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Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Secret...

Why have I never heard this Michael Jackson song before? It's so hauntingly beautiful. Made me wanna cry. This story is very good also. (:

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2012 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The End....

This is so fantastic so glad James finally got what he is due thanks so much!



Author's Response:

No Thank YOU for reading. Withour my readers, none of my ff would be up.

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2012 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Enemies Have Arrived....

I thought your other stories were fantastic this is the creme of the crop love it so much!



Author's Response:

Really? Wow! Thanks...I guess it's nice to see Michael in a different light

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2012 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Shocking News...

I have just started reading this and I am so in love with this. It is fantastic as anything you always write is I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

you are very sweet. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2012 04:29 am Title: Author's Note....

Oh my goodness, I missed this story with a passion and I'm so glad that you're doing bonus chapters as well.

Thank you so much <33



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that. I hope you enjoy the lost chapters. First chapter is up now. :)

No, thank you :))

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2012 07:37 pm Title: Author's Note....

Excellent!



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy the Lost Chapters :)

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2012 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

Always did like this story!!!! Hated when it ended

Looking forward to more!!



Author's Response:

I was wondering what happened to you. I'm glad to know you are still here. :)

I hope you enjoy the Lost Chapters :) xoxo and I hope you had a happy new year :)

Reviewer: makeadifference2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2012 06:24 am Title: Author's Note....

YAY!!  I did miss this story and look forward to the new chapters.  

Thank you very much.  



Author's Response:

YAYY!!! I'm glad to hear that. I hope you enjoy the Lost Chapters :)

No, Thank you! :)

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2012 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning...

Yeah this story is going in my favorite story section. i honestly have read this stroy like 6 times. just thinking of Michael as a prince....."MELT". great job. you have just recieved a fan.



Author's Response:

LOL oh yes, I could easily fall for this prince and now king. I'm glad you enjoyed it and enjoyed it so much that you came back to read it again. Thank you so much for your support. I am planning to post "The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters" this week...read what you didn't get to read on the original and updates after marriage and baby. Michael and Annalissa are back including baby Alyssa. I hope to see you there!! :) xoxo

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2011 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The End....

What an intense chapter girl. But he ending was beautiful! And once again, this is my favorite fairytale with an adult content lol. AWESOME job girl!!! I hope you never stop writing ;)


So I’m a mind reader, right? lol….I guess that is because we are about the same age, I was born in 1984 :) I also do have good memories from my childhood, but I was growing up to a different music, and different culture. I will open one more secret for you lol. You probably noticed already that English isn’t my native language; sometimes my choice of words or the grammar may be funny to read lol. I was born and raised in Ukraine, and moved to US just about eight years ago. So it was one hell of experience learning for me how to spell correctly in English. Once, I wrote an email to my college professor, and I wrote “shit” instead of “sheet of paper” lmao…and there are bunch of words that I made a complete fool of myself lol, and I still do :)…..So when I moved to US my life has changed completely!....BTW we are neighbors by state. You live in NY, right?


p.s. I hope your little surgery went well. You probably not be able to eat after that for a couple of days.  Get well soon <33



Author's Response: I always love 'hearing' you say that "my favorite fairytale with an adult content" LOL I love it! Thank you so much on your lovely compliment. I really appreciate it. It means so much to me that people actually enjoy my stories. It started as a curiosity and then your responses gave me the confidence to continue. So I bow down to you guys. Yes, you are a mind reader LOL. You are in my head. Well, I guess that makes sense that we think alike because we are the same age or maybe is because you are my neighbor and you might be peeking thru my window..hmmm...-__- lol j/k. That was an interesting story about you moving to the USA not too long ago. To be honest, I would have not noticed, your writing english is very well. But I know what you mean about different life and culture. But I have always been an explorer in my heart. LOL about the professor slip, that's funny and so embarrasing. I hope you had a good come back after that and don't feel bad about the mispellings. I speak and write english on an every day basis and I still make mistakes, most of the time because I type too fast but still, it doesn't look good when you catch it later LOL I do live in NY, I live in the city so glad to know I have cool people living so close to me :D I'm better than I was on Wednesday. I'm recovering well. I am still having trouble eating certain things but I'm much better. Thank you so much for asking.

Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2011 12:27 am Title: Chapter 28 - The End....

Aww that was such beautiful ending :) Thank you for writing this story :)



Author's Response: No. Thank you for reading it. Without my readers, I would have never had the guts to sit on my computer and write any story. You guys are the reason there was an Annalissa and Michael. :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2011 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The End....

Awwww man it's over? Like really?

I love this story, it always kept me at the edge of my seat! Great great story!!

Author's Response: Yes, really. Sorry. Never meant for this story to be a long one. But I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading. :D

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2011 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The End....

Awwww a beautiful ending for a beautiful story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much and thank you for reading. I wrote this story and my other one for you guys to enjoy it and to keep you on the edge.

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2011 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The End....

Awe what a beautiful ending I enjoyed reading it may they live happily ever after forever :)



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it. Thank you so much for reading it.

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2011 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 27 - The Soldier of Love....

It’s me again :)


Earlier I was asking you which movie was that scene from. So I found it :) OMG…I have never, ever seen this version of Zorro before lol. In my previous review I said that guy sounded like Antonio Banderas LMAO ….But it is Antonio Banderas, I may not recognized his look, but his accent is something you may not forget haha….. sexy, right?


I can’t believe I have never seen that movie, but the older version of Zorro with Alain Delon. 


Thank you, thank you so much for putting that video here, because I would never found out about it, and about my favorite actor lol  :) <3<3



Author's Response: oh it's you again LOL LMFAO so you found the movie....good! Yes, they are funny in it, watch it, is good. Antonio's accent is sexy but he reminds of my father so I am not allowed to say he is sexy LOL is wrong in so many levels. I have seen the old one with Alain Delon, I am obsessed with classic movies, is so good. You are very welcome. <333

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