[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 60
once again another amazing chapter keep the amazing writing coming
Author's Response:
Thanks I appreciate it. RIP MJ FOREVER.
Date: Jun 24, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 12
Uhh ohhh Adam!! He better back off of mikes woman if he knows what's good for him lol.
Poor mike thoo I can't wait until he can walk.😢
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2016 09:22 am Title: Chapter 59
I'm glad they'll return really soon. The times I feel the most afraid is when Michael keeps a silent mood or treatment. Hopefully, his wounds are healing steadily. Update soon :)
Date: Jun 23, 2016 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love this chapter. Poor mikey.😢but at least he being brave now I just can't wait for the action!!!!
Date: Jun 23, 2016 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
The days without this site was pure agony. I love this story and it was just heating up!!!! Glad its back
Author's Response:
I know it was hard wondering if it was ever going to come back.
Date: Jun 16, 2016 10:55 am Title: Chapter 59
Thank you for having updated. The first part of this chapter is super funny. Michael was like a girl when he so needed to shower and other 2 girls in the house didn't complaim :)). I am just so in love with Michael's pov in this chapter.
And boy, I did image Adam in a dress and I laughed ALONE while looking at my phone screen like a mad person :)).
The last part in this chapter is so sweet. I also hope Michael will get over his demons in the past. I really do. You know, sometimes it feels like I send my wishes for Michael which cannot happen in real life into fanfictions, especially amazing fanfictions like this one of yours. So many times that I've wished his life would have been better :'(.
Sorry about my mood swing. This chapter is really nice and has a lot of hilarious moments. I LOVE it. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I agree. I wish he could have had a life like the ones I write. thats why I write him that way I guess. At least in my stories he can be happy, funny, and human. hey I hate to ask but would love it if you could vote. if of course you think i'm worth of a pat on the back. thanks
Date: Jun 16, 2016 10:53 am Title: Chapter 59
Love the humor you put in there
Poor Michael needs to go back to California, can't blame him tho, I'd be freezing too in such cold weather
Im sure that with Jo by his side he'll be able to fight those demons
Maybe once the baby is born (that is if she's pregnant, which i still believe she is, but who knows?) That could be a big help as well for him to get better and fight those demons
Author's Response:
for some reason, I just pictured him being a big baby in the cold weather. glad you liked it. thanks for the review. hope you are well
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2016 10:26 am Title: Chapter 59
beautiful chapter
Author's Response:
thanks for taking the time and reviewing. glad you liked it
Date: Jun 15, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 58
I'm back on it and all caught up. Of course I'm elated for Michael and Jo, but it's also great to see Adam and Jules get together. Love it!
Author's Response:
I've missed you girl!! welcome back!
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2016 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 58
Whew! That was so hot it damn near steamed up my computer screen! lol! Jo and Mike have some amazing chemistry. That's so awesome that Jo decided to go off the birth control. Now Mike has even more of a reason to get his act together and clean himself up.
Author's Response:
i figured i owed you guys a good ole steamy sex chapter
Date: Jun 13, 2016 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 58
Not sure if I am responding correctly lol, tried to respond underneath your response...oh well. Since you asked about what I meant with Jo, I figured she was already pregnant? You can bleed and still be pregnant so its possible, but only you would know of course. And hope my comment about Jo wasn't taken as an insult, just meant I am definitely not like her, so it took me a bit to fall for her but I definitely did! :) I am weird and like to immerse myself into the main female and pretend I am her lol, but if we don't have nothing in common it makes it harder. And I do love how you make Michael, well human as your title says, with weaknesses and faults just like any of us. You make him real and I like that. I voted for you to btw.
Author's Response:
no offense taken at all. I was just commenting on usually how i make my leading ladies a little on the rougher side as there are so many who leading ladies are miss perfect. I always try to make my ladies an average kind of gal or plane jane type. that way they can have more real ife instead of fairy tail lives. its easier to write when you can relate and certainly more enjoyable to read so I get it about placing yourself in the leads shoes. thats the beauty of fiction we can make it whatever we want. some people get so angry because I may write Michael foul mouthed, drinker etc. and they say he wasnt like that in real life and I take too much liberties. thats why its fiction...i can do what I want and I make him how I would want a man...real. who relly knows how he was in real life. I like to think he was a mans man. thanks for the great feedback. i love reading what people get out of my stories. and thanks for the vote :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2016 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 58
Dang woman, your story is wonderful! I started reading at the beginning last week and couldn't stop it was so good! Seriously, and I am picky when it comes to romance stories, of course I love Michael but took me a little bit to feel attached to Jo as I usually like to find women characters in romances I have in common with, but this time I am more aligned with Michael as I don't care for sports and not the tough kind of person, but with your great writing I have grown to like Jo alot! :) and can't wait to read more. I also think I know what's up with Jo...*wink
Author's Response:
Why thank you. I'm glad you decided to give my story a chance and like it. So what's up with jo? Lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's hard writing a lead because I don't go for the sticky sweet, water balloon fight, wimpy woman and of course everyone always sticks up for Michael as he's always the Saint . I like to make him edgier and more human like and less Peter Pan. Which throws some people. Thanks again.
Date: Jun 13, 2016 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 58
Damn gurl i love ur sex scene too... key forreal i luv ur story the most from this webside ^__^
Author's Response:
well thank you....take a minute and vote for me in the awards if im your fav,,, id appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2016 11:09 am Title: Chapter 58
a truly beautiful chapter looking forward to the next amazing chapter
Author's Response:
thank you for you consistant reviews with every chapter. i truely appreciate it.
Date: Jun 13, 2016 09:36 am Title: Chapter 58
Thank you for so many new chapters these days. I've been very happy.
A cold winter will not be cold anymore with a hot love making...no pardon my mistake...these hot love making like they have :)). Honestly speaking, I still get embarrassed when I read sex scenes. It seem like I will never get used to them :)).
"It (Santa hat) would definitely find a place of honor on our bedpost as I had already become very fond of it.". You made me laugh so hard, AGAIN girl! I really love the way you use words.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Whar can I say? I have a warped sense of humor so I comes out in my writing. thanks for reviewing all the time.