand for Lindsey's confusion. Because as a reader, I am confused too :)).
Thank you for the new chapter. I was very excited to see that you had uploaded. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
keeping the reader confused is something I take pride in..lol just kidding. have t keep you on your toes to keep ypu coming back right? Thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 26, 2016 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
I think Lizzy just burst Lindsey's bubble! She is certain that Valentino is married, but why is he flirting with her? Is he trying to just make her more confident! But why the gift? Or the late night calls? And the cryptic message! So many questions.
Looking forward to to finding out the answers. Another great update!
Author's Response:
so many questions but so little answers...lol poor Lindsey her bubble certainly was burst. how will she handle it though. that's the question. thankd for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
I thought Lindsey was gonna get caught stalking him at the farmers market for sure lol! I was so nervous. She kind of did but not by Valentino. I'm really glad she told him the truth about talking to Lizzy and seeing him at the market, it would've looked shady if she had accidently let it slip out later. I guess he's trying to cryptically tell Lindsey that he is within reach and available? Hopefully!
Oh and the idea Jess had about work paying for the date, I totally had that same idea! Hopefully Lindsey can finagle that deal hehe. Finagle.
Author's Response:
im not sure I wuld call it stalking maybe just observing while infatuated...oh I guess thats stalking..lol I guess you will have to wait and see if she can finagle something...thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 26, 2016 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've started reading this story last night, and I can honestly say that I'm very intrigued and satisfied with the way it's going so far. You have a great talent of story telling and hope you continue to develop your talent into more ideas.
I love the story as well. 😌
Date: Aug 26, 2016 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor Lindsay..I mean in her defense, I can see why she's skeptical about Michael; all the flirting is just messing with her mind and on top of that she doesn't know if he's married??? Yeah, it's understandable...but that Lizzy chick 😒..hmmm..
Author's Response:
Poor Lindsey indeed. not sure what to do. do you back off to protect your heart or take the crumbs you can get because it feels good? that's the question...does she have to settle for the crumbs? thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, that woman, Lizzy? She's a bitch with a capital B. There was no need for her to be so nasty to Lindsey. I hope that it's not what it looks like, so Lizzy can eat her words.
Author's Response:
Lizzy certainly is a posesive bitch but does she have a right to be? That is the question... thankd for reviewing
Date: Aug 26, 2016 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
Very interesting chapter. I feel that Lizzy was one of his customers and somehow ended pregnant with his baby, so he was kind of forced to accept her in his life. I don't think they're married though, and I don't think he loves her either bc I don't feel he is passionate towards her. And I feel that Valentino is genuinely attracted to Lindsey which doesn't make him a jerk when flirting.
I understand that lindsey is confused but there is so much more to discover about Valentino! not everything is what it seems...
Very much looking forward to the next chapter and thank you for writing this wonderful story.
Author's Response:
interesting concept. Lizzy certainly is the fifth wheel in the confusing love triangle. does she rightly have a stake in the game or is she just bluffing? that's the million dollar question. thanks for reviewing and you are welcome. you now need to start reading another one of my stories. suggestions? fear of flying is one everyone seems to love though the reviews dont show it. it was one of my first stories I wrote years ago when people really didnt review but each year its voted a fan fic favorite so you just may like it. stories I have written
feel my heartbeat was my first
fear of flying then the sequel fear of loving
oil and vinegar
blinded by love
creating history
im only human
gigolo
enjoy my friend!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
So many things going through Lindsey's head. What a jerk if he is married and flirting so bad with her. Time will tell. Great chapter
Author's Response:
but is he married? thats the question. poor Lindsey she's confused and doesnt know if she should follow her heart or protect it. Time will tell indeed. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 26, 2016 09:21 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow this story gets better and better. I can just anticipate all the dilemmas coming up and them falling in love and his job getting in the way. Im getting ahead of myself lol
but ... wow. You sure know how to make a woman want this dream guy! keep up the amazing work! WOW! have I said wow?? lol ok ill shut up now.
Author's Response:
Lol. Glad you enjoyed. Now on to another story.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 08:39 am Title: Chapter 4
GOD I could just picture myself there on the sofa with Valentino doing these things to me... lol He is so mysterious and of course that draws someone in even more. Can't get enough of this story!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 08:15 am Title: Chapter 3
I like the fact that Lindsey is very easy to relate to. Most of us think like her and are very hard on ourselves physically. If only we all had Valentino's to make us feel better! lol
Date: Aug 26, 2016 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Sounds like Lindsey is falling hard for Michael. I'm really loving your story, it is very original and refreshing and fun!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1
After being up to date with your other story, Im only Human, I decided to start this one because I love your writing. I can already say I love your story and am happy that you are pursuing it. God I would love to go on a date with this Valentino, he sounds and looks perfect!
Author's Response:
Well you will have plenty to keep you busy with all of my stories enjoy
Date: Aug 19, 2016 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow...to have friends like Valentino, who knows what will happened! I would have killed my friend it they set me up like that!!! I laughed and laughed! Readers will definitely follow her article in the paper. Lindsey has it bad and definitely needs her bonus to get a little action !!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2016 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Lindsey. I hate how self-conscious she is. Hopefully she can put that bonus to good use and Valentino can show her how beautiful she is. That story cracked me up. I felt so bad for Valentino. That was messed up, but it was also funny. I was laughing too.