Date: Oct 20, 2016 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay your continuing! It's such a unique storyline. I'm glad you changed the original plot, that would've been torture for Lindsey lol. I think Jess is just trying to be a good friend but comes across very harsh. I'm sure Lindsey knows this and will forgive her, I mean if it wasn't for her she wouldn't have met Michael in the first place. Interested in knowing why he was so nervous when meeting Jess if he didn't remember her...hmmmm
Author's Response:
I wonder how the story would have turned out if I stuck with the original plot..I guess we will never know.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful update! Michael certainly filled all of Lindsey's dreams!
Jess did raise some questions. But I'm certain that Michael's feelings for Lindsey are strong and her for him
I'm certain Michael wants a family in the future. He can't always be a giglio!
Author's Response:
There will always be doubts with the relationship. Hopefully they can overcome the implications of Michael's past life decisions
Date: Oct 20, 2016 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hey! Please whatever you do, let them make love! Cause I wanna see how great Michael is at making love ;) And yes another great chapter, loved how they are together, and his explanation between him and the other woman made sense. I do wonder if maybe you could have Elizabeth become crazy and dangerous and try to hurt Lindsey? Or do something close to that cause deep down she wants Michael's love? Just a thought. But do what you feel is right fpr the story.
Author's Response:
Did you not see chapter 15?
Date: Oct 20, 2016 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 15
That explains why in the beginning I thought you were going to tell the love story between Michael and Liz. At first I couldn't get why he was flirting so heavily with Lindsey.
Jess = awkward. I didn't even consider the idea that Michael may not remember her. I didn't realize it had been that long..... I'm so glad you decided to continue this. Now, how long before Lindsey starts to inquire about how similar he is sexually with her as he has been with past clients?
Author's Response:
yea the writing was on the wall quite quickly when people started reading that people liked lindsey so I made a u turn in the story. Something's that happens. I wonder if the reception would have been just as good if lizzy was the love interest in my original intent. I guess we will never know.c
Date: Oct 20, 2016 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
I'm so glad that Michael and Lindsey are happy. I don't know about Jess; she seemed kind of upset that he didn't remember her, then with what she said to Lindsey.......... Well, we shall see, won't we?
Author's Response:
Maybe she's a bit jealous or maybe she is just being a concerned friend. We shall see
Date: Oct 20, 2016 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
They can't get enough of each other!! Loved it! Continue please!
Author's Response:
Do you blame them? It's been a 2 month game of cat and mouse.lol
Date: Oct 20, 2016 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
Another great chapter!! Thanks for sharing your writing!! Wow!
Author's Response:
You are welcome
Date: Oct 20, 2016 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
Jess is annoying because it's too apprehensive towards Lindsey. Lindsey will not suffer because slowly understand Michael's is a nice guy not make it suffer
Author's Response:
She's a bit over the top but deep down she cares.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh you done burned up my damn heart! You didn't warm it you burned it! The love is too much 😩😩 I'm so glad he revealed everything and also his feelings. I don't know what to say lls but I can't wait until the next! I'm speechless ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
is that a good thing or a bad??? I'm not sure
Date: Oct 17, 2016 03:09 am Title: Chapter 14
I think you did so well. It is a perfect ending! I am very happy with it! Just leave it like thisðŸ‘ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
thanks, im still undecided glad you liked it
Date: Oct 16, 2016 05:15 am Title: Chapter 14
Well, as a reader, of course I would never want this amazing story come to the end, because I'm such a big fan of it.
Honestly speaking, if "GIGOLO, Valentino's story" ended, it would be ok because the last chapter was already gave us a compplete feeling. However to me, there are still many questions left unanswered. How will Michael make his way to the music industry? Will he work behind as a song writter/producer or become a singer and perfomer? Will his old job affect his way to fullfill his dream? Will Lindsey find a better job for herslf easily or will she have to struggle? And how Michael and Lindsey arrange their relationship when there are Lizzi who lives in the same house with Michael and their daughter? Will Michael and Lizzie have to work their agreement one more time since they both are in relationship?
You see, there are still many things that me, and I believe other readers, would like to find out.
Anyway, thank you for your story. You're truly an amazing author with many great ideas. Now it's up to you to make the final decision ;).
Author's Response:
I'm still undecided which direction to go. im glad you've enjoyed it. it has been fun to write and a different twist for me. thanks for your support
Date: Oct 15, 2016 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 14
I've read through this story the past two days, you are amazing! Where to continue? I'd like to see Michael start his music career.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading, i'm glad you liked it. im still deciding where to go with it but thanks for the support
Date: Oct 15, 2016 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such a fabulous story. Job well done! Such a great way to end but also so many more chapters you could write....time will tell!!??
Date: Oct 15, 2016 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 14
I loved this, i had hoped they would get to this place and all the mystery surrounding him makes sense now. You did an awesome job, certainly was entertaining. A few bonus chapters would be great, perhaps how her friend takes it, lol could almost picture her face when she tells her they are a couple! Maybe a few years into the future? and still going strong, maybe a child of their own? Just wanted you to know i'm a fan of your writing, thanks for the reason i should be asleep right now and couldn't until i'd finished this chapter, lol! bravo!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Stay tuned to see what I decide to do. Thanks for your support
Date: Oct 15, 2016 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
I think there is a lot you could do with it. I'd definitely follow if you continued it. Just think of all the awkward instances in which he could run into former clients....such as Lindsay's friend lol. His family. Her search for a new job. Possibly having to move away from Liz..... There's a lot that could happen! I could see him being less suave in a relationship, as he can't keep putting on a show when he also has to be vulnerable.
Author's Response:
all excellent ideas. thanks for the support. stay tuned