Date: Oct 10, 2015 12:08 am Title: New Endings and New Beginnings
She past getting on my nerves... AND i been said she needa go to jail fa rape, smh pathetic desperate ass
Author's Response:
LOL! She is a special type of crazy that's for sure. And she did basically get away with rape.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2015 11:06 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
This bitch is crazy! I love her....😩😃😘 cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Lol!! Liya is crazy and she's not done yet.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2015 09:36 pm Title: New Endings and New Beginnings
I'm so pissed. SHIT. there is no way this bitch finna get away with this shit. I'm HEATED RIGHT NOW. She has no fucking heart I don't care. How do you mess with somebodies life like this? It's cruel and heartless.
Its not even something you joke about and anyone who does this should never be forgiven I don't care what the situation.
I'm glad that Trashae didn't get in trouble because of her bullshit. I thought THAT would have been the worst.
Nope! NOPE!!!! I said NOPE! Bored? Lonely? Bitch is crazy as fuck and if Ed could find out her true colors I would be happy. If Michael was jobless and broke I'm sure she would Lawd that over him and blackmail him into feeling for her and that's DISGUSTING. UGH!
Imma stop. No matter how cowardly BEB Michael is Nutella just went to a level he could never reach no matter how bad he got.
Michaela damn it I'm going to need that update soon!! <333
Author's Response:
I knew you was gonna be heated!! You'll understand Lili soon enough, she has no comprehension of the level of heartlessness she just reached, but when shit goes down she'll find out.
And right her little stunt with Trashae's lap top really only brought her closer to Michael.
BEB Michael is still low. He's not even as naive as Nutella though he KNOWS what he's doing is wrong...
I'mma update soon!
<3
Date: Oct 09, 2015 09:00 pm Title: New Endings and New Beginnings
Definitely going to read in the morning. I've been hella busy!
Author's Response:
Lol thanks girl!
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2015 04:33 am Title: Guilty Pleasures
This woman is crazy.......I like her lol. But she should play a little hard to get to mike. Flirt with his friends, wear revealing stuff. He talks to her any kind of way and she should put a stop to that also. Put some bass in her voice, cause a man don't want a cowardly woman. But I feel bad for her husband. Still I have yet to see why he deserves to be cheated on. He even tried to romance her. But mike is fine as hell and i can understand her obsession lol. Michael has eyes for another woman, so what she gonna do about it? Cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
She is crazy! And yes! She does need to try a different approach because throwing herself at Michael at every second is not working obviously lol And as annoyed as he is with her, Michael really shouldn't talk to her like that. Just wait and see how she handles Trashae.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2015 04:30 am Title: Guilty Pleasures
Yoooooooo CoocooForCocoNut's dignity is on E along with several other things like her chill, her decency, her sanity. I could go on. How you gone have a man reject you so harshly more than once and you still giggling in his face. He told you to fuck off. She has no pride of self what so ever. On top of that she's selfish and reckless. Any guilt she feels means nothing. I don't even think her guilt is genuine.
"I want him." She's like a petulant spoiled little rich kid that feels she must get everything she wants and fuck the consequences for anyone else in the fall out. Ok so what if Michael gives in. What then? They have rough sex for how long then what happens? She leaves her husband? Ruins a man's life? Then what? What happens after all that Hmm. She doesn't give a fuck about that because she "wants" him.
She don't love Ed neither. She was probably waiting on someone else to obsess over to come through all along. Ugh
Fuck that noise. Now this bitch finna ruin Trashea's career over dick that don't belong to her. She's morally bankrupt and I see it's not just because of this situation with Michael. My guess is she's always been this way. Nutella ain't shit point blank period.
If you can't tell this bitch pisses me off on a level you don't even know!! Lmaooo
Shit!!! I need more soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
She is not even really thinking straight at all. She does feel a little guilty, but that's sure not stopping her. She IS a spoiled little rich kid lol And she is not thinking of the consequences at ALL. I mean where are they gonna end up if he loses his job and she loses her husband? What would a future between them even look like?
She's bored of Eduardo. She married him to please her family and thought she felt love, but her strong feelings for Michael upon first sight has pretty much cancelled out all of that.
She's finna get Trashea, but it ain't gonna end the way she expected.
Just like you keep tellin' me I'll love BEB Mike, eventually you'll like Lili.
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2015 10:39 am Title: Hospitality at its Finest
Omg!! She got him right where she wants him and then some! He tryna act like he don't want her, he need 2 stop faking on her and go ahead and get her pregnant! Shes like "i called him and there was No answer" lmao i love it! I don't think she wanted 2 leave him I know I wouldn't be leaving 2 go nowhere. Now about her husband, she needs 2 sit and think about what she is going 2 do about this situation yet at the same time what he don't know won't hurt him. Idky mj tryna act hard, he needs 2 stop the non sense and just be with her like she wants 2 b with him. Eggs? I wish I would make him some eggs and then he going 2 ask her "u ain't guns ask me how I want them done?" I would have been like make them yourself. Again I love this story, the humor is addictive. U have got 2 keep this story going cuz I love it! Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
She does!! Lol Michael totally has his defense front up but for a good reason, he already knows the consequences of having an affair and wants nothing to do with that drama.
And right, Michael would be making his own damn eggs with that attitude
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2015 05:04 am Title: Hospitality at its Finest
She really needs to sit and think about what she doin though, I mean, she IS married. She and Michael can't possibly work when she still has a husband. And to ne honest, I don't see her husband really doing anything wrong. I mean he is neglecting her but thats it. He aint mean, I haven't seen proof that he's cheating......yet. right now she is looking like a bored wife who wants some fun. She is playing with mikes emotions. What if he does fall for her, but have to watch his lover go to her husband each night? Great story. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
She does really need to think about the consequences here. If she gets Michael caught he will more than likely lose his job and Eduardo will probably throw her out on the streets. He is a good husband he just let's himself get too busy with work.
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2015 09:21 pm Title: Hospitality at its Finest
When she almost dropped the eggs and Michael was like "The fuck you doin?" I was like yo Nutella finna burn yo shit to the ground son!!! Lmaooooo. She is a special kind of crazy for real and he's loosing the damn battle.
Now I see if he makes any moves with Trashae, LiLi gonna throw salt all up and through his game. I can see her being a jealous ass maniac. She's getting crazier by the minute.
I bet she was enjoying that he took charge of the whole thing too.
Got iimmmmm!!! I know she not finna leave his house now.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Michael lost that battle lol He fell right into her trap and then owned that shit like it was his. If he makes a genuine movie on Trashae, Nutella will go nuclear!
<3
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2015 05:03 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
Hey honey! How r u? OMG this story is great and yes mj is horrible! He has no right 2 talk 2 her like that and she I just calm collected and cool with it but it's about time they started making out, been waiting 4 the longest! I hope they can make it official and they need 2 hurry up and get pregnant but we would have 2 fight! If she don't know that's my man she going 2 know now lol. I love this story honey u have talent if I haven't told u that already. Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
Hey girl! I'm good! How are you?! Liya is too cool with his asshole attitude, lol but that's only because she wants the D. We'll see if she ends up pregnant.
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 03:15 pm Title: White Hot Christmas
Omg!! Why is mj acting like dat 2 her, but I mean he has good reason 2. Omg! Hr had no right 2 act like dat and he shouldn't have yelled at her either! And let me find out she tryna get pregnant by my man! Girl, I love this story just keeps getting better and better by each update! I'm a huge fan of ur work, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl!!
Michael was soooooooooo rude!!! Beyond rude. And lol yeah Lili would be crazy enough to pull something like that off!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 01:41 pm Title: White Hot Christmas
I love this story s much.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 01:03 pm Title: The Rejected
She's coco for your coco-nuts, I'm DONE, lmao.
I'm at the mall right now reading this and I look like a maniac laughing.
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Lili is one little sprung puppy. She ain't playin whatsoever getting the 'D' of Michael Jackson!
Author's Response:
Lmao it's the truth those she is crazy about that D and I gonna take it however she can lol
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 12:56 pm Title: The Moment of Truth or the Beginning of the Lie
She is crazy!!!!! I just wanted you to know I haven't stopped reading :)
I LOVE the fact that it's her chasing after Michael and not the other way around. I like it different.
Remember before when I said that Michael was being a little asshole-ish? I take that back!
Author's Response:
Yes! She is crazy! and girl don't worry. I'm so late responding to my reviews anyway lol
Date: Sep 27, 2015 12:20 pm Title: White Hot Christmas
Lili, honey, you need Jesus
Author's Response:
LOL she needs Jesus, Mary, and Joseph.