[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2015 07:15 am Title: Blurred Lines
Another Gabi? I'm loving it already! Lol. Ok, I am so glad that he and Lisa broke up. I'm not a big fan of hers, but to see how excited he was in planning the proposal, I felt bad..., but then when she told him she wasn't in love with him, I felt even worse, but at the same time I was relieved....he didn't need her any damn way. lol
ok, so neither one of them remembers what happened last this?...this is going to be interesting and I can't wait to see how this turns out....great start!
Date: Sep 29, 2015 02:19 am Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 2
Yay a baby on the way, now they have to see each other more, i bet her father dislikes Michael even more now
Author's Response:
Yes a baby is coming and you will findout how Mr. Hernandez will react to his oldest daughter preganancy. Another update is on the way :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 09:17 pm Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 2
beautiful chapter michael being so happy that gabi is having his baby great chapter looking forward to reading more of this story
Author's Response:
His thrilled about his wife having his child. Aww thank you luv :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 06:34 pm Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 2
Awwwww so happy for them :)
Author's Response:
I am too and excited about writing the next update :)
Date: Sep 28, 2015 05:33 pm Title: Blurred Lines
I found you!!!!! 😊 can't wait to read!
Date: Sep 28, 2015 05:31 pm Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 2
Damn damn damn this chapter was good very good , wow she's pregnant already and now his feelings really changed or is it just the baby ? Only time will tell
Author's Response:
That is a very good question and it will be answered tomorrow. His is very excited about the baby and your are right about that :)
Date: Sep 28, 2015 12:13 pm Title: Blurred Lines
heyo eazy! *crawls out of cave* well this story gets more interesting, mj and her need to chill and talk..and chris makes me laugh im always picturing his voice in my head everytime he talks imao!.
well im still willing to make your banner eazy, hopefully you saved my email in the chat, when you have time send me the pictures/theme and i'll do my magic on em. *crawls back to cave*
Author's Response:
lol Hey girl I haven't forgotten about you and I will send those pics to you tomorrow. Yep things are heating up lol
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2015 08:31 am Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 1
TMZ is such TRASSSSHHHHHHHHH. It's a joke that anyone in that news room had any moral dilemma about posting that Video. That right there is Bs. They all would have been drooling and frothing at the mouth to have it come out.
Chris is an idiot. How could Gabi have gone to the press with a video filmed by someone else while she was drunk and with Michael. Come on Chris use that big ass noggin on top of your shoulders.
What the fuck is Lisa mad about. She's the one who broke up with Michael. FOH. Your concern is not needed.
How old is Gabi? I don't remember if you mentioned her age. I'm asking because if she's going to Julliard she would have to be college age. And starting it could be any where from 17 years old and grauduate at 23 or there abouts.
Michael has feelings for her that is clear and vise versa. They need to talk at the very least. Her dad is going to be a tough nut to crack tho. Michael better guard his balls. Lmaooo.
Oh and her dad is a lawyer so he should be able to handle the divorce.
More soon bb! <333
Author's Response:
Tut your so right so that is why I changed it. Idk wat I was thinking. Lol yes his is and I think that he is acting like that coz he is being protective of Mike. But yeah he does need to stop frfr. Ikr? She need to go somewhere like you said FOH. Gabi is 18 years old. Oh yeah his does but Michael is hard headed. Maybe somebody could talk some sense into him.. Lmfaoo oh yeah Michael better wear a jock strap around David and bring his bg lmao No doubt he will. I'm almost done with part 2 and there is a suripse at the end :)
Date: Sep 26, 2015 02:16 am Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 1
Love it
Michael just admit it you have feelings for her, it's obvious
Can't wait for her parents to meet Michael, specially her dad since he was. .the least happy
Lol love her sisters
Smh at Lisa, really? Thinking he was still crying over you? Well too bad he moved on
If only the world knew the truth
Author's Response:
Ikr? He is being so stubborn. Like you said it's obvious that his likes Gabi. And when he was talking about ppl, he wasn't referring to his fans but the haters. Lisa is pathetic and she really tried Michael big time. It was funny making him go off the way that he did. Lol I love Melina and Lexi too. Nope David is not thrilled that his oldest child is married to Michael. I think that he's just worried that she will forget about Julliard and that her marriage will stop her from following her dreams. We will see wat will happen in the next update. Thank you for sticking with this story :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2015 07:41 pm Title: An Unexpected Surprise Part 1
Loved the chapter. Michael has to get a hold of Gabi.
Can't wait to see what Michael's reaction is when he finds out he can't get an annulment.
I don't think your chapters are too long.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm working on part 2 right now :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2015 06:05 am Title: Runaway Bride
great story so far looking forward to another great chapter to this great story
Author's Response:
Thank you I really appreciate your support :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 10:59 pm Title: Runaway Bride
Michael does seem like an annulment is the last thing he wants. The both of them are so wishy washy. One minute they're mad and hurt at the other. The next they want to move on and it doesn't seem like what either of them wants. One thing though they already consummated the marriage and that throws annulment out the window. They will have to get a divorce instead which is a lot more work.
Something tells me though that Michael won't go through with filing those papers but will instead go find her. Let's see where they go from here.
I just know once Lisa's ass finds out she's going to saunter her damn chin back into the picture.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
CTFU! You keep me rolling Tut girl! Yeah there is something up with him and he is not doing a very good job of hiding it. You maybe be right and Lisa will def try to come back into his life but we will see wat happen :)
Date: Sep 22, 2015 08:12 pm Title: Runaway Bride
I love the story! Keep going. And I love that you incorporated Chris and Usher into it as Mike's friends.
Author's Response:
Thank you luv. I love Chris Tucker and Usher and since Chris was always impersonating Mike, his was in YRMW, and on the show celebrating Mike along with Usher. I figured hey wat the hell why not use them in my story y'know? :)
Date: Sep 22, 2015 02:33 am Title: Runaway Bride
They're both very stubborn people but if they took some time to listen to one another they could work things out
Can't wait for them to meet again, is he going to show up at her door?
Author's Response:
Lol that they are. Hmm..Idk but we will see :)
Date: Sep 21, 2015 06:08 pm Title: Runaway Bride
I don't know why mike lying about my caring for her when he knows that he cares a little bit I live this story please update
Author's Response:
You think that his has feeling for her? Aww..thank you luv