Date: Sep 19, 2015 08:23 pm Title: CHAPTER 13
I would feel happy flying in Michael's plane, too!
Date: Sep 19, 2015 08:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 12
Wow! I would be elated if all of the Jackson's accepted me that fast.
Date: Sep 19, 2015 12:42 am Title: CHAPTER 11
Mothers seem to always know when things are happening with their children.
Date: Sep 19, 2015 12:19 am Title: CHAPTER 10
Yes, I think that you really do need to find out who you are dealing with.
Date: Sep 18, 2015 11:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 9
Good job! I would like the rest of the chapter!
Date: Sep 18, 2015 11:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 8
What a wonderful, breathtaking, beyond imagination, date! A once in a lifetime experience! Great job with the visual imagery! I enjoy the style of writing. The more you write the better you will become at it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your comments!
I really am glad you enjoy this story!
Date: Sep 18, 2015 09:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 7
What a dream! I would love to have that dream come true! Good descriptive writing.
Date: Sep 18, 2015 07:10 pm Title: CHAPTER 6
Chapter five was my favorite chapter so far, too. We will see how this one goes... michael is starting to get closer. Good job.
Date: Sep 18, 2015 06:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 5
Very nice dinner meeting.
Date: Sep 17, 2015 09:45 pm Title: CHAPTER 2
Nice introduction between Michael and Tricia.
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2015 06:55 am Title: CHAPTER 1
Girl, this is one of the best stories I've read. You know I've loved this since I found it on the other site. THANK YOU for posting again. I adooooore it and your writing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate that compliment.
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2015 03:55 pm Title: CHAPTER 33
Oh my. I felt so bad for Trish. Her insecurities where founded. Brooke wasn't all sugar and cream like she was making out to be and then shoving it in her face at first so I was glad she made assurances that there was nothing to worry about. Now in traipses Dirty Diana. She on the other hand I know won't go silently into the night.
More soon!!!!
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