Date: Jul 29, 2023 05:00 pm Title: †Chapter 12
do you have this book somewhere elas with an ending if not may you plase give it a ending ps I know its 10+ years laster
Date: May 19, 2023 11:00 pm Title: †Chapter 12
Okay ,can I just say ,I was a bit skeptical to read this...but thank God I did.
Its soooo good. Blythe is honestly a bit crazy ??????’?????
Date: Feb 12, 2023 01:03 pm Title: †Chapter 5
This chapter was funny, I love your writing style! Hideous thick eyebrows lol
Date: Feb 12, 2023 12:17 pm Title: †Chapter 2
I love this, your writing is wonderful. I feel like this will be a nice juicy read :)
Date: Apr 08, 2017 10:55 am Title: †Prologue-Chapter 1
Please i beg you please....please again please update. I love this story to pieces pease
Date: Sep 04, 2016 08:56 pm Title: †Prologue-Chapter 1
Update this!!!!GREAT story please UPDATEEEEEEE u have to best story I have read in a while 😄ðŸ‘
Author's Response: Hi new reader! Thank you! I'm working on it! I just had a pretty chaotic summer.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 08:04 pm Title: †Chapter 12
So glad to see this back on rotation!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see some of my readers back!
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 11:02 am Title: †Chapter 12
Father Joesph to the rescue again. I'm glad that Blythe realized that he really didn't mean any harm by focusing on her. I don't think it was out of judgment that he did it either. He merely asked why she was quite. Maybe my idea of judgment differs from the releagious aspect maybe.
I'm glad she went back and found her place there. Can't wait to see what develops Dom this.
More soon. <333
Author's Response: It was unorthodox for Father Joseph to single Blythe out like that, but it seems something might have clouded his expertise. Hmm lol!
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 09:06 am Title: †Chapter 10
Man this was intense!!! I can't believe Blythe was so frank. Lmaoooooo. My mouth dropped when she said what she said. She has a heavy chip in her shoulder that's for sure but it's understandable with all she's been through and is still going through with Reggie's raggedy ass. Ugh.
Michael is so sweet too. Such an idealist but I'm glad he's extended his hand.
I'm loving this so much!!!
<333
Author's Response: Blythe is incredibly blunt and guarded and tense. Maybe she'll relax.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 08:41 am Title: †Chapter 9
Father Shultz is supremely jealous of Michael. Either it's his youth or the draw he has on the community. Whatever it is hes resentful of Michael for, he's going to try and cause trouble for him in the future. I'm sure if it.
So he's finally come face to face with Blythe again. It's getting so interesting!!! <333
Author's Response: Yeah, there's always a hater, but they're there for a reason.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 08:01 am Title: †Chapter 7
That poem Blythe wrote sums up so much of her situation and it being left unfinished also fits. She's so lost poor baby. Her life is so open ended but not in the most positive of ways. Reggie is a POS.
I felt almost like father Greir was about to tell him abstaining from pleasures is it not really the way anymore.
Temptation is coming alright!!! Lol
Missed this story!! On to the next chapter <333
Author's Response: Menen, hey! Glad to hear from you! Hope you're doing well! You're a star for pointing out Blythe's unfinished poems being parallel with her life and situation! I wasn't sure if anyone would catch up, but I was wrong and Father Grier is that one associate/friend who encourages a friend to be laid back, but dont get too laid back lol! Thanks for reading, dear!
Date: Jul 29, 2016 09:57 pm Title: †Chapter 8
LOL awwwww poor Mike got them ladies in frenzy and he ain't even doing anything but the Lord's work! But I can't even lie I would probably be one of those ladies waiting at the door for him ogling the heck out of him. Kara, I really like your way with words. I feel you're able to describe the things in a simple way to where I can see them accurately and that's something I struggle with. I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Lol even thought I respect the Lord' house, I would probably be one of those women too! Michael was so gorgeous! He needs to be carefully though. These ladies are very thirsty!
I'm glad you like the story and the writing. I try to do my best to make my readers see what I see without being too wordy, that was mistake in the past.
Date: Jul 29, 2016 04:55 am Title: †Chapter 12
I love this story. It's different and definitely interesting. I'm glad Blythe came back to counseling. Hopefully it will go better this time!
Glad you keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Jay! I always strive to be an unique writers so I can keep readers engaged! Blythe is going to need this counseling she has a lot of issues. Let's hope she conquers them! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2016 03:31 am Title: †Chapter 12
At least no arguments between mj and Blythe. It was nice of him to defend her at where she worked which lead her to go back to that session. Let's hope it stays OK for now. I'm liking Blythe slowly so slowly but it's there somewhere. Let's hope this session and not after doesn't drive her away with Michael's mouth at times smh.
Author's Response: Glad you're starting to warm up to Blythe just like she's warming up to Michael! And thanks for reading, Lorry you're awesome!
Date: Jul 29, 2016 02:51 am Title: †Chapter 12
Very good
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Danny!