Date: Oct 21, 2018 09:05 pm Title: Gravity and Feathers
Wow, this is incredibly detailed and well-written. I appreciate that you let Michael forget the worst of his life on Earth, because let’s be honest, the press turned that into a mess. Not to mention it opens up opportunities further down the line for plot points should you decide to dust this off and write some more. I can’t wait to take a look at any other works you might have posted!
Date: Apr 13, 2016 11:40 pm Title: Gravity and Feathers
cool story I really liked it
Date: Nov 25, 2015 12:07 pm Title: Gravity and Feathers
An amazing start...I'm eager for your continued writing. I hope you decide to continue this story!
Date: Nov 07, 2015 12:52 pm Title: Gravity and Feathers
Honestly, I don't read fanfictions on here often due to most of them not being my cup of tea, but this one really caught my eye. This concept is so iriginal, which is a rarity nowadays. I can't wait to read more from you!
Date: Nov 07, 2015 06:57 am Title: Gravity and Feathers
Wooooooooooow I'm hooked!
Date: Nov 06, 2015 09:58 pm Title: Gravity and Feathers
I like this, alot..Your imagination is so beautiful and vivid like mine is. And the banner is so beautiful. Keep going please.
Date: Nov 06, 2015 06:49 pm Title: Gravity and Feathers
This first chapter was amazing... Taking a chance in something greatly extraneous as this which doesn't appear up nearly in Slash is extravagent. It's far beyond proficiency... And you created a vivid picture of scenery clearly... Everything was right on point. I loved this...
- SlashGirl