Date: Dec 20, 2015 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hahahaha omg I KNEW Michael was dreaming! No way was Jo going to hop straight into a 69 with him, not that much, that fast. I'm guessing their first time will be enough to shake the house down to the foundations, and not on a couch watching tv. A big-ass bed, satin sheets, pillows everywhere...you name it. Wow, I can't wait. It's definitely going to happen, or one of them is going to have an accident trying to hide the pent-up sexual energy.
Great update! Btw - I should be sleeping..!
xx
Author's Response:
you were the only one...yea it should be special if and when it happens. thanks for reviewing and staying up late..lol
Date: Dec 20, 2015 02:29 am Title: Chapter 12
I think Adam does have feelings for Jo, Jo will ultimately decide if either of them is worthy of her time and heart.....
Date: Dec 20, 2015 02:12 am Title: Chapter 11
Hope is eternal, at this point, anything is possible......
Date: Dec 19, 2015 01:26 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh Michael, he has to take it one day and step at a time.....
Author's Response:
welcome new reviewier. thanks for reading, I hope you like it and thanks for all the awesome reviews.
Date: Dec 19, 2015 01:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Only a matter of time before they get together....
Date: Dec 19, 2015 12:52 am Title: Chapter 8
Things are heating up for these two. Its getting good....
Date: Dec 19, 2015 12:38 am Title: Chapter 7
Interesting...Jealousy rears its ugly head.
Date: Dec 19, 2015 12:16 am Title: Chapter 6
Men and their inflated egos....Michael's mind stays in the gutter, wonder why he didn't tell Jo about his personal problem? SMH...
Date: Dec 19, 2015 12:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Michael needs to concentrate on healing than getting some.... I think he should tell Jo about his personal issue....Let's find out!
Date: Dec 18, 2015 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael needs this in order to fully heal, very shameful he didn't have friends like this in his life...Loving it ALOT!
Date: Dec 18, 2015 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael is sooooo UGH in this chapter! Typical man.....loving it. Keep it coming!
Date: Dec 18, 2015 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jo is exactly what he needs at the moment. :) Loving it!
Date: Dec 17, 2015 04:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Well then! That was quite the kiss, I'm sure. I sense a little love triangle action now that Adam has entered the ring. But I'm still rooting for Michael. Jojo is on the right track with suggesting this day trip; Michael definitely needs to get out of the house. Loved reading this!
Author's Response:
Team Michael all the way! she realized that he was damaged goods and just wanted to give him a chance to be normal. thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it
Date: Dec 16, 2015 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE this chapter!
Michael is so cute. I really like the "ass" part. I laughed hard when Jo complimented Michael on his ass :)). She surely has a humorous mouth.
Thank you for the new chapter. I really enjoyed it. Finallly there is light after the rain.
Author's Response:
how could she not like his ass right? she is all around a good one, she's tough which he needs, funny which he likes, and compassionate. thank you for reviewing. when people review it keeps me motivated to continue to write.
Date: Dec 16, 2015 05:57 am Title: Chapter 12
Adam may have feelings for Jo but it's clearly she has feelings for Michael, you don't kiss someone u don't like (as in like like). Like that
I'm sure there's more kissing in their day together
Author's Response:
we shall see what the day brings..should be interesting. hopefully time to get to know each other. thanks for reading and reviewing,