Date: Sep 17, 2015 02:12 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
Cool story! Can't wait to see what happens nexts. Mena, is somthing I don't want to say...but you get what I mean. lol!
Author's Response:
Hank you so much!! I'm glad you like it! Mena is such a piece of work lol. I get what you mean girl!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2015 12:16 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
Ma'am you need to update this asap!!!! Like, now! You can't just leave it here and expect me to wait! Has Teddy told you how impatient I am? I am very impatient. Love this so much!
Author's Response:
Lol. I'll update but tomorrow or sat. I'll try my best. I'll update Inked Over tomorrow too. Yesss I know you're impatient. And I will try my best to get it out to you ma'am!! Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2015 11:44 am Title: Fools Goal
Daddy? He has a child? And this Mena lady is something serious! Dangerous to his health! And what the heck is this talent? Ugh lemme go read these chapters!
Author's Response:
Yup you'll find out more soon about his life as he's telling the story. Dangerous is so right!!<333
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2015 11:31 am Title: Human
Giiiiiiiiiiiirl what is this masterpiece you have created?? Going to finish the rest of the chapters posted!
Author's Response:
Heyyyyy bew. I'm so glad you like this one too. Welcome to the story!!<333
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2015 12:40 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
What is so great about this Mena chick that's got Michael braving infernos and shit!! That sparkle in her eyes is greed pure greed and he can do better!! Why couldn't he see that?!?! Imma a check out that song too the same time I check out the other video I bet it's beautiful.
Dillinger is bad news. That smell of death on him is a metaphor for something and I can't wait to find out what!!
Update soon!!!!!
<3Tons of creepy Internet love<3
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooo. You know love can be so blind sometimes and with her she's telling him what he wants to hear and she's getting what she wants. She's not ready for the level Michael wants even though she feeds him all the lines to keep the money coming in. You're so right. The smell of death on Dillinger should have been a big red flag but he's turned a blind eye to it.
Tons of creepy love!! <333 :)
Date: Sep 16, 2015 06:19 am Title: Human
I...LOVE IT!!! <3. Your story is so...unique. I really really want to read more o(>o<)o. Please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Hank you so much for reading!!! I appreciate it so much. Hang in there the story will get so much better! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2015 05:03 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
Wow! So that's what his talent is. Interesting. I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Yup he's an impeccable forger and their making money but they can't get away forever. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2015 08:00 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
God I love this story. You never disappoint luv as you have delivered yet another wicked update. So it appears that love for Mena is the poison that will do Michael in. And I see his talent now and his is very good at it. It won't be long b4 he gets caught up. Waiting patiently for more luv :D
Author's Response:
Yup he's a copycat. He can create realistic forgeries of the masters and that in that time was pretty lucrative. Mena is loving the money moren Michael but they will all get caught up! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2015 07:42 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
This was such a great chapter! And I just love your writing style.
I feel so bad for Michael. You can see how in love he is with Mena, but her actions really show that she has something up her sleeve. Just like you said, he's ignoring the warning signs and I'm almost afraid to read what will happen to him next.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
He's head over heels for this girl and he's not seeing just how harmful his allegiance to her is. He will learn soon enough though. Thanks Hun! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2015 07:42 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
Michael is Christopher Tracy of the art world. "It's dishonest work, but it's a living." Damn! He's a professional copycat. This is amazing. He's getting his hustle on and making greenbacks for a bratty woman. I'm just ready to read the rest so I'll know EVERYTHING
He's ignoring all the warning signs like you said. Like damn, I don't trust her. I just don't. I'm sittin here like :| "Um, sure. Stop talking"
That was in 45. It'ds taken him that long to make money? Since she claims that they need to handle business first? Wtf
But anyway, I was also smelling some An American in Paris in this chapter too. You know I'm a musical lover. That one is one of my favorites. Then that part of the chapter came up and I freaked. Then you had Nina goin and I was feeling it even more.
This is perfect. Keep this going no matter what, please. Even if it's just for me! (I'll pretend it's for me because I'm a brat)
As always, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yup Michael is out here forging masterpieces for some scratch. Lol. He's so caught up with Mena and as you know sometimes blind live makes you do stupid things and that's what this was. I love musicals and dance based movies lol and you know just how much I love for some Nina. Mena is waiting to handle business cause as you know she's seeing how things work out before she commits. She's a gold digger and has Michael under some kind of inexplicable spell. It will break soon will it be too late? Yes. <333
Date: Sep 12, 2015 06:14 am Title: Fools Goal
Keep it coming! It's good to see Michael in a different light in fanfiction. This and lurking in the dark are very different from what I've read before but I find it very exciting...I'm hooked! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Yesss I love seeing Michael in a different light. Especially since he had a thing for the silver screen in real life. I think he enjoyed playing different characters. I think AU kinda gives him that in fiction. Stick around love. I hope you like where the train is going! <333
Date: Sep 12, 2015 02:34 am Title: Human
I really do like this story I love stories like this I can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you so so much. I hope you stick around to see it all unfold. So much more to come!! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2015 08:51 pm Title: Fools Goal
Hey love,
I love that this story has so much bloody depth. There's a lot of suspense which I like but also hate. Immediately, I hate Mena. She's a twatwaffle and Michael needs to suspend her... maybe murder her and then paint her human fibres in to his artwork for authenticity. You know, the normal type thing that artists do :P
I gathered about the italics -- its narration, right?
Love this, love this! Now, hurry up with the next chapter, lest I send my hired goons.
Ever seen Misery? Yeah...well.....
Author's Response:
You have no idea how I appreciate you saying that. I try always to give dimension to all the characters I write. Layers like an onion baybee!! Lol. You'll find out Mena's comeuppance soon I promise!
Yes the italics is narration. I'm glad it's not confusing.
Lawd im padding up my ankles as we speak!! Lmao. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2015 02:31 pm Title: Fools Goal
I love Michael's little commentary within the story, I don't think it's confusing at all. It's hilarious.
I don't like Mena. She seems superficial and materialistic. Michael is a total mush for love.
I'm dying to know what this talent is so you need to come forth with the next chapter SOON!!!!!
<3<3
Author's Response:
Yayyyy I'm glad you like the commentary part. I was hoping it didn't confuse any one and felt like I was jumping around. Mena is a gold digger and Michaelnis blinded by love. It gets him into a lot of trouble. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2015 05:15 pm Title: Fools Goal
Now, straight up I have to say this. The only time I like the sun is when it's cold outside. I love it then. Other than that, I'm not a lover of the sun. I guess it's because I'm obsessed with the moon and all things moon related. Yeah, I'm a sun hater I think. That's awful right? Yeah, the coffee is something I'd miss too. Gonna have to make some in the morning, cuz now I'm craving!
I wonder. Is he a gigolo? Is he like Christopher Tracy!?!?! I'm ready to find out that's for sure.
and why is he daddy? Omg
Please, I need more of this because I need to know.
WHAT IS HAPPENING!?!?
Also, Mena needs to hush. They've been to a party every week. Let the man do what he loves. Shit, don't make me do it.
IM GONNA DO IT
Mena likes to party all the time
party all the time
party all the tiiiiiiiiime
Is he gonna drop her? Why is he daddy? I need answers and a new chapter by like, Sunday. Or next Monday :D
It'd be nice but you know I won't rush you or threaten you!
Maybe <3
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooo. Yes she does. That song is so cringe worthy yet so of the times. Lol. Michael is daddy because you will come to learn he has little ones in the present. He'll be daddy at least once in the way you reference though. We'll see. ;) <333