Date: May 23, 2016 12:29 pm Title: †Chapter 2
Dang somebody was hating hard on my boy Mike. They don't want him to get his priesthood on!
Author's Response: As a non-conventional priest, he stirred up a lot of controversial and challenged the conservative parties so it's bound to be haters lol!
Date: May 23, 2016 12:24 pm Title: †Prologue-Chapter 1
Awww shoot my boo is a priest? Aww man I wonder what is going to happen
Author's Response: Yep, Michael, a priest! With his personality, I could picture him as a priest so I had no problem writing this!
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2016 12:07 pm Title: †Chapter 6
Omg! This is so good!!! It reminds me of one of my favorite movies'Untamed Heart'. I hope this has a happy ending though..I cry every time. Anywho, excellent writing! It feels like I'm actually witnessing everything. And the characters are so detailed. Really enjoying this! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I try to make sure my readers connect to each character. I feel that makes a great story! On the other hand, I never heard of Untamed Hearts! I'll have to check that movie out. Thanks for reading! This story won't disappoint you! I promise!
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2016 05:51 am Title: †Chapter 10
I don't know whether if I'm going to like Blythe because for the first half of the chapter well she's a little too stiff for my taste but I hope as I read more into the story I hope her attitude changes as she slowly warms up to Michael..Oooh when Michael went 'I'm bad' I'm not ashamed to admit I swonnwd along with those ladies hmph Michael you bad boy you 😉.
Author's Response: Blythe's been through a great deal in her life so her attitude and personality is going to come off bitchy. She just needs to right people in her life.
Date: Apr 30, 2016 05:48 am Title: †Chapter 10
Just caught up from the carnival to now. I live this story; I'm looking forward to seeing how the dynamic between Michael and Blythe develops.
Author's Response: Thanks, Blu! I was wondering where you were lol! Dont worry the dynamic between MIchael and Bluthe is going to be dynamic :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2016 12:56 pm Title: †Chapter 9
All I see are thristy and deseperate woman wanting to have their way with Michael..geez can they get any more clingy? like dayum leave the poor man alone he ain't interested he's only there for God and no one else at the moment also those priests are just as bad as any gossips themselves smh, ooh a cliffhanger wonder what's going to happen? I'll be sipping my tea as we go along Lool~
Author's Response: Lol yeah these women are not going to let up. They have their eyes on Michael, and it's never going to stop! And the uptight priests, they are a mess! More of their true nature is going to come to head. Stay tune! Thanks for the review!
Date: Apr 06, 2016 03:34 pm Title: †Prologue-Chapter 1
Hey Kara! I've been reading this on the sly and was wondering if you wanted a banner for the story my email is on my page. :)..also wondered what happened to your other story? .
Also your doing a wonderful job with this story with background and characters keep it up 👐
Author's Response: Hey Lorry! I definitely need a new banner for this story! The current banner is a mess because I did it on a broken computer unfortunately! I'll email you asap! Also I discontinued Love Behind This because I am currently revamping it, and it's going to be under a different title, but I will keep the same storyline! It's going to be awesome so look out for that pretty soon. In the meantime, enjoy this story!
Date: Apr 03, 2016 06:55 pm Title: †Chapter 8
interesting concept. you've done your homework with some of the inner workings of the church. will be interesting to see where you take this. keep up the great work
Author's Response: Thank you, honey! I was fearful tackling this type of subject and mixing the secular situations into it. Hope I do not go too far! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2016 12:50 pm Title: †Chapter 8
I really love this story I hope you update more.
Author's Response: Thank you, honey! Glad you love the story! I definitely will continue to update! I've just been slow because of work smh! Feel free to catch up if you havent ;)
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2016 06:16 am Title: †Chapter 8
Poor Michael. Lol. How uncomfortable he must be with all those women ogling him while he's trying to do his work. Hopefully he gets out of having to give sermons. Those older traditional priests might be relieved by it anyway.
He can stick to the counseling center.
Lorraine was so harsh to poor Blythe. I mean judgemental much? I felt so bad for her having to be there all self-conscious.
Now they see each other again. I wonder who she ran into and if Michael will go after her. Hmmmm.
Great update!!
More soon.<333
Author's Response: Michael was about to lose himself up there preaching while these horny women make passes at him lol! Now that he has the counseling center, he'll be better off...hopefully! As for Blythe, she really needs get around some people who will provide more help *hint hint lol
Date: Feb 22, 2016 08:53 am Title: †Prologue-Chapter 1
This is a most clever portrayal of Michael. I'm quite interested to see where this story leads. I'll bet those eyes, that hair, those cheekbones, jawline, toothpaste smile and creamy brown youthfulness gets him in trouble with his vocation ... and with the girls! Lol
Author's Response: Thanks, honey! I was skeptical to portray Michael as a priest, but it does fit him with him being a saint and so spiritual. Unfortunately, his looks will get him in trouble, but they do have advantages just wait and see!
Date: Feb 04, 2016 06:19 am Title: †Chapter 7
Really loved this chapter. I'm mad Blythe sleeps with that jerk. He's such a asshole. He's just using her and she knows it. And the priest is right...Michael will face many temptations lmaooo I know I'm gunna see him go a little crazy in a future chapter. I can feel it.
Author's Response: Glad you loved it, Nene! Blythe has had a hard life so unfortunately she will fall for jerks like this. On the other hand, the priest was wise to tell Michael about what's going to go down as a young unconventional priest. Just wait and see!
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2016 07:35 pm Title: †Chapter 7
Very forboding ;) I hate that Blythe is dealing with such crap. I hope things get better for her really soon.
Author's Response: In life, we gotta go through some crazy crap! Blythe has crappy life, but it will get better! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2016 05:52 am Title: †Chapter 6
Happy New Year!!!
Poor Blythe has had a ruff life. It was a nice break to catch with Michael stepping into save her.
I didn't even realize for a while that Blythe was having a flashback. I was like oh no she's going to get fired the day after she got mugged. I was concerned she was messing up her clothes lol.
Reggies seems like an asshole. I wonder why Carla was disapproving of her taking a ride from him. Hmmmm. Do they have a past?
More soon!<333
Author's Response: I tried to make the flashback as vivid as possible and make it appear as though it was actually happening before Blythe's very eyes. It was my way of illustrating Blythe's psyche which is very vivid and concrete. As the story unfolds, it'll make more sense. Sorry if I threw you off, girl :(
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2016 05:51 pm Title: †Chapter 6
Yeah you updated!!
Author's Response: Yay! Sorry I'm so late. More coming in the next week or so!