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Date: Jan 09, 2016 07:17 pm Title: Mistakes and Apologies

Who the Hell gave this negro some damn liquor knowing he can't handle it at all. And I mean at ALL?????? Like who??? Lmao. Mike, is just....idk, weak when it comes to alcohol. I mean, this is the very first time in a while that I seen him get drunk but I believe  Will get over it..... I hope, lol.



Author's Response:

LOL The man is sneaky, he gets his alcohol outta nowhere he's so sure he can handle it.. But can he tho? Obviously not lmao

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Date: Jan 09, 2016 06:54 pm Title: Dealing With It

Still, I feel bad for Joseph and that illness he has to go through but the way he treated his family, I see this as his punishment for doing them wrong. For a moment, I thought Rob was gonna talk to him about the bruises he given to Michael but instead, she just asked how he was doing and all of that.

 



Author's Response:

Joseph is a bad man towards his family, but he can be dangerous towards Robyn too. And Michael doesn't really like his father having any type of conversation with Robyn for the moment. However, she may talk to his mother soon...

 

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Date: Jan 07, 2016 10:44 pm Title: Facing It

Oh no. He has liver cancer. That cancer isn't a joke at all I swear. I do and I don't feel bad for him so.... But it's good to know he's doing better than he was before. I see that Rob wanted to tall to him to but of course Mike wouldn't allow it. She should have known that.

This convo between father and son is about to be very interesting.

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Date: Jan 07, 2016 10:32 pm Title: Back

Happy for them to be home peacefully and safe. I'm sure they both gotta brag about they're trip mom is the stupid petty things that happened. 

AnywaAnyway, I'm so curious as to what happen to Joseph. I mean, yes he's done wrong and whatnot but it's sknow he's hospital bound. But why the cliffhanger tho????? ;( lol.

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Date: Jan 07, 2016 10:16 pm Title: Babies

Michael is too much of a good boyfriend. I mean, he took them to Disneyworld for crying out loud. Like, I wish I was Robyn now. I never been to Disneyworld and I'm 18. Yeah, that sucks.

Back to the story....So they talking about making some mini Jacksons although Rob doesn't want to have any right but but later in life. I can't wait to see that happen.



Author's Response:

I've never been there either! :'( ahah!

Reviewer: ItsJustDesire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2016 11:03 pm Title: Babies

I try not to comment all the time, so I wont bother you. But I just absolutely love this story. But ive said that before. great job!! ill be reading. :)



Author's Response:

Aw dear, I always appreciate every review I get! Thank you for reading <3

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Date: Jan 05, 2016 02:48 pm Title: Surprises

I wasn't expecting the semi-cold shoulder From Michael. That's was unexpected. I thought maybe he would tall to her about her trust issues again but I guess not. To be honest, I'll feel some type of way myself because he doesn't questions his trust for Her but with her, she has to learn to let go of the past and move on from Michael's mistakes has he has.

But baby girl sure did get her man back once and for all with that singer and orchestra then the spa. I'm like well damn then. That was a good idea. Thousand of brownie points for you Rob.



Author's Response:

Michael really cares about Robyn and enjoys the time he spends with her. He doesn't want to argue since she's the only one to make him feel better about his whole family issues. But, as you say, they'll have to talk about their relationship in order to move on.
Ah, brownie points! She got away with it... only for the time being, though!

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Date: Jan 03, 2016 09:43 pm Title: Flowers

I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter. :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2016 08:03 pm Title: Flowers

Oh ok. So Em is a lesbian?!?!?!? Wooow! I wouldn't have known that she was. And poor Robyn just ran with it and made another yet of assumptions about Mike cheating. She really DO need to work on that. It's gonna tear them down everytime and that's not good. And he made a very valid point. He gives her his phone everytime without a care so what's the use of feeling like he's hiding something. Hopefully that can recover from this on their next stop.

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Date: Jan 03, 2016 07:55 pm Title: Trouble

Well I see everything was fine and dandy when they made it to Albuquerque until some dude try to push up on Robyn. Good thing his friend told Mike what was up cause his ass would have been grass. Now everything just went completely downhill because Em wants.to text Mike that she's in love but that response tho.



Author's Response:

Can't wait til you read the next chapter LOL

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Date: Jan 03, 2016 07:48 pm Title: New Year's Resolution

Awww you had there first stop be in New Orleans. I wasn't expecting that but wow. But NOLA is the best. I wish you could have let them go to the French Quarter and eat at Cafe De Moine they have the best crawfish etouffe or Bourbon Street. But hey, I'm satisfied with this.

I'm happy they're enjoying New Year's Eve together on a perfect note, drama free of anything although there really wasn't but on Michael'spart dealing with his father. He needed this trip alot more than Robyn I would say.

So Las Vegas is the next stop and I can't wait for that as well. But peep the couples in the next room though hurting the sheets. Lmao.

Reviewer: ItsJustDesire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2016 12:00 am Title: New Year's Resolution

Over the last couple of days I have been reading your story, and I have to give you some serious props. This is a great story. im rootingfor them to stay together. I love them. 😍 Can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading! Who knows if they'll stay toghether or not? 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2015 10:57 pm Title: Prisoners

Dang, how many bruises do he have and how bad are they gonna get??? He seriously, needs to move in with Robyn. 

Finally they embark on their trip.:)



Author's Response:

Michael is not gonna move in with Robyn any soon, unfortunately. He really cares about his mother and knowing she's alone with his father would be a torture for him :(

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Date: Dec 30, 2015 10:52 pm Title: Night Shift

Melanie needs to sit her thirsty ass down somewhere. Mike don't want you girl So chill. He said he had a girl get the hint now be gone. I knew she was up to something no good. I just knew it.

These two are ridiculously some freaks. Lol. In the car and filming it. Oh god!!

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Date: Dec 30, 2015 10:46 pm Title: Plans

Omg, the beginning I thought was real. You had me there girl you really did. Like my heart was literally beating ouuta my chest. 

Robin should really start trusting him some at least because he has changed since high school and matured. The more she doesn't trust him, the harder its gonna be and the more bad dreams she'll have. 

As for their trip, they should really stop in las vegas. Hopefully, New Orleans is on the list. 



Author's Response:

Las Vegas, uh... The city of sin... I think you gave me some inspiration!

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