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Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2016 12:21 pm Title: Superwoman

Marcus capisce di non essere un buon papà geloso del grande legame d'affetto con Michael lo diffama rovinando la vita. Maddox fa bene restare con Michael perché si comporta come un vero papà dando tanto affetto rispetto a lui.



Author's Response:

That is very true. Instead of getting jealous of Michael and spending his days trying to ruin him, he should have been spending time trying to be a better father.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2016 06:28 pm Title: Superwoman

🙋🙋!

I loved this chapter too. The foreshadowing of Marcus's be is clear. Michael still has that same insecurity that he needs to let go of. Thank goodness though, that Nina finally got the picture about Marcus. He was bad news then and he still is.

Lol, at Nina telling Maddox the girls and his brother were made from magic. Nice save Nina, nice save! Lol. Michael just had to bring that up to mess with her. 😂😂

Thanks!🙋👍👏

Author's Response:

Thanks!! Marcus is still lurking trust he hasn't given up yet and right Michael is just as insecure about the situation as he ever was, but at LEAST Nina is being realistic about it this time around. 

Michael can't miss an opportunity to mess with Nina lol 

Reviewer: pgonzalez97 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2016 01:42 am Title: Superwoman

Aw I am so happy you got back to this story and that Michael and Nina are maturing d84;a039;. Love it!

Author's Response:

Thanks! They are maturing finally we'lol see if that continues.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 06:54 pm Title: Superwoman

My heart cracked when Maddox cried! That was a very cute moment. I like how you don't only have these adorable perfect kid moments; instead you have the human ones that people often leave out.

I'm glad Nina is going to try it out

 



Author's Response:

I was feeling emotional writing that part too! 

Nina is going to give this tour thing a go, but will it be good for them?? Idk 

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 06:51 pm Title: Superwoman

lol cute chapter im glad to see them working things out in their lives



Author's Response:

Thanks! We'll see if it lasts!

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 08:53 am Title: Superwoman

How is Marcus suppose to better himself and try to see Maddox if she doesn't answer the phone or allow supervised visitation, makes no damn sense she never answers the phone so how will he one day be a better father smh but it's cute that they are starting good hopefully Maddox gets time with his dad on Father's Day 



Author's Response:

That is true however until he is in the right mind she's just going to leave him alone because right now with him trying to turn Maddoz against Michael it's not healthy having Marcus around. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 04:57 am Title: Superwoman

I'm so much in heaven with how these two are together now. If only they had been so open and honest with each other when they were actually married. Man I know the bump that makes these wheels fall off is going to be a doozy. I can't even focus too long on how great they are together when things are good because I know with them things will get just as bad.

Creepy, Ugly internet crying.  I'm so torn. 

More sooooooooooooooon!!!! <333



Author's Response:

Awww and yes if they would've acted like this a year ago ain't all that drama had to happen! But you right this tour is about to take them on another rough ride!! 

Lmao at the creepy internet crying that image has not left my mind 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2016 02:14 pm Title: This Time Around

Yep, it was a harsh reminder of MJ's death. From the stories of untold charity work, to the mourning masses, to it breaking first on TMZ.

 

I loved the sweetness of this chapter. They are finally starting to feel like a "real" couple!



Author's Response:

Ugh I know I couldn't even look at any news sites or watch Tv. It's honestly like losing a family member losing idols...

They're developing quite well for now we'll see if they survive this tour 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2016 12:49 pm Title: This Time Around

Aww...I really LOVED and adored this chapter!🙌

They are really trying and compromising and it's beautiful... Nina's mom has always been a diamond and she sees the potential.

Priya is ALL Nina. Lol, so Michael has his work cut out for him. Paris is funny because she's definitely MJ's twin-she milked her sisters trouble moment for all it was worth. Lol. Her acting was mint, like her daddy's. That head turn of non-forgiveness was gold. Michael gave them a good lesson though because they need each other.

I'm so glad MJ involved Nina in the planning of Prince's party...👍👏 He's doing what she's always wanted. Wow, can't believe Prince is almost one. Seems like yesterday he was just born.

Lol at Nina catching him checking out that young lady at the store!😂 The old her would've thrown a fit from the depths of HELL, but this new her is realistic at least, that the man has eyes, as long as he doesn't touch🙅🙏💯👊! Hmm...from her behavior, she might be down for a little threesome action-ya never know😆🍀b🚨🐇🔪🆘📣🏃. LMAO. We don't need a Glen Close, "Fatal Attraction" moment though-"I will not be ignored Dan!"😂😂

Good job Michael of not allowing Nina to be looked over in the toy store!👏👍 I'm so glad of Nina's response to that reporter regarding MJ and Maddox. I'm even more proud that she restrained herself from cursing him out on his question about why they divorced. They TRIED it and FAILED-she didn't take the bait!👊👍

Thanks!👏🙋

P.S. I caught the Prince shout out. Thank you. No girl, I'm still crushed and honestly, downright depressed about his passing just like I was for Michaels... With each death, it feels like my childhood and piece of my life is dying with them...what a time to be alive...😢😢😭😭BUT, this new generation is a total bust.😧😩😣 Rest well my Purple Majesty!👑👠🔮🎵🎶🎸🌹🌈💧💧 NP: one of my favorites-"Adore" By. Prince...until the end of time, I'll be there for you. You own my heart and mind, I truly adore you...if God one day struck me blind, your beauty I'd still see...Love is to weak to define,just what you mean to me!🎶🎵🔮🎸👑

Author's Response:

I wasn't even that big of a Prince fan but now watching all of his videos I realized he was one of a kind it's so sad to lose another legend. I'm still not over it!!! 

 

Lmao we definitely don't need a fatal attraction moment in here lol omg Nina is being more lenient now realizing that Michael is a man that loves women he's going to look it's just in his nature. Michael definitely has his work cut out for him with the girls I can't wait to write them as older more divalistic princesses. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2016 06:20 am Title: This Time Around

Yessss. It was such a shock to hear about Prince. So sudden and kinda similar to how Michael went. 😓😓. Great and fitting shout out.

Strong internet hate (you know I love you girl!!)for giving us such a beautiful chapter. The other shoe is going to fall soon and all this lovey dovey stuff it's breaking my heart man. They're doing sooooooo good I'm proud of both of them. Nina is so cute now. It's just giving me s glimpse of what it would have been like had they gone though a more normal courtship. 

Such a great chapter my creepy Internet love!!

more soon!!!<333

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2016 12:32 am Title: This Time Around

Avevano divorziato per colpa di Marcus lo aveva accusato falsamente di aver molestato Maddox. Bello vederli giocare con Priya e Paris

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2016 06:07 pm Title: Sugarcoating

It feels good to see them getting along and trying to hear each other out rather than ASSuming and going from 🅾-💯 based on it.🌹👫

Now, Mikes family is another problem altogether. Yes, they don't like her, except Janet now, but it's based on what MJ was telling them during their marriage and her actions during the marriage, divorce and after.

Nina never really gave them a chance either or really tried to get to know them. She was standoffish and blunt, which in turn, in their minds, proved their ASSumptions right and vice versa.

I think, if he can get his family and Nina really together and talking to try and understand each other, the relationship between not only them and her will improve, but it will stop having Michael feeling pulled between the two sides or feeling like he has to choose.

Good boy Michael! 👍🙌😂 He finally got it almost completely right explaining himself, his intentions, motives, and shortcomings to Nina without BS'ing or placing blame on anyone else or anything.

Oprah tried it. 🙋 wig!😴 I'm NOT here for Marcus's BS at all. Nope, Nada. Now, since MJ talked about the situation, I'm sure he's coming around again, looking for his next 15y86;. Man, fuck him. In that order.📌📣

Thanks!👏👍

Author's Response:

Yes, we'll see some lines of communication opening up between these two!

But right Mike's fam is a big problem and they're about to become and even bigger problem. And Right Nina has never gone out of her way to impress anyone or even get to know any of them on a personal level. 

No one's gonna get any dirt out of Michael's mouth! lol Oprah did try it though. You better believe this is going to stir up Marcus.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2016 06:18 pm Title: Sugarcoating

Nina took that news well! I like how he broke it to her...he's one step closer to asking her first :P

So, everyone in Michael's family doesn't like her, except Janet. So, why isn't Janet helping?! Nina can't catch a break, there.

I'm hoping Michael didn't make any unintentional missteps! It's nice when they get along



Author's Response:

One day he'll get it right lol! Nina may have to take his mother aside one day and talk to her one on one. Then by tackling the heart of the family she'll win them all over. 

The only thing Michael did WRONG in his interviews is make it seem okay that he had Chloe in his hotel - unacceptable. Don't think Nina won't pick up on that. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2016 09:04 am Title: Sugarcoating

Lawd Nina and her skepticism. I understand that he makes a show of his life for the public but I don't think he's using her to further his good image agenda. Not anymore at least. He's being a good boy. Lol. 

Oprah is a habitual line stepper in real life. Lmaoooooo. No vague sugar coating for her. 

I hope these interviews will clear some things up but I doubt this is the last we will see of Marcus. His degenerate ass is going to come up again. A rating of 10 Ughs for that fact. 

Things are good but I have an itch developing for what's to come. Cries!!! 

More soon!!! <333



Author's Response:

She knows Michael too well now and is afraid to fall prey to manipulation. Even though like he said he doesn't do it on purpose he's always been crazy about her for real.

Oprah tried it! Lol 

A strange twist is about to happen with Marcus. Just wait and see. 

And yeah those two aren't out of the woods yet! 

Reviewer: pgonzalez97 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2016 01:09 am Title: Remember the Time

Ugh I am in LOVE with your work girl. Seriously this trilogy is great. I'm so suprised with how I went from being on Ninas side to Mike's side to hating how Nina treats Michael to thinking "dang Michael get your act together". Like wow you really have a talent for telling a story and developing plot and characters. Hope to read the next chapter soon!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

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