[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2015 05:07 pm Title: Fools Goal
You delivered another amazing update girl. Loved it as always and I can't wait to see wat his extra talent is :)
Author's Response:
Thank you Hun. Stick around the talent is coming!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2015 04:35 pm Title: Fools Goal
Dang! Mena is a whiny little thing, isn't she? I can't wait to see what this 'special talent' of his is!
Author's Response:
Oh boy yes she is. You'll probably want to knock her out by the end or worse. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:08 pm Title: Human
Lol I forgot to say I can wait for more :D
Author's Response:
<333
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:07 pm Title: Human
I loved it girl! Do you see why your one of my favourites now? I'm just shocked that you read my work and the same thing goes for fenderjazzkid
Author's Response:
Awe thank you BB!!! I enjoy you're story I can't wait for more of it!! Stick around love!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Human
Hmmm, intriguing! I like this so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!! Stay tuned more to come!! <333
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Human
Well this is different, but I'm liking it so far! Great start! Can't wait to see how this comes together.
Author's Response:
Hey thank you so much for reading. Yeah it's a bit different for me but I enjoy a good fantasy story. Especially when it's grounded with some reality. Stay tuned!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Human
I'm reviewing from my iPad so let's hope this comes out the way it should.
you know I love you right? More than I love a lot of humans. I love this just as much and I can't wait to read the rest. This is already shaping up to be a classic and you can't say it's not! I'm gonna start threatening you for updates the way you threaten me. I love this so much already though! It's so unique and Michael is different too.
Im ready for everything you have in store 😘😘😘😘😘
Author's Response:
Yes I know. And I love you too bb!! Come with me on this journey. You will not regret anything!! I hope like you said it has the potential for classic. You're my inspo!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:18 pm Title: Human
I LOVE IT as usually... girl you never fail to deliver the best!! Your style is so flawless!! I'm looking forward to reading it I'm already sad its only 10 shots because this sounds like it could be a full blown novel.
Author's Response:
Heyyyyy bew. Thank you so much for reading. Yeah only a ten parter. It will be intense, funny a wild ride I general at least I hope. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:14 pm Title: Human
I like!
Youve got me hooked.
Author's Response:
Yayyy. Stay tuned. More's coming!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:12 pm Title: Human
Wow.
Can I be honest? I am in the business of being honest, so let me do just so.
When I read the description I was like.... *yawn*... I don't like paranormal/alternate reality stories. I can't stand supernatural romance books blahblah, avoided all those with a barge pole...
I clicked on it anyway, because I like your style of writing and I was pretty engrossed from the first few paragraphs and I think I'm hooked, love! I like his narrative and I already want to know more!
Side note; holy shit you are well written! I don't say that because I'm surprised, but sometimes it can be hard to come by. Love this!
<3
Author's Response:
Hey. Lol. I love the fact that you're honest with me. It's what I need to grow. So I thank you for it. Lmaooo. At "yawn". I'm so glad you took a chance anyway with the story. I love a good narrative and hopefully it keeps you hooked. You have no idea how much I appreciate your kind thoughtful words. I try my best to improve with each story I write. Side note: you're bloody amazing yourself. I love your writing!! <333