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Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 08:31 pm Title: Water and Skin

Omg that was hot  that all l can say her brother is no good  what about Liz she need make Michael enjoy himself because she a hoe 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Lol! I guess she kind of is :)

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 06:01 pm Title: Thunder and Lightening

Michael is such a sensitive soul! Make our hearts melt! Great chapter, hun!

Author's Response:

Ineed he is :) Thank you  <3

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 09:58 am Title: Thunder and Lightening

The more sensitively Michael acts, the more my heart feels for him :(. What he had been through was so terrible >:(.

I really like the scene you put your 4 characters together. To me, I picture it as a classical scene in classic old novels, or an old-established picture in black and white or sepia.

I LOVE Dr. House! It's so nice that you put him in your stories. Although I think this Dr. Floyd is more creepy :)).

Thank you for having updated. I've been very happy to see many new chapters these days :D.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I think you might be right about Dr. Floyd.

 

I don't know why - I was having so much trouble with it before, but lately it's writing itself. :)

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2016 02:13 pm Title: Thunder and Lightening

Mistery will never stop right? Really good job. Love the part in which 4 characters are there, seems like a scene of a really really antique book and the magic that's surrounding them. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really tried to bring those characters to life, their flaws, quirks etc :)

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2016 07:45 pm Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Wow! This story is so intriguing. I love how it has all my favorite genres: horror, romance, and mystery! Some of the elements are disturbingly brilliant and I love Annabelle and Michael has a couple, and I am smitten with Michael's charming chapter!

Great story, Cory! And congrats on your nomination! This story definitely deserves it!

Author's Response:

'Disturbingly brilliant' - that is the most amazing compliment ever! Especially from a brilliant writer such as yourself. You have made my whole night! Thank you! <3

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2016 10:55 pm Title: Fear of Pain

I tell you, Dr. Floyd is so creepy :)) in some crazy, obsessive and also funny ways :)).

I must tell you when I read to the part when Michael and Annabelle came to his bedroom, my pervert mind thought there would be some S&M scenes :)) which is not really my kind :)). But fortunately it was not.

And I know the reason that villain came to Michael's house would be no good -_-. Well, whenever that man appears, bad things will come.

Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Lmfao! I love you!

 

No S&M, just some light B&D, maybe some spanking later on. That cool? Lol

 

Dr. Floyd=Dr. House

 

I just love that guy :)

 

Thank you for making me smile every time!

Reviewer: HanaJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2016 06:05 am Title: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Another great chapter. I'm waiting for the next chap

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Nice to see you <3 If you haven't already, and if you have time, could you please vote for me for best AU (different reality)? It would really mean a lot. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2016 07:28 pm Title: Sex and Vengeance

Oh my Mike! Things are moving so fast @@. But I am glad that Michael didn't have sex with Annabelle. No matter what, he still has a beautiful heart :).

But I know, things cannot be pretty in the future.

Thank you for having updated. I am so happy that there have been so many new chappters :D.

Author's Response:

Lol! Opium nausea or his conscience kicking in? Stay tuned.

 

I don't know what it is, I was having so much writers block with this one before, but now it's like it's writing itself!

 

Thank you so much as always <3

Reviewer: Fifegrl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 07:44 pm Title: Sex and Vengeance

Diane Dimond? I think your on the right track with that one.

Your writing just keeps getting better and better.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! <3

 

Yeah, sometimes I gotta wonder lol

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 10:25 pm Title: Sex and Fear

Gorgeous Liz makes appearance so story has just gotten even better!

Author's Response:

TThank you! Liz is a wild card in this one :)

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 09:42 pm Title: Truth and Ritual Sacrafice

Wow! This chapter scared the mess out of me! Utterly chilling, but I'm not too scared to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you! This is kind of a morbid story, lol

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 08:34 pm Title: Love in Limbo

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OH MY MIKE!!! @#$%^@#@!!!
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You have the same idea as me, girl :)) (well, at least almost the same :v ). I also think the women who always talk trash about Michael in real life but never have the chance to meet and know him are secretly obsessed and in love with him :p.

The thing you bring about the judge in this chapter is like a bomb, girl! When I read the part...well 'that' part :)), I think I screamed like a mad person :)). First I think the judge's hate for Michael comes from jealousy, but now it seems like something is 'deeper'.

And I have to agree with Michael, killing sneddon is a too easy punishment for him.

Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Oh, by the way, I have nominated for two of stories of yours: The Judge's Daughter and Secret Songs :D

Author's Response:

Lol! Maybe there's something about Diane Daimond that we didn’t know too XD

 

Idk, Sneddon? I mean he was obsessed, it was sick. At that point, it's wasn't just "doing his job", anymore. There was something seriously wrong with that guy. That's why he makes such an interesting villain.

Thank you so much for the noms <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2016 07:27 pm Title: Truth and Ritual Sacrafice

Hi, Corybante!

I haven't forgotten about this story. I got some catching up to do. Apologies for the delay.

Author's Response:

Perfectly fine <3 Thank you for reading! Always nice to see you :)

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2016 01:27 am Title: Seeds of Retribution

Sure. But may I ask what nomination?

I am a little bit confused here :))

Author's Response:

It's on the home page under site news. If you click 'read more', you'll see the contest info and the categories. People post who they want to nominate there for each category. Hope this helps. *hugs*

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2016 06:18 am Title: Seeds of Retribution

Following you from the very beginning. Different plot, different characters... Quite interesting!!! And drama everywhere! Just perfect. Keep going



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I can't even tell you how much I appreciate it. <3 I try so damn hard, lol! If you find the time, could you please nominate me for something for the current contest? It's on the main page. *hugs*

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