[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2016 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 23
Very nice chapter, they're definitely becoming closer. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
yes they are. its getting hot in here...thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2016 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 23
i loved this chapter i loved how sweet they were together great chapter looking forward to another great chapter to this amazing story
Author's Response:
thanks, im glad you liked their progression. things are certainly heating up thanks for reviewing
Date: Jan 25, 2016 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 23
Ok love this! And out of curiosity why did you pick double jeporady? Its one of my favorite movies ever😍. Glad she was able 2 cheer him up tbh i think they couldve worked around the whole his being famous thing, hed draw less
attention without the bodyguards.
Author's Response:
I picked it because it was released around September 1999 and it's October 1999 so timing was right and would be a movie a lady would want to see and a man might like. Not completely a chick flick. Plus I like it too I agree. If he just dressed normal and went alone or without guards I bet he could have got away with things Tough call though
Date: Jan 25, 2016 09:11 am Title: Chapter 22
I feel awful for Adam and I hope his father pulls through. Rose is a trip, haha! I'm sure Michael and JoJo will find their groove when the time is right.
Date: Jan 24, 2016 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 22
I want to scream for them!!! :)) Can't believe it that they were interrupted not only once, but twice!!! And always at the hottest parts! :))
Anyways, thank you for the new chapter.
Date: Jan 24, 2016 06:53 am Title: Chapter 22
Omg.... I just love Rose. She is the best! When they finally are able to be together....Look Out!! They are on fire for each other. Hopefully Adam's dad will make a full recovery. I'm sure mike and Jo Jo will be going to NY. Then they will have plenty of time alone :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2016 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 22
lol interrupted again lol great chapter looking forward to more
Date: Jan 23, 2016 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 22
They're so cute, they were meant to be !
Author's Response:
thanks, I'm glad you like it thansk for reviewing
Date: Jan 23, 2016 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
Lmaooo I felt like screaming when they were interrupted for the second time! Poor Mike, luck's just not on his side this particular night, is it? Oh well, I suppose the pleasure is still to come for him, excuse the pun :)
Excellent writing as usual, and what's with the not liking writing sex scenes?! I think you did exceptionally well there, so keep it going! xx
Author's Response:
I really do hate writing them. they are very hard to write especially this time because its my first story written in first person. I end up reading alot of regular romance novels for ideas. thanks for the support
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2016 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 22
That amazing!!! At least they took a bite of the cake, it will be fantastic that Mj traveles all the way to NY with JoJo, for sure as an incognit and visits Adam's dad. I think their first time will be in the most unexpected time and place, (that happened when they met). Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
you never know where and when it will happen. you'll just have to wait..lol...thanks for taking the time to review
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2016 11:41 am Title: Chapter 22
Hope, Adam´s father will recovery soon.
Poor Mike, first they were interupted by Adam and now by Rose, I bet their first will be pretty soon, it is question of hours I guess :-)
Author's Response:
well at least theres no one left in the house to interupt them this time..lol thanks for taking the time to review
Date: Jan 23, 2016 09:08 am Title: Chapter 22
Poor Adam hope his father will be ok
Lmao gotta love Rose lol
Won't be long before those two finally go all the way, not after tonight
Author's Response:
Rose is a hot ticket for sure. we will see how long they wait...thanks for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2016 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 21
About time! That call would've had to wait! Hot scene! Can't wait to read when they go all of the way! Yeeeeessss!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks. I really hate writing sex scenes. you'll just have to wait to see when they will finally do the deed. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 21
dang it the phone had to ring just when they were finally gonna release all their tension lol great chapter i hope to see another one very soon
Author's Response:
I guess after 3 calls he had to answer. good thing he did it was just crappy timing. thanks for reviewing
Date: Jan 21, 2016 09:28 am Title: Chapter 21
Ditch the fucking cellphone, Mike!!!!! Holy shit...
Author's Response:
yea but it was an emergency after 3 calls in a row. lol...thanks for reviewing.