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Date: Sep 20, 2015 05:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 21

Oh no! Please let aunt netta be wrong! But, she probably is right!

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Date: Sep 20, 2015 04:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 20

Shre definitely needed to be prepared for her presentation at the meeting.

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Date: Sep 20, 2015 04:37 pm Title: CHAPTER 19

She has to remind Mike about birth control because her body probably has re adjusted and is real fertile right now. she has to talk to him about her feelings about his sister Rebbie. She shouldn't talk to much about Travis. 

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Date: Sep 20, 2015 04:08 pm Title: CHAPTER 18

She has to let Travis go. But, I don't trust going to Travis' house. She should just call him on the phone.

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Date: Sep 20, 2015 03:45 pm Title: CHAPTER 17

Probably won't get much rest.

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Date: Sep 20, 2015 03:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 16

Now, all she has to do is remember Travis' name. Then she needs to break off the relationship with him so that she can have a life after him.

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Date: Sep 20, 2015 03:30 am Title: CHAPTER 14

Yes, you have to let go off the old, to make room for the new! Tricia has to let go of Travis, in order for her to move on with Michael.

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Date: Sep 19, 2015 08:23 pm Title: CHAPTER 13

I would feel happy flying in Michael's plane, too!

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Date: Sep 19, 2015 08:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 12

Wow! I would be elated if all of the Jackson's accepted me that fast.

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Date: Sep 19, 2015 12:42 am Title: CHAPTER 11

Mothers seem to always know when things are happening with their children.

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Date: Sep 19, 2015 12:19 am Title: CHAPTER 10

Yes, I think that you really do need to find out who you are dealing with.

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Date: Sep 18, 2015 11:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 9

Good job! I would like the rest of the chapter!

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Date: Sep 18, 2015 11:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 8

What a wonderful, breathtaking, beyond imagination, date! A once in a lifetime experience! Great job with the visual imagery! I enjoy the style of writing. The more you write the better you will become at it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of your comments! 

I really am glad you enjoy this story!

 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2015 09:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 7

What a dream! I would love to have that dream come true! Good descriptive writing.

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Date: Sep 18, 2015 07:10 pm Title: CHAPTER 6

Chapter five was my favorite chapter so far, too. We will see how this one goes... michael is starting to get closer. Good job.

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