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Reviewer: NerdandMichaelJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:54 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh gosh this chapter was so heartbreaking 💔

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 10:41 am Title: Chapter 7

I am in love with this story! Although this chapter did make me cry a little bit. I hope more chapters will follow soon!

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

Omg you back things will work out just believe in God and he will help you. Anyway it so sad that her mother die l would like to hear Michael  though 😊😃

Reviewer: gottobethere2016 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying this story so far!! Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2016 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see this story is back and aw he helped draw that are for her mum, that is adorable 😄

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 5

It about time l have been waiting for long time  l would like  hear Michael P.O.V love your story 



Author's Response: Sorry I had really bad writers block

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2015 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 3

aw i like that she meet janet and made a new friend in her! and layota seems nice so far lol, can't wait to read more don't take too long pls (joke).

 

Reviewer: alwayslovemikey Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2015 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Give me moreeeee lol I love how it's during MJ's younger years :) he's so sweet . I know birdie will love Cali.

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2015 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):)):):)

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2015 12:02 am Title: Chapter 2

Lol yeah I think that she will like California too. That was so cool of Michael to find her her stuffed tiger for her. I think that his and her will be friends. Great job. I can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1

I like this story. It really sucks that her mom is dying and she lost her dad. I think that she will like California. Can't wait for her to meet Michael XD

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 03:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooh finally someone does a story based in the J5 wra, is the pace going to be slow between em? Cant wait to read more.



Author's Response: I LOOOOVVVEE the J5 era I don't know what it is, but it's something about Michael and those Jacksons as teenagers

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