Date: Jun 30, 2016 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing him again
The meeting is going to go great. Sarcasm aside, it's good that he left the gang and their both I the industry.Update please it's been almost a year
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2015 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing him again
So hold up. He left his family because he didn't want to leave the game but he did leave the game and became famous but never thought to look out for his daughters at the very least?!?!?! He needs his ass beat!!!! The whole point of leaving was to keep them out of the life and he did that. Forget Jay for the moment. He just left his baby girls out there like that? That's foul as hell.
I'm caught up. Lmao.
More soon! >333
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing him again
Wow, they both are in the music industry. That's crazy. Plus, Michael left the streets alone and manly went to something better.
You have to update asap because the meeting between them is gonna be intense.
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2015 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing him again
Nice chapter. Can't wait for the interaction between Jaylah and Michael.
Are you going to do Fashbacks?
Please update again soon
Date: Nov 12, 2015 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing him again
This was really good!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2015 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: New Life and Broken Heart
Michael fucked up....thats bullshit what he did to her!!the twins are here:):):):):):)
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2015 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1: You have my heart
This is Great! You are really doing your thing on it!
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 3: New Life and Broken Heart
I can serious fuck his ass up. Tue girl leaves for not even that long comes back and finds him docking down some other chick that's not his girl???? Like come on Mike get your shit and priorities together man. He ain't.never gonna learn. When Jaylah finally leaves, he's not gonna know what he lost until she's gone her and the babies.
Maybe that will straighten his ass out in years to come without them. God take the wheel and make a way.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2015 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 3: New Life and Broken Heart
It was messed up on how Mike cheated on Jay. And I don't blame her for kicking that girl's ass and slapping Michael. Poor Janet she was crushed by her brother's action. I think that Jay should pursue a singing career. Wow Mike walked out on her. Wonder wat will happen now. Loved it
Date: Oct 28, 2015 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: New Life and Broken Heart
That was so touching the way he said goodbye I would have cried too
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2015 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: New Life and Broken Heart
Michael couldn't give that life up for his new family? His kids? Wow. Fuck you, Michael. The hell was going through your damn head? Smh. Please continue soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2015 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 3: New Life and Broken Heart
Nice chapter. I know what Michael was doing! He was giving Jay a reason to leave him by cheating on her. It certainly was going to wrk and then she went into labour. Michael was there, met his daughters, kissed them and Jay and then turned and walked away.
Oh this is going to be so good.
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2015 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: Heartbreaking decisions
Oh man I think his is going to tell her to go and if he don't; then she will leave him. But maybe that is wat she need to do for their children sake. Loved it girl :)
Date: Oct 24, 2015 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: Heartbreaking decisions
Loved it! More please lol
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2015 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: You have my heart
I'm feeling this. I'm a sucker for hood Michael btw, lol.
Love it girl.
More soon :):):)