Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh my goodness! She had better let him in!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well guess I was wrong, not the nanny. But I still don't believe she is his wife. We shall see.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
Not liking this Lizzy person. I bet she is just the nanny. Yeah, bet she is. lol
Date: Mar 09, 2017 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
So mysterious...such beautiful writing!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
So mysterious...such beautiful writing!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Your work is simply amazing! I'm in love with this story!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loving it! So good!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well he may not be the 'Michael Jackson' but he is still Michael Jackson. Who wouldn't have the hots for him?!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very intriguing! I don't generally read 'AU' stories, but this one sounded too good to give up! I also love your writing, based on your other stories.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2017 03:42 am Title: Chapter 25
It's so great to have a sister likes Courtney, who can give you advice and puts some sense into you when you're not in your right mind. I only have an older brother and gosh, you know how dumb men are when it comes to feelings LOL. Anyway, I'm glad that Lindsey decided to hear Michael out. I cannot wait to see what Michael kept under his sleeve. Thank you for the new chapter.
Author's Response:
Oh year brothers are useless for sure. I have 3 myself. Thankfully Lindsey had Courtney's wisdom especially as a married woman. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: Mar 06, 2017 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh what will mom say when she finds out about Michael's past. May be hard for her to accept. Looking forward to more!
Date: Mar 06, 2017 01:26 am Title: Chapter 25
Doubts Lindsey have no reason to exist because Michael will make a nice surprise. Write the next to know what will be the surprise
Author's Response:
You are correct he will have a nice surprise. But what will it be. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Mar 06, 2017 12:13 am Title: Chapter 24
Lindsay does well to trust Michael because he loves her and will not return to de the gigolo. The answer to the question will be in the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2017 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 25
What a good advice. That man keeps remaining a mistery. Surprise could be such a great thing. Hopefully they will be together for their very own Christmas. Update soon... Please :3
Author's Response:
Someone had to knock some sense in her before she stewed and ruined a good thing. Thanks for reviewing