Date: Feb 29, 2016 03:29 am Title: Diversion
@@ things are not getting well. Thank you for the new chapter. I hope Michael won't be addicted or overdoes.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! We'll have to see how he deals with it. :3
Date: Feb 26, 2016 11:20 pm Title: Nothing Left
Woa your story is very interesting. I really like it. I like the way you write. I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so, so much!!! I'm happy you like it <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2016 01:20 pm Title: Rest
Mike needs to get off the drugs forreal. I hope they get back together soon!!!
Author's Response:
Unfortunately he feels a little abandoned right now. Plus the memories of his father still hurt him. He needs help to get away from drugs :(
Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it <3
Date: Feb 21, 2016 08:00 pm Title: The Bullet
No Michael noooo! :(
Author's Response:
Yeah, it happened :'3
Thanks for reviewing <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2016 05:00 pm Title: The Bullet
Oh no, Michael. I hope he gets help.
Author's Response:
We'll have to wait and see how it turns out :( Thanks for reviewing <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2016 01:38 pm Title: Pinky Promise
Was that Michael at the end? Good chapter. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Yes. The POV alternates between Michael and Robyn, so it was him in the end :) thanks <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2016 06:27 pm Title: Change of Heart, or How To (Almost) Mess It Up
Great chapter. Good for Zoe, Mike needed a reality check.
I wonder if Robyn might br pregnant?
Author's Response:
Michael becomes a real jerk when he gets drunk+faded.
I assume we'll know bout Robyn once Michael gets back home, too. Maybe he'll notice something, or maybe he won't :3
Date: Feb 11, 2016 05:49 pm Title: Change of Heart, or How To (Almost) Mess It Up
CASSSIEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! omggggggg she's .......lawd Jesus!!!!!.........I'm speechless...........
Im done u killed me!!!!! Lucky I got nine lives!!!!
Lawd she's beautiful......Robyn is beautiful.........lawd......I'm dead
I'm completely dead!!!
Zoe is the real mvp!!!! Melanie a thot, anyway........Lml done
Dean still alive I see..... **Prince's voice from Legends Panel** I don't see it for me
Anyway Good Update!!!
Author's Response:
Michael's got babes around him ;) and he can't keep his hands to himself apparently.
Will he really repent or nah? Mhhh...
Date: Feb 10, 2016 03:07 pm Title: On My Mind
........................no comment..........................died on February 10, 2016 @6:04 p.m.
........................funeral is on February 19, 2016 @10:00 a.m.........................
Lollll but.......this chapter..........has me gone........my edges have been snatch off again!!!!!!!
I'm just done lol, I wonder how michael feels????
Anyway Good Update!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
We'll see about Michael feelings tomorrow ;)
Don't die on me though :3 <3
Date: Feb 09, 2016 06:33 pm Title: Truth or Dare
Dang it my last review I meant regrowing, but anyway.....
*Beyoncé's voice* carry on
Girl I'm getting a little growth in these edges you know, I'm getting my everlasting life right now.
I just can't wait!!!!!
Anyway Good Update 😂😂👏👏
Author's Response:
Soon *Lady Gaga Style*
Date: Feb 08, 2016 07:54 pm Title: Leave It Behind
**Cheesing all crazy** **slowly reviewing edges back**..............I'm excited!!!!!!!
Lolll anyway, Good Update!!!!!
Author's Response:
Take care of those edges cause they'll be endangered soon ;)
Date: Feb 07, 2016 04:11 pm Title: We Escalate
Well dayum!!!! I just lost all my edges from this chapter!!!! Lawd, this is just crazy.
Like, to some degree, I understand why Robyn is upset, but the thing is.......... They're not together so him smoking pot doesn't really concern her, if you want to be technical. But then, he just express that he wants to be in a relationship with her again, so he should've told her that he's been smoking pot. And, him smoking pot, is his release of not grieving about his father's death. The thing is, he can't keep or trying to, make excuses as to why he do things, because clearly, Robyn is over it.
But dang............. she told him to not come back....... lawd.......... imma have regrow my edges back because this too much
And also, I feel as though she keeps December-I mean Dean, around because he's a rebound from Michael. Like she wants to move on but can't because she's so in love with Michael. So really she's kinda playing with both of their feelings because she doesn't want to hurt them, but she is without realizing it.
Now, I feel as though Michael is going to try and fix it but can't so he's just going to go to Florida and relax his mind and lay back and groove his mind (Lml tried to remake 'Rock with You', also, did you see the Off the Wall documentary??)
Lastly, I kinda hope that Michael might, find a girl like as a friend but to Robyn as someone with competition. I'm tired of Dean head ahh I need someone to fight for Michael lol, I love drama.
Anyway Good Update!!!!
Author's Response:
I swear to God I was sweating while writing this lol
Will Michael stay and forget about Florida? Will he go on the trip anyway? And if so, will he be a good boy or while he fuck it up entirely? Who knows! (Not me cause I didn't start writing the next chapter yet lol)
I like your remake of RWU ahah, and I don't think I'll see the OTW documentary unless there are new footage of Michael.
I'll think hard about next chapter. Everyone will have to take a stand, eventually. ;)
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2016 02:47 pm Title: We Escalate
oh lord omg
Author's Response:
Yup, Michael fucked up... again. Lol
Date: Feb 06, 2016 03:23 pm Title: Insecurities
Tbhhhh/// She has beautiful legs like god lee!!!! They're better than mines!!!!
Anyway I'm a need Dean head to go don't like him no moe
Lol Good Update!!!!
Author's Response:
I know right? Legs goals 4 life!
Date: Feb 06, 2016 03:15 pm Title: No Pouts
She needs to leave Dean head ahh alone, he's not even a good person yo even marry!!!! Lawddd reminds me of the Tyler Perry movie, 'Why Did I Get Married?'
Loll Good Update!!!
Author's Response:
Never saw the movie, I'll document on it! Thanks for the review <3