[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 12:18 pm Title: White Hot Christmas
Michael you asshole!!!!!
"I'm not crazy." Chick you are fucking insane!!! Lmaoooooooooo
He know damn well he just set sail up shits creek with no paddle in sight.
"You promise this is the last time?" *said in a mocking tone by me. No asshole this not going to be the last time. This is the beginning of the fucking end.
There is something wrong with LiLi. There is. There is no sanity in how caught up she is in Michael and he's just as big of an idiot for going along with this "last time" bs. His ass was feeling lonely and sentimental and that's why he did this.
Jesus take the weeeeehhheeeeeellll!!!
Let us pray.
Lawd jesus fixeth this, thine humble servant asketh.
More soon. Lawd help me. Lmaooo. <333
Author's Response:
LOL Lili is pretty insane. But can we blame her?! If I laid eyes on Michael at a party I'd be stalking his ass all over town too. and YES!! by not standing his ground he just open hell's gates.
Lili's high as a kite off of Michael's D that's what her problem is and she's terrified that it's gonna get away because she can't exactly claim it as hers.
LMAO I don't think even Jesus can fix this.
They're in the devil's hands now.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2015 10:27 pm Title: The Rejected
The moment she told him to call her Liya he should have been like fuck no Mrs Melendez. I'm not doing that. That gave her room to giggle and carry on. I was glad that he did end up with him calling her that. Kudos for that.
It's not even the fact that she's married that makes it seem a way. It's the fact that this is not mutual in any way and she's just pushing it and pushing it.
That whole I'm a bored and lonely housewife bs is no reason to try and drag a dude that keeps rejecting you into an affair that would mess up the career he worked so hard for.
Boo hoo you're rich and have time on your hands. Do some shit girl. Jeez. Volunteer pay for some ambition that's not sexually motivated something! That's cutesy giggly stuff will get old quick.
And despite the rejection she's still stalking him huh? Girl!! I'll give it to her she barely held it together spitting in people's coffee. She should just quit if that's what she's going to do. Lmao.
I need more of the insanity. Lmaooo. More soon!! <333
Date: Sep 25, 2015 09:23 pm Title: The Moment of Truth or the Beginning of the Lie
love it
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2015 09:52 pm Title: The Moment of Truth or the Beginning of the Lie
God damn right !!!! I want to punch those ideas out of your head too Michael. LiLi is insane. Like seriously? His dick for her that sprung? Well she was Gaga before the dick so I guess it's more than that but still.
I swear for god if she let that boy lose his job over her inability to control herself, imma have to come up in this story and do her somfin!! Lmao. It's not only her being thirsty as hell but the fact that someone else might see something and wanna rat him out to the boss is the issue. Now her stalker ass gonna be working there shits bout to get all kinds of hectic.
Man alive!!!!
More soon!!
Author's Response:
Lili is just a desperate housewife that had been cooped up for too long, that's why she's THIS sprung. And the fact that Michael is resisting her is just adding fuel to the crazy.
She doesn't see the risk because she's sure that her husband won't notice anything. The copy room was WAY too risky though because there are cameras in there...
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2015 06:21 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
Omg!! She has 2 c him again! She just has 2! Mj is trippin, i mean she is married which technically means she is taken but he know he wanna c her again idky he faking on her like that. She catchin feelings and I dont and can't blame her cuz mj is beautiful and handsome but her husband is not what's up. He ain't even all dat cute anyway! This story has my full attention and then some. Gurl, u know u have talent which is off da chain 4 real. U have 2 keep diz story going cuz I love it soo much.
Author's Response:
Aww, girl thanks!!! Michael is in complete denial of any attraction he may have for her, but for a good reason!
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2015 08:46 am Title: Unsung Heroes
Liya needs to be really careful. Michael has to remember what happened.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Liya does need to be careful. Michael could get her in a lot of trouble if he wanted to.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 10:18 pm Title: Unsung Heroes
Michael let her off easier than I thought he would. She's playing games with the man's life and she's there thinking it was exciting. Gurl is beyond sprung. The dick made her lose her got damn mind. Lmaoooo.
He's right though. If he had done the same he would definitely be behind bars or some shit. He doesn't want this at all. I want to see just how the script will get flipped and how he comes to be down with this.
Damn Boxhead got stuck for his paper. Those are some small time crooks though. Lmaooo.
More soon you're on a roll bb!! <333
Author's Response:
He did let her off easy, but its mainly because he just wants it to go away... peacefully and for him to be able to return to his normal life. But yeah that dick blew her mind! She ain't right no more. He's exactly right! Men can be the victim of rape too, people forget.
<3<3
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 09:54 pm Title: Unsung Heroes
And let the chase begin!
Lilly a lil sprung here with Michael. She crazy, but she sprung.
Mike Mike is a bit rude. I can't wait to see what it'll be like if he starts to feel anything for her.
Did I mention how much I'm loving this? Update soon!
Author's Response:
Lili is totally sprung. Mike feels he HAS to be rude at this point cause he don't wanna be mixed up in an affair.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 09:48 pm Title: A Night Not Remembered
She was quick with it!! Shoot I guess waiting for another chance to meet up was not an option for her. She wanted what she wanted and she wanted it at that moment. I love this so far like I said. Lily is a little character so far. And Michael is a little mean, he could've been nicer. You know gave her some eggs and sent her on her way, lol.
But I'm loving it.
On to the knew chapter.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 09:42 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
Mike mike acting like he don't wanna climb that tree, lmao.
Like I said before just from the title it sounded good now it sounds even better with the first chapter attached. I like that's it's the flip version and she's chasing after him. She wants her some Michael. Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
LOL! He's puttin' up a good act too!
Thanks for reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2015 09:51 pm Title: A Night Not Remembered
Lmaooooo. So she pretty much raped him. I was right!!!! And you where right. It's definitely not what I expected to happen. She stalked him then took advantage of his vulnerable state. LiLi is off the chain for that. Michael didn't even give her the time of day yet he struck such a chord in her so much so it brought her to craziness.
I know he's panicking on the inside. Like shit. It's going to be interesting to see how this goes from a torrid night of literally stolen passion to a mutual affair. Yep it's going to be a dozy!!
I know you have another chapter rattling around in your brain already. "Baby won't you come my wayeee..." *Fety voice.
More soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
I LOVE IT!! Like I told you this is going to be a banger!!
Michael's an artist?!?!! Aaahhhh spooky sooky nah. You know I get down for MJ as an artist.
You know when I read Nick Carter I automatically thought it was the Backstreet boy and when Michael called him and his bro on stage at his BDay and wasted that cake. Lmaooooo.
I hope Trashae isn't Trasheee. Lol.
Michael and his thirsty self.
Lili is going to be a ligit stalker. OMG. Michael ain't having it. I can't wait to get into the thrill of the chase. This time it's the girl chasing him and that's a bit different. I like that a lot.
More soon in hooked already. <333
Author's Response:
I just recently learned that he could actually draw like really well!! I didn't know this about him so yeah this story kind of amplifies that talent whIle muting he the ones he was actually known for in real life.
Nick's gonna be his buddy and yeah thay video inspired that bit!! lol
Trashae plays the role of the unattainable dream girl in this story lol so you don't gotta worry about any ratchetNess from her.
Lili don't know what just hit her!! Nobody has captivated her like that from the jump so yeah expect her stalker qualities to emerge.
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
Another great 1! I love how u started this out, the pics r great, I love the banner, it's highly creative n and the pic of the girl is beautiful! I also love the imagery u put in the details. I think she feels some type of way about mj but idk if she should act on her feelings 4 him or not. Idky mj faking on her, he knows she's gorgeous but she's his boss's woman, so I understand y he can't act on his feelings either. He need 2 get it 2 gether and stop trippin! (I had a moment, got a little 2 into my feelings). I hope they make it known 2 one another what is really going on between them, but her husband don't have 2 know, just keep it on the down low...what he don't know won't hurt him lol!
Author's Response:
Girl is totally in love at first sight mode right now! She has no business checking out another man, but she couldnt stop the natural effect Michael had on her. Mikes already like NOPE!! Don't want the drama!