Date: Oct 25, 2015 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well, looks like Michael may have met his match in Jo. She definitely doesn't put up with his crap.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love Jo. She definitely is gonna be the one to tame Michael. Mark it down Jo ...2. Michael ...1...meeting him at his worst and calling him Princess! Great story
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 11:03 am Title: Chapter 2
Ha, Jo sounds like a really feisty personality! Michael needs someone like this, ready to stand up to his diva wailing and getting him back on track. It needs some tough love and Jo seems ready for the challenge.
Author's Response:
she certainly is the right person for the job now its just a matter of if he will accept her help. should be an interesting ride. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I have really fallen for this story. You've captured a flawed, but so human side of Michael. Please continue, I love, love, love this!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. I'm rather fond of the plot and am glad it's coming across so well. thanks for reviewing.
Date: Oct 25, 2015 03:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Jo is great love how she puts him back on his place
Lol Princess and sweet cheeks where you find those nicknames?
Can't wait to see how they going to work things out
Author's Response:
the nickname I just make them up somethimes they work sometimes they dont. This time I think they did. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 01:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Great, I think, Jo is the right person for Michael. She will be certainly able to put him in his place and help him.
Princess and Sweet Cheeks LOL
May I have one suggestion? Could you write in begin of each chapter from whose P.O.V it is written? It is not necessary but it simplifies the orientation in the story, I guess.
Author's Response:
thanks for the suggestion. I was planning on doing that after these first two chapters. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 01:01 am Title: Chapter 2
i like jo i think she has what it takes to put mikes butt in its place she definitely wont be taking any of his crap awesome chapter really looking forward to reading more of this amazing story
Author's Response:
yup shes one tough cookie for sure. thanks for the review
Date: Oct 24, 2015 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. I love her first impression of him. Its really interesting how she chooses to perceive him somewhat based off the fact that he's a celebrity and he's extremely wealthy. Glad she didn't lose her cool, that gets nowhere. The sick nicknames he gives her, really bring out his personality esp with which ones he chooses to use for what person, shows he how he perceives them. This is awesome! Love!
Author's Response:
thanks glad you like it. thanks for the review
Date: Oct 24, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jo is one BAMF and I love her! It's gonna be fun watching her whip him into shape.
Author's Response:
She's certainly a strong woman and what he needs. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2015 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the story so far. Its different seeing Michael characterized this way. But its a good different. Too bad about his injuries tho, he has a long recovery ahead of him. I think he just misses being on stage & being independent even more. Hopefully his new therapist will get him out of his funk & on the road to recovery. I hope you keep going with this story. I think you've got another good one here.
Keep up the good work doll. Much love.
Author's Response:
thanks, I'm glad you like it. It's a different twist I think. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2015 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story. I get that his hurt and he feel helpless, which is why he is lashing out at the world. Actually he remind me of someone. But the difference in between him and her is that his trying to get better while she is not. I hope that you will continue with this story and you did great for it being your 1st time with pov :)
Author's Response:
I'm not sure he's trying too hard to get better but hopefully he will soon. Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2015 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1
great chapter looking forward to reading more of this story
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2015 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Keep going, you're portraying a Michael Jackson behind the stage, I find this really interesting.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. Thanks for giving some imput and reviewing.
Date: Oct 21, 2015 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far, keep going!!!! and i died when he said, "my knee is stiffer than a new groom's cock"---bahhhaaaaaaa! love it! i'm gonna use that one!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. Sometimes I dont know where I come up with these one liners. I promise there will be more in his future. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: Oct 21, 2015 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This is really depressing but i love it! You should definitely keep going with this!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I promise it wont always be depressing. It is a scarey thought if things had turned out differently when the accident happened. Makes you think how would I act if in his shoes.
Thanks for reviewing