Date: Apr 01, 2016 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 40
I could see Michael being adored by his staff! Jo was not going to let him go backwards no matter how tired he was.
Neverland is is going to be magical for Mike Nd Jo.
Perhaps even for Adam and Jules!
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2016 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 40
I just wanna say this was amazing and I love this story from the bottom of my heart.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2016 05:13 am Title: Chapter 40
JoJo grew up in a family with boys so she had all the opportunities to compete against them. I think Michael is in for a big surprise.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2016 03:52 am Title: Chapter 40
Loved this emotional chapter. How they welcomed Michael back, it was so sweet.
Fortunately tough Jo made the appearance in right time and pushed Mike so he was able to get down the stairs.
I can´t wait to read more - esp. about the go cart race-
Date: Mar 30, 2016 02:17 am Title: Chapter 40
The coming home was beautiful
I'm sure Katherine and Janet will like Jules too, she's so much like Jo
Michael needed that push from Jo to make it downstairs again
Maybe Adam is interested but doesn't want to show it?
Lol good luck Jo with the go carts
Date: Mar 29, 2016 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 40
Woahhhhh this chapter is really emotional. You've done great job! The way you described that Michael thought he wouldn't have the chance to go back home really brought tears to my eyes. Going back to Neverland truely a huge step for him in life.
I thought Michael and Jo would have a big fight when they argued. I was like "Uh oh they've just came back home. They can't be mad at each other" but luckily, they didn't :). What they have for each other is more than I thought :D.
Thank you for the new chapter. I love it! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
It really wasn't an argument he was physically and mentally shutting down so she needed to get him to get through his fear of falling. I realized after the fact I didn't convey that very well. Tough therapist jo had to come out or he never would have got down the stairs. Hopefully that made more sense?
Date: Mar 29, 2016 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 40
Let the games begin! If anyone wins...it will be Jo Jo... Will be interesting when mom and Janet show up. Jules will be star struck ! Adam needs some fun in his life.
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2016 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 40
lol we all know michael is gonna win the go cart race great emotional chapter looking forward to reading so much more soon
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter 39
Michael better realize Jo is definitely a good woman, he needs to get himself together. MJ should try therapy for his drinking problem, glad to see Miss Katherine & Jo getting along. Can't wait for next chapter!
Date: Mar 25, 2016 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 39
Hopefully before it is too late! Love the shaving part and the itching! Priceless!!!
Date: Mar 25, 2016 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 38
lol...another great chapter...can't wait to read more
Date: Mar 25, 2016 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 39
Jo will stand by Michael no matter what! She is really in LOVE with him! He loves her too and is willing how to make himself a beter man for her by stopping his terrible drinkning habit! but what about the pill habit?? Will Jo find out?
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 39
Thank you for another chapter. I am glad that Jo and Katherine are getting along well and it is great that Jo wants spend more time with her.
Mike´s POV was really funny, I really enjoyed it. It seems that he finally understands that he needs help and hopefully he quits his bad habits.
Can´t wait for the next chapter, I am sure they will have great time at Neverland.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2016 09:27 am Title: Chapter 39
Hahaha such a funny chapter, love it!!!
I'd like to know how things will develop at Neverland, they make a stubborn and kiut couple, love them!
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2016 07:52 am Title: Chapter 39
another great chapter looking forward to reading more soon