Reviewer: Abifromthegail Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2023 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 9

First couple of chapters were rocky but girl you got me hooked why did you stop writing I'm too invested ????

Reviewer: Lania2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 04:50 am Title: Chapter 6

Well this is not to end well

Reviewer: Lania2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 04:08 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a great start I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 02:29 am Title: Chapter 9

The next one is going to be interesting ....

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

Finally they admitted their feelings for each other and oooh a bold Michael you go mike! Lol. Also just a small advice if you could separate the conversation into lines here and there it's hard to read as huge chapter. I wonder what mj is going to do. Great chapter 😄

Author's Response:

Thanks! I was trying to figure out a way for it to be easier to read

Author's Response:

Thanks! I was trying to figure out a way for it to be easier to read

Reviewer: marje143 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2016 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 8

I am glad you back l know sometimes thing get crazy but l love this story l can't wait see them get together just keep it coming

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2016 06:00 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh I'm so glad you're back! I was thinking you'd given up on this story. I love how Mike is able to be there for her or even just call her to check on her. That is just so sweet! I can't wait to see them get together!

Reviewer: KNM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really well written; great job! :)