[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2016 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 30
i love this story it is just sad to see him going through such a tough time great chapter looking forwaard to reading more again soon
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2016 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 30
Pure unadulterated love. Its a beautiful thing between the two right ppl. '
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2016 02:31 am Title: Chapter 29
It looks like Jo is the right person for Mike. She surely keeps him in line. I liked the scene in the gym, like she forced him to walk back alone, I can´t wait for the first time they both say they love each other :-)
Date: Feb 14, 2016 11:01 am Title: Chapter 29
Glad to see Adam is back
Lol at how she got him to walk back across the room
Loved the whole chapter
Date: Feb 14, 2016 12:59 am Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for those new chapters. They are great. You've worked pretty hard. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2016 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 29
i loved how she got him to comply with the therapy lol great chapter looking forward to reading more
Date: Feb 13, 2016 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 29
What awesome motivation to make him "want" to walk!! joJo got points for that one
Date: Feb 13, 2016 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 29
YAY, ADAM'S HOME! Michael is one possessive SOB; I loved how JoJo compared him to an ape and the visual of him beating his chest made me chuckle. Good job with this one.
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2016 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 28
Mmmmmm, Super hot doesn't come close to this chapter! Graphic and beyond is my rate of speed with love scenes. Love love love it! I know JoJo feels pretty damn good with The Force satisfying her every desire! More chapters like this would be icing on everything! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
well the force does have alot of power...
Date: Feb 12, 2016 04:31 am Title: Chapter 28
I loved everything about it!!! I laughed so hard at his " helmeted soldier"!!!! I like how you write. You are very creative , funny, and sincere. Great job on always giving us readers a GREAT read!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I appreciate feedback as it only makes me a better writer.
Date: Feb 11, 2016 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 28
It was worth the wait and, like always, it was written very well. It was graphic enough for it to be illustrative and cause a reaction, but it wasn't gross or overtly pornographic. You have a great style going; just keep it up!
Author's Response:
thanks. I'm glad you liked it and it flowed well enough for you to get it. thanks again
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2016 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 28
Claps!!! You described in such a way I imagined everything. I'd say you must follow the path the story request, when it ask you romance or more graphic details, let it be, just as music... Plot so far has been excellent, keep with it!
Author's Response:
thanks for the kind words of encouragement. i'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2016 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 28
WOW for someone who doesn't like to write sex scenes, you wrote a really good one.
I loved the chapter and poor Rose
Author's Response:
yea poor rose. she certainly got an eyeful...wouldnt be a bad eyeful. thanks for the support. Glad you liked it
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2016 11:52 am Title: Chapter 28
i liked the sex scenes in this chapter looking forward to reading more like it
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I just never know how it will be received. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2016 11:17 am Title: Chapter 28
Finally :-)
I understand it is pretty difficult to write sex scenes.
Well I don´t mind reading it at all, but I probably prefer more subtly ones not too graphic and too dirty details. Something in the middle, not too dirty but nor none at all. Maybe sometimes you can describe it a little more graphic and sometimes more subtle, I don´t like stories where is sex in every chapter because then the plot is often missing.
Author's Response:
good to know. I agree with the sex in every chapter. the story becomes shallow. Thanks for the feedback and for reading.