Date: Dec 25, 2015 05:52 am Title: Chapter 14
OMG! Michael and his mouth!!! I must be bad that I like it :D
Thank you for the new chapter. It is very sweet. I can't wait to read more.
Merry Christmas!!! :)
Author's Response:
naa you're not bad you just like a different Michael then most people write. I like to think maybe he had a little naughty side to him and wasnt the saint thats why I write him like this. thanks for the review
Date: Dec 25, 2015 02:42 am Title: Chapter 14
THANK YOU!!!!!! What a wonderful update for Christmas!!!!!!!!!!!!
Merry christmas for you and come back soon!!!
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 25, 2015 01:55 am Title: Chapter 14
This must be one of the sweetest chapters ever :).they're sweet together
Not sure how long she can keep denying her feelings for him tho, theyre already talking about meeting her father (ok as friends but still)
Author's Response:
he can be a sweetheart when he wants to be. As strong as she is she just needed him this time. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2015 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
Awww, they really are adorable together! I'm so glad that they opened up to each other about their lives. I can't wait for Jo to stop fighting her feelings for Michael. They really do make the cutest couple.
Author's Response:
thanks. they are good together. thanks for the review
Date: Dec 23, 2015 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm confused, did the dream start after they ate ice cream? Or after she said she needed to get some laundry started and he says he felt sleepy? What jo said to Michael between that was beautiful, but idk if it was real or not... I'm a lazy reviewer but lately i'm only here for your story. Thank you for always updating and not making us wait too long n.n
Author's Response:
It became a dream after she went to do laundry. He came back from the bathroom, the heat kicked on and he fell asleep but formulated the rest in his head leading up to the oral sex and finishing with her waking him up. The next chapter will better explain. Stay tuned. And thanks for reviewing please don't be a lazy reviewer. Hearing you say you come here for this story means the world to me. Makes it worth writing.
Date: Dec 21, 2015 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hopefully Michael is finally on the road to recovery and a relationship can bloom as he is getting better!!!!
Date: Dec 21, 2015 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
I honk Jo may have feelings for Michael!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2015 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
lol you had m thinking what happened was real great chapter looking forward to another great amazing chapter to this amazing story very soon
Author's Response:
thanks. will get something new before christmas
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2015 05:15 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG, you´re genius. Of course, I thought it was real.
Well, now when I am thinking about it, I should know, it is only a dream esp. when Jo told she need more time but it was so real.
Poor Mike, he must be embarrassed now and I can´t wait for Jo´s reaction.
Author's Response:
I wouldnt say genius but maybe clever out of necessity. I was about to pain myself into a corner and was going to make it real but that wold have messed up my plan so I made it a dream. Glad you liked it and it worked. Thanks for the review
Date: Dec 21, 2015 05:14 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG! OMG! You really did fool me!!! I thought that was true!!!
"Suddenly I had diarrhea of the mouth and spilled my guts" - What was that?!! I laughed so hard when I read it.
Anyway, thank you for the new chapter. I like it a lot.
Author's Response:
in his dream he spilled his guts. told her the truth as to why he had a massive hard on and wanted to take her even though he was trying to be good. gotcha! thanks for reviewing
Date: Dec 21, 2015 02:53 am Title: Chapter 13
Lol at their shopping experience
For a minute i thought was real instead of a dream lol, can't wait to see what Jojo will say
Author's Response:
both of them will have enough condoms for awhile for sure. I based the shopping on that video when he went shopping for the first time. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2015 02:44 am Title: Chapter 13
Poor Michael! His balls are gonna turn purple if he doesn't get some! I thought it was real. Such a tease!! Its all good!! Very good chapter! :)
Author's Response:
thanks. it wasnt meant to be a tease originally but I had to pull back or I was going to mess up my plan for the story so I made it a dream. sneaky I know. thanks for reviewing
Date: Dec 21, 2015 12:26 am Title: Chapter 13
Excellent!! I'm waiting for your updates everydays! Keep going, girl, that's great!
Author's Response:
thanks. I try to get something out ever 2-3 days.
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2015 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
It was all a dream!!!!
Author's Response:
yes it was. did I get you?
Date: Dec 20, 2015 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
You really got me good. I totally thought that they had crossed the line. At least Michael's "problem" seems to be going away.
Author's Response:
I know, I'm bad but i did it out of necessity. I had it written and ready to post as if it was real but realized if it was real it would screw up my plans so I made a few changes and poof it was a dream and I guess it worked because I fooled most. thanks for reviewing