[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2016 06:45 am Title: Chapter 18
I have a good feeling about this meeting between Lindsey and Michael's family :). Lindsey has already won Katie's heart :)) so I believe other family members will warm up to her too.
What I am really looking forward is the meeting between Michael and Lindsey's family (I jump a little too fast, don't I? :v ) . Because I know it will be not completely pretty at all with Michael's former job :)). It seems like I'm attracted to drama :)).
Anyway, this chapter is super cute! Only Michael can find the most suitable swimsuit for his girl :). Thank you. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2016 05:54 am Title: Chapter 18
Love the way story is developing. Looking forward to read more and more. You're talented, ne l'oublie pas :)
Author's Response:
thanks so much. though I dont know what you say. I dont speak french :) glad you like it
Date: Nov 24, 2016 04:50 am Title: Chapter 18
Lizzy will be jealous because it would be in the place of Lindsey and a good mother to Katie, Katie Lindsey sees as a mom.
Author's Response:
we shall see it might get a little awkward for awhile
Date: Nov 24, 2016 04:31 am Title: Chapter 18
Awwww! Now this is the cutest chapter of them all. Katie is so cute and warms up quickly to Windsey lol! And Michael is such a great dad. Now all Lindsey has to do now is to meet the rest of the family. Great chapter
Author's Response:
thanks, i'm glad you liked it. I wanted to make Katie a little cutie that you just couldnt resist.
Date: Nov 24, 2016 02:05 am Title: Chapter 18
Heart-warming! This is a beautiful scene of Michael as a family man, spending time and bonding with his child, being completely at ease and not having the pressures of his job. Lindsey is lucky to see this part of his life, which means he expects her to be a long-standing fixture in it. Ooooooooo..! I love this xx
Author's Response:
glad you like it. we shall see where they end up next. baby steps.
Date: Nov 24, 2016 01:34 am Title: Chapter 18
Love sweet chapters like these
Im sure lizzy will be jealous when she sees how litte Katie is with lindsey
Author's Response:
glad you liked it. should be interesting when they meet for sure.
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2016 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter, so cute :)
Can't wait to see Lizzy meet Lindsey again under different circumstances now lol.
Author's Response:
yes it should be an interesting meeting for a little while. Glad you liked it.
Date: Nov 23, 2016 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 18
Sweet Chapter, I'm so glad Katie took to Lindsey. She sounds like an adorable toddler.
Michael is a great father and I'm happy he realized he needed to be part of his daughters life!
Next stop the FAMILY meeting Lindsey...
Author's Response:
thanks. I tried to mold her like the toddlers I have experience with.
Date: Nov 23, 2016 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is great...please continue it! You are so very good with characters...as if you can be in the plot...you are so good & full of surprises!!! Thanks for sharing you gift!
Author's Response:
you are welcome. thank you for reading.
Date: Nov 23, 2016 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 18
This was a lovely introduction to Katie. I love the way that you write children; I could almost hear her little voice speaking.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I try to think of my little neice and how she speaks ...she used to say " I want to pum with you" and it was so cute.
Date: Nov 23, 2016 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 18
What a nice afternoon. I hope nothing changes when Lizzy arrives and that Katie still likes bluebird!
Author's Response:
it should be in interesting meeting. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2016 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
Katie is too adorable! I knew she would like Lindsey. I can't wait to see what Lizzy has to say about that.
Author's Response:
thanks. i tried to envision what she would be like should be interesting when Lizzy comes home.
Date: Nov 18, 2016 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 17
Great sex scene feel like its what this story needed ahem proof of his skills in the sheets. Love how he opened up to her i feel like that growth in confidence in lindsay wasnt so much all his doing but her with his encouragement. Love this awesome
Date: Nov 18, 2016 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God. I am hooked already. You have a new fan indeed. I love your writing style already and it makes me feel as if I am in the story with you. The characterization of Valentino/Michael is so well-developed and as we are already seeing, there are more layers to him than just an escort. We already know that the little girl is his daughter but who is the woman? A wife, a surrogate, a maid just taking care of her? I'm dying to know as well! Onlu time will tell but as Lindsey is curious, so am I. See you in the next chapter! 😊
Author's Response:
enjoy the ride to the truth. I hope you enjoy.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2016 03:36 am Title: Chapter 17
Another amazing beautiful chapter, very romantic, sexy and funny! Thank you very much, please keep it up. Give us more and more and more......
Author's Response:
more and more and more...want much? LOL