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Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 16

"Roses are red, violets are blue. I can't wait to fuck you." Haaaaaa! I was too damn done! But boy, Brian was on some other shit. I thought Michael was about to beat that ass down like Chris Brown. Girl!!!!

 

But anyway, I'm gonna continue to sip this tea!

 

See ya!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 10:43 am Title: Chapter 22

It looks promising, hopefully Lizzy has truly come around. Once again, you're writing is impeccable!

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2017 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 22

I really wasn't expecting the story to take this turn with Lizzy, but I am happily surprised!! It's nice to see she put things into perspective and decided to make everyone's life (including hers) easier. Hopefully her and Lindsey will develop a beautiful frienship. 

Did I already tell you how much I love Michael in this story? I'll tell you again lol He is just perfect! Can't wait for the next chapter so they can have hot sex all over his bedroom!!

=D thank you for the great chapter.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2017 11:05 am Title: Chapter 22

I'm glad to know both parts of the story. It's interesting the way you're developing the plot-line. First update of 2017 worth to read ;)



Author's Response:

it's only fair to give her side of the story...Thanks, I'm glad I could provide you with something worthwhile :)

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 22

Well they should both feel better after that little talk. About the present and the future. Michael must've come in and been like O_o what's going on here lol. I can see Lizzy and Lindsey being good friends now tho. I bet Bob is a turd, I can see some future drama there maybe I'm wrong ;)

Author's Response:

things certainly could have gone in the other direction and they could have all been bitter enemies.  You are correct, Mike came in gunning for bear and ready to lay into Lizzy but got the surprise of them getting along.   thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 22

I just read this story from beginning until this chapter!  One of the best I've read! Love the writing and the plot! 



Author's Response:

Welcome to the story and I'm glad to have you as a fan.  Glad you like it.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 10:56 am Title: Chapter 22

Great that Lizzy actually talked about her feeling and thanked Lindsey. Very great chapter! And Katie is still the cutest!!



Author's Response:

Katie certainly is a little charmer.  glad you liked the chapter.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 09:20 am Title: Chapter 22

Glad to see that Lizzybwas able to overcome her insecurities with Lindsay !  Perhaps Katie's littke accident was a blessing in disguise.

Michaels family likes Lindsey! A wonderful day was had!

 

looking forward to more of Mikchael and Lindsay's Romance!



Author's Response:

it certainly seems like the accident was a blessing.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 09:20 am Title: Chapter 22

Glad to see that Lizzybwas able to overcome her insecurities with Lindsay !  Perhaps Katie's littke accident was a blessing in disguise.

Michaels family likes Lindsey! A wonderful day was had!

 

looking forward to more of Mikchael and Lindsay's Romance!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 22

Hopefully they can all be friends be now, so glad Michaels family accepted Lindsey but the real difficult ones will be Lindsey's family cavt wait to see that happening

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 22

After this chapter I understand more for Lizzie. Behind all those b!tchy attitude, she is just insecure. I think she and Lindsey can make great friends in the future.

Thank you for the new chapter.

Author's Response:

She too has her insecurities and reasons for being the way she was.  Now everyone can move forward for sure.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 22

Good to see Lizzie has come to her senses at last, and knows that Michael needs to have a life and a relationship of his own. Althought I guess any mother would feel a bit insecure, especially if their child bonded with the "other woman". It's a natural female reaction, only Lizzie was being a bitch about it.

 

And talk about ending on a cliffhanger..! Just as I thought we were getting into some hot, sweaty Michael-sex, up he goes and struts out to eat!!! Nnnggggghh....oh well, just have to wait until the next chapter I suppose :D xx



Author's Response:

LOL..sorry, a way to a mans heart is through his stomach so they say plus he needs to eat to have some energy for that christening of his bedroom with Lindsey for the first time under his roof.

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2016 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yayyyyyyy!!!!! They are finally together!!!! 😄😄 and she is not getting Valentino but Michael....for FREE.99!! 😂 yassss! I can agree with that price range!



Author's Response:

LOL  you r too funny

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2016 02:47 am Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter as always Tinker, i loved how linsey was able to save Katie's life, she is sure to be Michael's hero, they are a great couple and hope their love for one another only grows deeper and more intense, i love this story so much, hope he doesn't lose custody of Katie, that would break his heart. never stop writing Tinker, its a great story!



Author's Response:

thanks for the support and for reviewing.  glad you like it

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2016 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 21

Thank goodness Lindsey was there to save Katie!

Poor Michael, now going to have to fight for his daughter! He is a good father but will his past conduct to haunt him?  Even if he can prove he's a great dad?  So much to think about!  Thank goodness he will have Lindsey support

Mama Katr likes Michaels Lindsey.  Whoo Hoo! 



Author's Response:

very good question.  will Lizzy use it against him?  One would hope not considering she used his services.  thanks for reviewing

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