Date: Oct 21, 2015 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I understand that anger, who would stay nice in that situation with so much pain?
Can't wait for more and the first person pov it's good :)
Author's Response:
Thanks it take a little time to get use to writing this way but it certainly opens up the options for being more descriptive
Date: Oct 21, 2015 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1
You got an amazing idea, girl!!! And I LOVE it, a lot. I'm looking forward to reading more. I can't wait to see what happen next. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it and thanks so much for reviewing. Should be an interesting ride.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2015 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1
great beginning, I like the plot of the story and I like you write in first person
I can´t wait to read next chapters so pls continue
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you like it. First person is different for me but I'm beginning to embrace it..
Date: Oct 20, 2015 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
You got me hooked in!! I love that the way you're portraying him! It's the EXACT opposite of how he was in the public eye (or who knows? What if behind closed doors he did act like this lol) I always wondered what he would've acted like if he was a pure ass 24/7 haha I really felt bad for that therapist tho :( like damn Michael, you didn't have to go off on her like that she's just doing her job lol that's enough to make anyone break down in tears. Is it wrong that I busted out laughing when he said his knee felt as stiff as a groom's....you know lol man I feel like this new therapist isn't gonna put up with ANY of his petty shit and I'm so here for it!!! Hope you continue with this story!!! You're really off to an awesome start!! btw I love how you're writing it from Michael's pov too :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Hopefully he won't be an ass 24/7 but right now he's certainly a major douche I'm glad you like it. I'm not used to first person but I've already noticed I can be more descriptive so hopefully I can keep it going. I'll keep writing if you all keep reviewing. Thanks again..it's gonna be a fun ride.
Date: Oct 20, 2015 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this story and I love this Mike. Very different from the others. He is gonna have to let up on the therapist if he wants to ever get better!!! On the edge of my seat waiting for another chapter
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait. thanks for all your help :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2015 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I havent evem started reading it yet and i know it'll be awesome!!!
Author's Response:
thanks for the confidence. Hope you enjoy it when you do read.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2015 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tinker, you've done it again! I really enjoyed this version of Mike. He's rough around the edges and edgier. It will be interesting when his new therapist comes along. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
rough is an understatement..he's a douche..lol thanks for being my first reviewer! Glad you like it hopefully it will get a favorable reception and I can continue.